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Sorry I put you in a bad situation. Thank you for incorporating it in the storyline though.

Most of my stories were posted a long time ago, but how about this? https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1041

Sure it would. Just faster. The situation looked impossible to me. I didn't want to invoke time travel so early but I didn't see anything I could write in response without trapping my characters:(

Well I do want to see these continued

https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/8088
https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/3131445

https://fictionbranches.net/fb/path/17552 or https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/1444536 for cat girls

So if the tree sent her forward a couple of hours then the sun never actually set right?

I’ve had writers block. If you ever wanted to add to anything of mine

The wording is very precise.

The sun has to set not night time arrives.

I wrote one https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/455197 there's other stuff but he does grow boobs.

And there's also this one https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/21686

Love this story line

I'm glad. Lol I felt like it was walking the line between mockingly ironic and eye rolling pun, but went for it.

i really like the last name you gave her lol

I love the direction this one is going :3

thumbs up

While I think I'll still use the setting and character in my other chapter, I like the pacing of you branch much more. I also got some ideas. Thanks for the add.

Thanks. tbh. I have nothing planned. I had a mental image of a particular small town I'd passed through before, and I wanted to set the stage with some delinquent getting on the bad side of P&R.

Pretty original intro. I'm looking forward to w/e you had planned :)

thanks. Was hoping other people would post more on it to and it branch out a bit from just my own ideas though.

Thanks, thought both of the two storyline templates you started seemed really interesting, and very well detailed and thought out I'm really enjoying the P&R thread

really loving that youre running with this. you're taking this in a more interesting place then i could. c:

I love the idea of coming to work wanting to complain but being stuck saying you're happy and love your job. I can just imagine them passing them over for a promotion since they are so insistent on being happy/content with their job.

Excelent template story. And for some reason i was thinking in a asian girl right from the start lol.

Oooh interested in where this is going!

@Catprog

Sure if you wanted. I left it vague so people had space to do what they wanted on it. I try to set concepts with a good base, but leave it open enough for people to explore.

Would punishment include non human roles?

Thank you, I will take it into consideration

Jesus, that's brutal.

Why did you put a picture of a girl with brown hair?

zozo got got

ooh, fun

You have the pronouns all over the place - Karyn is she and her unless you are going to change her sex too? Only Plays use that Name: Dialogue format, it is enough to use a more natural prose format

i love this hope you keep going

thanks for adding

Thanks for adding

I really like your work

Pfff. Just realized I changed Jake’s name halfway through the episode. Fixed it now, but I can’t believe it took me so long to catch that.

I am intrigued.

Oh ho, and so this perverted journey begins anew. I'm very excited for this.

This kind of part swapping I can really really get behind. I like this a lot. I wonder what else they will try adding to him. And I wonder how long he will keep those B-cups. Also what happens if he wears clothes incorrectly. Like say, putting a bra or shirt on backwards. Or wearing clothing that has been modified. Like having other things sewn into them like extra sleeves, or bra cups.

Thanks!

This is an interesting concept, and I really like the way you wrote it from Linda’s perspective. Nice work!

Not too much experience writing in it myself, but I think it’d work really well with this storyline.

@Enjeubleu what do you think about changing the narration to first person pov?

I don't suppose it is going to take the wish literally?

Excellent choice.

The second one from the first comment.

Or her?

So something like her, more like her, or her?

Whoops, sit down at tables. In restaurants for example, there’d be difficulty navigating though close-together tables without knocking things over. Or, as I was sorta trying to get at, being unable to cross one’s legs under a low table—there’s just not the room.

Struggled to sit under tables? How do you mean?

Hi Alojz, it’s good to hear from you again! I usually keep descriptions like this kinda-vague, partly because strict measurements aren’t my thing, partly to leave creative freedom for anyone wanting to follow up—so no worries there about getting it wrong. That said, I was envisioning that Sue still has a relatively slender upper body, but hips wide enough to be genuinely inconvenient; I’ve known girls who’ve struggled to wear pants or sit under tables, and wanted to channel that. So... Hips wide as they could possibly be, without delving into the realm of being unnatural or unattractive? (Sorry I can’t be more precise)