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Whoops, sit down at tables. In restaurants for example, there’d be difficulty navigating though close-together tables without knocking things over. Or, as I was sorta trying to get at, being unable to cross one’s legs under a low table—there’s just not the room.

Struggled to sit under tables? How do you mean?

Hi Alojz, it’s good to hear from you again! I usually keep descriptions like this kinda-vague, partly because strict measurements aren’t my thing, partly to leave creative freedom for anyone wanting to follow up—so no worries there about getting it wrong. That said, I was envisioning that Sue still has a relatively slender upper body, but hips wide enough to be genuinely inconvenient; I’ve known girls who’ve struggled to wear pants or sit under tables, and wanted to channel that. So... Hips wide as they could possibly be, without delving into the realm of being unnatural or unattractive? (Sorry I can’t be more precise)

Btw I was planning to let Jon get away with this one. You seemed not to spare him 😉

Great to see you add to this! Maybe it inspired me to return as well ;)

How large were you thinking for Sue's hips? Like, your episode conveys that they're generally larger but if you were to be more specific? I don't mean I need measurements in terms of inches more just I'd hate to write followups where I incorrectly assume Jon's new figure is narrower or wider than you have imagined it here.

D’awww, that’s really sweet. Thanks aashen!

Always glad to see more of your work. Looking forward to see what other branches get a bump from you

Been meaning to add to some older episodes. Found this one and really liked the premise, so here we go.

Is Nick actually Megan's twin at this point? He dropped the medallion after the effect went up to his waist.

When is this going to continue?? This is the most devastating cliffhanger on the whole site!

Damn, it's almost been 2 years, fuck me man

So good to see you back at it Ekempo. This should be a fun, I am wondering what this did to Jon and his intentions going forward.

I think there's plenty of room to write still before that even becomes an issue. And I feel like the best way to handle that is in some form of the compulsions he's already under - the inability to show frustration, swear, etc. in front of others. Can't complain about the way he's being treated while he's with someone, and may quickly run out of time alone being a mother / housewife / what have you. And I would certainly consider wishing away someone's behavior to be a form of complaining about it.

> What he means to ask for and what he gets are likely to be different things.

Yup, totally. Or he knows that he's asking for something kinda shit (being the masochist he is) but doesn't realise just how bad it'll be to actually live with it.

I'm struggling a bit to come up with ways to prevent him making clarifying wishes fixing things without removing the way of wishing from him altogether.

I mean things like the wish to be shorter going so far as to make him 5'1", kinda getting off on the thought of dealing with it, without actually dealing with the reality of it yet. The potential for things to go farther than he originally intended are super prevalent in the latest wish, as well as in wishes about his husband. What he means to ask for and what he gets are likely to be different things.

@aashen don't worry, it was mostly a joke - you assumed correctly and I am a man. I just spent quite a lot of time thinking about what those things would really feel like!

BTW which "misinterpretations" do you mean?

I did assume, in hindsight I shouldn't have done that and I apologize.

As far as what I enjoyed, and I kinda suspect I now know why, this writing doesn't fit the bill for r/menwritingwomen. It's descriptive in a way that lets you feel and understand what the character is going through.

Also, the premise it starts with is much more realistic than many of the other paths you see on Fiction Branches in terms of what someone here might actually do with a magic rock. John has his fantasy, he knows what he wants to experience. However he's also letting his hormones take control and doing things that, while he is enjoying them now, deep down he knows he's really throwing himself for a loop. I can't wait to see the consequences come crashing down.

I'm also enjoying the misinterpretations along the way. Shrugging off the 'little' mistakes that will turn into life changing consequences without really thinking it all through is great.

You didn't aske me, but I would like to add that what I really like is your writing style, especially the fact that you play with Jons perversion of somehow being stucked, but wanting to feel that it is all his fault. You transmit the feeling that he knoews that it could be only a fantasy and a perversion which could go "away" (at least momentarly) if he masturbated, but instead he insisted trying to life his fantasy life. Fantasy which includes AP; Big Boobs, Sumbimissiveness and being stuck in the life of a mature woman. I really hope that you will get some time to progress further, with more branches and more perversions, like one where he wants to try out lovers, affairs (with virgin boys would be the top), or some more non classical jobs like pornstar.

feel free to add alt versions if youd like

feel free to add alt versions if youd like

Entertaining as usual

Yeah, it's kinda hard because I think it takes a particular type of writer to be into that lol. I will definitely think about it too, but it has also been a very very long time for me.

That last one is certainly important, because it certainly is something that bugs me about a lot of the 'Switched Stones' branches. I think if I ever write for more of those branches, I'll make sure Jon catches on pretty quick that the replacement stone isn't the original stone.

I appreciate it! I tried to reboot it here, but it didn’t really take off. I would honestly hand the concept over to you and maybe in the future I’ll add to it. I just know I won’t write as much as a used to. I mean it’s been yeeears

Can’t wait to see what comes next!

Ah a great shame but also great to hear from you! I think it was a very fresh take on the idea of body swapping and transformation in general. It created a lot of room for really interesting and creative transformations and considering how the fabric of perception/reality works

Sincerely appreciated. I was working on two pieces and then realized that combining some of the parts I didn't like from either made something about which I was really pleased. Now to figure out what to do with that remaining 1.5 pieces. :)

Also, are you assuming I'm a guy?

@aashen What did you enjoy about my work?

I second that. I would love to see him continue the work

Glad you liked it

I love accidental swaps like this! Also, very well written. Thanks for adding to the story.

I was wondering when we'd get more of this! I'm glad to see you're still pushing forward with the story. Another fantastic chapter :)

I want ekempo back, but I guess I'll have to start contributing now since he's been gone for over a year

Was thinking Tiffany was going to get a himbo curse, and now steve and biff are gonna be cursed but one will be a bimbo and one a himbo. figured it be a good place to make a choice.

Maybe Jon should be a girl where it counts, even while in control at this point. :-P

Lucky neither of them lost their ring in the first two years. That happens.

do you think people would be aware of the bimbo/himbo curses? or would it be more of a secret to normies and everyone just thinks the host and bimbo/himbo is another person?

it be interesting to if the stronger a bimbo the slower turning back to normal physically worked so youd be stuck with her body.

Interesting setting! Can0t wait to see how it will develop!

Nice chapter, short but well-written and interesting.

Short, but very sweet chapter. I especially enjoyed how you subtly changed the names in order to better represent each boy's new identity.

Fixed!

Thank you Gopher! Reading that my kink is appreciated only gives me fuel to continue to write more. I have another few posts in mind, I only need the time to write them down. However if someone would like to add a path it would be great, sharing my story with other fellas and building something together would be wonderful.

Great Idea!

I find this so adorable for some reason

This is a great storyline!

It's an interesting twist in the story I really like this milf branch and I hope you can continue it

Love the idea of a "Mandatory Milf". Liked every chapter so far. Must onestly say that for my tastes I prefer the submissive routes a bit more. It would be great if he would wish himself into a pornactress Milf. That would be hot as hell (but love to read everything written by you).

Interesting but what had you in mind should have happened afterwards?