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Thank you for the comment though.

So, this was not intended to be to social or political. The whole point is they are highschoolers who've gone through a radical physiological and even psychological change, and they are fighting. I want the tension to exist for story purposes, but I also want both characters dug in. Highschoolers are kind of dumb, and often unempathetic, even to people they care about.

That said, I do intend to create some duality here, but don't have any formal plans.

In Jon's defense, I think he was trying to be deliberately hyperbolic there. But wishing stone's gonna wishing stone, what can you do?

It's quite a presumptious statement there. I'm sure there are plenty of boys at the school who are apathetic about the cheerleaders' sleepover, if they even hear about it at all. They probably have other things to do, like hang out with their friends, or work on computer programs, or do stuff that fits their interests.

While Karen is not wrong here's she is also not right. Karen is dare I say acting toxic lyrics feminine here. This is one of the reasons V.P. Haris lost to Trump in 2024. Masculinity is treated like a problem, without empathy for the guys.

Of course it not a problem for a girl to be a girl. But a guy turned into a girl would of course experience dismorphia, at least at first. Karen would cry bloody murder if a girl was turned into a guy against her will. What is needed is perspective for Karen, and for Jon and oppertunity to grieve and processes trauma.

Counciling could help for Jon and Trauma Processing. I've heard of men who went in for routine surgery and the hospital screwed up and did SRS on them. Life was hard for them, but they were living and not just surviving. The men I read about. years and years ago, were married and their marriages were in the process of being amicably dissolved.

Just as an observation, Karen and Jon seem to embody the Tiaju/Ying-Yang -Progression/Action (Yang) for Karen, and Stillness/Stasis for Jon (Ying).

Curious to see what you have in store here.

Maybe, just maybe the reason the wish was not granted is cause the stone was split, so it is possible that both of them need to make the same wish or they need to have physical contact with each other or something similar, cause from the last few sentences it does look like if they are in a similar mind set, aka mad at each other they could affect the world around them.

This is very cool, I can't wait to see where this goes

Can still see this going into several directions. 1. He still has to have sex with him. 2. His sexy neighbor rescues him by paying for him but now Jon has to repay her with sex.

Nice, I hope this is the start of a nice harem adventure for Jon, collecting girls as he embraces his new succubus life

Hope this ends up being either Karyn or Sarah’s house

Brilliant. Excited for more!

Really good. I love this branch and I hope to see more.

@belchest if you are still around, are you planning to continue working on these?

Great, please continue.

What a plot twist!

If I had a nickel for every time someone insulted Elon musk for his dumb ass decision to rename Twitter on here, I have two nickels… which isn’t a lot but it’s a little weird it happened twice…

Anyways pretty interesting start, I can’t wait to see where you go with this :)

Great game! I wish I could read the whole thing.

What does sample of innocence mean?

There was good stuff in "Brave," but it was basically three different movies struggling to figure out which movie they were actually gonna be. Apparently there was a bunch of behind-the-scenes drama and it was "noted" to death by studio executives several times over, which explains a lot.

Plus, anything with Mumford & Sons on the soundtrack is my eternal sworn enemy.

Urgh had to update. Mixed up Greg with Adam. Adam was the initial name I had in mind but Gregory makes a better werewolf name :)

Yeah I wasn’t the biggest fan of brave.

For me brave is in the heart of the simpsons syndrome of tv. You could replace that characters with the simpsons and it might even work better. The way they treated male characters was awful.

I liked Brave as well. Transformation movies are always better then if they did not have transformtion.

Possibly, I'd have to go back and try to remember where I was heading with it.

Heh, considering how hard you're ragging on it, it seems you're not a big fan of Brave, huh. Honestly, I personally like the movie myself.

Any interest on continuing this branch @Gooose ?

@Gooose well you could always write it down on a note on who is swapped with who if you decide on a rotation.

Not a fan of how cruel this has become.

My thought was Shivani, but I wasn't sure if it would be simple one to one swaps, or if there would be some sort of rotation, like, Jon's in Shivani, Shivani's in Jon's dad, Jon's dad is in Lillian, Lillian is in Mikey, etc. Not sure if I'll continue this branch anytime soon, managing massive swaps is kind of hard to keep track of.

You, uh, you wrote the same paragraph ("Linda quickly realized that") twice, only the first time starts with "Seeing his reaction". 😅

So if im guessing correctly Mikey becomes the father or rather a father figure
and Jon the mother?

This was a fantatic chapter and was really happy there was so much to read here. Love how the wishes and the situation seems to be snowballing out of control. Cannot wait to see how Mikey tries to come up with a way to cover this up with Jon. Always very excited to see your posts!

This one seemed a lot smaller when writting and a lot bigger when posting.
Anyways should be the last one for a good while, most of the "recent" chapters have been written a few weeks ago and since then my life has been Factorio only, and with Space Age, it probably won't change for a while.

using stairs like that doesn't seems smart... what could happens, I think, is Mark ends up falling, hits her head, amnesia and/or shakes loose that girl's personality - or thinks she's her

Very fun. I love a good life-swap story!

Who did you have in mind that would swap with Jon @Gooose ?

@Endless Yeah, Gus is wearing a protective charm out of habit that has protected his memories somewhat from all the changes so far. That said, he didn't know Stephanie or Esme or Richard McMillan, so he really didn't notice any of those changes.

No firm idea, no. Just a handful of notions. I think Edgar would swap his role with someone that would have the knock on effect of Tiffany no longer being a cheerleader, to clear the way for Karyn discovering she's somehow the head cheerleader of the new reality with Sarah as her deputy, despite never being swapped directly. Other than that, nothing concrete.

Do you already have in mind who to swap them with or are you still thinking about it?

@Gooose with original do you mean when Esme was still Stephanie?

Ack! I have been summoned! Guess I'd better get to writing...

This was going somewhere interesting. Hope to see more.

Love these kind of stories, can’t wait to see what you come up with

Loving this!

Nothing like a good costume story, do you have ideas on the costumes yet!

Curse your sudden but inevitable disappearance!

Thanks! I don’t write a lot of stories but I do love a good costume story.

Always love a good costume story and this is wonderfully set-up! Really like how you're writing Karyn so far and looking forward to seeing what sort of trouble they get cornered into! Great work!

He more or less remembers the original reality, but also has an entire new set of memories for the new changing reality, and they're battling it out in his head. Athena and Zoe slept in their little protective circle, so won't have had their memories tampered by any wishes that happened the previous night, but will be vulnerable to any that get made once they leave it.

This series is great, I hope you keep adding to it

Nice I love this branch Gooose