Recent comments

@Alojz, so I've got a medium-term vision of where I want this train to go, probably around the next 5 chapters. Without giving too much away, the last chapter I have planned out will be the next chapter to feature a third character in addition to Jon and Sarah. After that point, jump in as you please. Before then I'd just ask not to add to the most recent episode, but branching from anything earlier won't affect what I'm doing.

Really enjoying this @Cork. How do you feel about people chiming in?

Oh yeah, I can totally take on the chapter where Jon acquires Sue's attitude to her own femininity. That said, I'd be keen to still have several episodes of him to setting up some more "perks"/"traps" for his future life, while wondering if he should or shouldn't go for it. Personally I have two in mind I've been thinking about for a while now that I wouldn't like us to miss!

I mean, at the least, he might have made sure that Sue's not attracted to women but he's not specified anything about his attraction to men so that would need to be taken care of. I'm pretty keen for scheduling that transition to happen a little after David has returned home. It would let us have both some juicy awkward time when his husband appears home while Jon is still as attracted to him as he would be as a boy. And then I'd love to have an episode dedicated to him just anxiously counting down the seconds until Sue's heterosexuality and appreciation of her life partner kicks in, with it hitting him like a bag of bricks.

Eager to see where you go from here. :) I feel like the chapter where Jon finally becomes Sue is going to require your touch, but if you have any ideas for a final intermediate chapter, I might write that.

Can't wait to see where it goes!

Alrighty, thanks a bunch! This introduced me to lots of fun storylines, and I’m glad to see that people are enjoying my stuff.

I'm actually a big fan of both where you've been taking Mandatory MILF and Sarah Simulator. For Simulator I think you've done a bang up job in painting the image of someone trapped in that specific kind of video game as that specific avatar, and am mostly curious where you're taking it since its hard to conceptualize where it goes next (which I suppose is part of the problem!) after Jon escapes the menu.

For Mandatory MILF I just love the whole unique scenario and everything that's come from it. I'd suggest either following up with the Boss route and wishing for the next step after becoming a CEO, wishing or driving to an office setting to properly leverage the behavior compulsions. Or following up on the living clothes branch where the clothes have been granted communication, playing off of the new character there and how their intentions differ from Jon's even though he's responsible for them having them.

Speculating on how social media is effected by the stone's magic and the range limitation is something that only occasionally comes up in in Fiction Branches. Some others have similarly noted that people's social media accounts wouldn't change when people are changed by the stone, so I thought I'd do this little take on that premise here. A lot has changed online since Fiction Branches and You Are What You WIsh began, and more recent episodes reflect such changes.

I'm happy to have others build off of anything I do.

A lot of my stories were intended to be continued by others. I tend to get burnt out continuing to write upon my own ideas or I just have too many of them that I can never decide on one. Honestly, I might come back to them if someone continued them.

To be honest, I might have to branch out of it. I wanted to give it a try, but it has hurt my characters way too much and introduced elements I didn't really want at the start

Sorry I put you in a bad situation. Thank you for incorporating it in the storyline though.

Most of my stories were posted a long time ago, but how about this? https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1041

Sure it would. Just faster. The situation looked impossible to me. I didn't want to invoke time travel so early but I didn't see anything I could write in response without trapping my characters:(

Well I do want to see these continued

https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/8088
https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/3131445

https://fictionbranches.net/fb/path/17552 or https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1444536 for cat girls

So if the tree sent her forward a couple of hours then the sun never actually set right?

I’ve had writers block. If you ever wanted to add to anything of mine

The wording is very precise.

The sun has to set not night time arrives.

I wrote one https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/455197 there's other stuff but he does grow boobs.

And there's also this one https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/21686

Love this story line

I'm glad. Lol I felt like it was walking the line between mockingly ironic and eye rolling pun, but went for it.

i really like the last name you gave her lol

I love the direction this one is going :3

thumbs up

While I think I'll still use the setting and character in my other chapter, I like the pacing of you branch much more. I also got some ideas. Thanks for the add.

Thanks. tbh. I have nothing planned. I had a mental image of a particular small town I'd passed through before, and I wanted to set the stage with some delinquent getting on the bad side of P&R.

Pretty original intro. I'm looking forward to w/e you had planned :)

thanks. Was hoping other people would post more on it to and it branch out a bit from just my own ideas though.

Thanks, thought both of the two storyline templates you started seemed really interesting, and very well detailed and thought out I'm really enjoying the P&R thread

really loving that youre running with this. you're taking this in a more interesting place then i could. c:

I love the idea of coming to work wanting to complain but being stuck saying you're happy and love your job. I can just imagine them passing them over for a promotion since they are so insistent on being happy/content with their job.

Excelent template story. And for some reason i was thinking in a asian girl right from the start lol.

Oooh interested in where this is going!

@Catprog

Sure if you wanted. I left it vague so people had space to do what they wanted on it. I try to set concepts with a good base, but leave it open enough for people to explore.

Would punishment include non human roles?

Thank you, I will take it into consideration

Jesus, that's brutal.

Why did you put a picture of a girl with brown hair?

zozo got got

ooh, fun

You have the pronouns all over the place - Karyn is she and her unless you are going to change her sex too? Only Plays use that Name: Dialogue format, it is enough to use a more natural prose format

i love this hope you keep going

thanks for adding

Thanks for adding

I really like your work

Pfff. Just realized I changed Jake’s name halfway through the episode. Fixed it now, but I can’t believe it took me so long to catch that.

I am intrigued.

Oh ho, and so this perverted journey begins anew. I'm very excited for this.

This kind of part swapping I can really really get behind. I like this a lot. I wonder what else they will try adding to him. And I wonder how long he will keep those B-cups. Also what happens if he wears clothes incorrectly. Like say, putting a bra or shirt on backwards. Or wearing clothing that has been modified. Like having other things sewn into them like extra sleeves, or bra cups.

Thanks!