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Well, not bad thoughts for a chapter of the early 21st century. Yes, the plague made Europeans realize that our life is rather short. But it was curiosity and more rational thinking that created science.

Nice chapter.

What a twist...

This chapter explains a lot about Karyn...

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He can be anything he wants to be. And she's controlling what he wants to be. Except it sure doesn't sound like he wants to be this.

Emit is just asking for cosmic retribution.

Well spotted. I think I noticed at some point that "Falcon" and "Fusion" were both 6-letter names that started with "F" and ended in "on," so in a world in which cars are fusion-powered, it's more likely that Ford would have revived the "Falcon" name in the U.S. at some point.

Ha, good question. I'll try to take that into account if I ever get inspired to write more in this storyline. (Wow, 2018... imagine if this was taking place in 2020!)

So once they crossed the 'border' Sarah would no longer be attracted to nerds like Leonard, right?

I love that comment at the end. The car that is not fusion powered is called a Fusion. Brilliant!

if you mean the outline or tree that is on CYOC, there already is one. It's in the links at the top of every chapter. "Outline from here".

Ok. Thanks for your answer.

Harem time?

He knows. Start protocol delta17.

Nice, i notice the part "oh ok, madison family into sarah" but i also notice the change you decided to do. Well i think this will make everyone happy xD

I think my two favorite things to do on FB are to change people into Sarah, and to change Sarah into other people. Honestly, this story started out as very Jon-centric in my head, and Sarah wasn't going to change at all. But then I decided to treat it more as a Sarah story, so it's going to get the best of both worlds. I've got a few Jon elements that I definitely want to insert into this narrative, but Sarah's definitely getting more attention than she was originally going to.

And now the effects of the wish are on a rampage.

That's a really intriguing story, it's sees Sarah is gonna absorb more and more of the madison family at the same time she gonna try to manipulate then.

That's really intriguing. I'm anxious to see more of this

This seem really interesting.

But he just said "you're Jon and you're a guy!"

Enjoying this story path, interested to see where it goes.

So has Emit gone off the path that would get him human?

It may be frelling late, but here's one: http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/recents/

Welcome back.

No worries! I've been thinking of continuing this but I wasn't sure if anyone would actually enjoy it so I'm glad to hear you'd be up for reading/writing(?) more!

I completely forgot about that. I'll try to fix it

I don't know if you want to use this element of the plot or not, but in this branch, Jon only remembers the stone as a faded dream, and the stones whereabouts are unknown. Perhaps the stone isn't really missing, but Jon isn't aware of it.

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Whoa! How did I miss this chapter? I check this site almost every day. Thanks for the add! I'll have to let this one stew, and see if any ideas come to me, but I really like the potential you've created here.

One of my favourite parts of the story

Welcome back

Fun fact: this isn't a month late.

This is like thirteen months late.

I'll be honest, I have no idea where this is going. I just got this scene in my head last night, and I had to write it out somehow.

👀hwell the, this is interesting

It seemed like a good place to leave it. It gives futures authors several different ways to handle the situation.

This is great. Hope they can find that rock soon and get off a quick clean up wish or these two are going to doing some interesting explaining.

Great stuff!

Oh god. Hopefully magic can fix this too. He hasn't even gotten breasts yet.

Good stuff though! I haven't written any further because I have no confience in my ability to write... well exactly what you're writing!

Just a note about my intent when writing the earlier stuff, I intended that men have boobs through the entire cycle just like women. You can do whatever you like though.

Why did he poke his tongue out?

nice nice

Thanks! If you have any suggestions, let me know!

Well a few ideas though i do hope to keep Jon and Biff exploring their relationship.

love to see this continued. Any plans for Jon in mind?

Nice one and thanks for all the chapters.