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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy it.

For what you mentionned, it's not an inconsistancy, I don't know if I will do something with it in the future so... Maybe spoiler ahead? It's nothing major anyway.

Jon and Emily are the same person, but for the game, Emily is the main character of the game and it can't treat her like a player, but it needs to have a template for what Jon as a player would like, and so, they are treated like 2 different persons. (That can change later if I have a better idea, but that's how I see it right now)

I also highly enjoy this thread. Thank you for the hard work! I may be wrong, but I think there may be one inconsistency with wishes introduced in "Jon wishes to be a video game protagonist" episode: Jon made a wish "I wish my life would become more like the life of a protagonist from a video game I would enjoy!". If the game does not consider Emily to be the same person as Jon, then this wish might not have been granted. After all, Jon referred to his life in the wish. Of course you may have plans to explain that down the road. I have some suspicions, as it seems other wishes: about not modifying mind, or having way out, also have not worked. And even if not, and this is inconsistency, I believe that it does not impact the current story in any considerable way. Thanks!

Thank you. As for Karyn, I'm not sure where this will go. I tend to let the characters write themselves, so I don't know in advance how they will turn out from here, but I do intend to have her abuse her power at some point, even if she might regret it later.

Bunnie,
I was going for some alliteration, as far as I am aware they have slightly different meanings, lissome meaning slim, lithe meaning more like flexible or supple

I love your story, please continue! An advice: I would like to see Karyn a little more evil and devious vs Jon/Emily. She has a great power and I would like she use it.

Hey! I'm really enjoying your role exchanger story! It's a great way to destress on a Sunday. I'd love to see where this goes. Are there any more swaps between people coming? Like Mikey and Sarah, the dad and a little girl? Those kind of chapters have appeared before but no one ever developed them. It's your story. I hope you're having as much fun as we are reading it! If you do choose those paths though, I'd love to see where they go! I'll be checking this story all day cus I'm so excited! Thanks for all your hard work!

@Ansem: In theory, it could edited so that he wished for her to be aware of the change as if she had been in ear shot.

12 years, and still being read. :)

"lithe and lissome" was such an odd phrase. I had to go look up what lissome was. It means lithe. So... Lithe and lithe?

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

love this story line, keep up the great work!

This one is really freakin' good. Nice work!

Thank you. I'm happy you like it!

I edited the chapter to change the description, thanks for pointing it out.

Just wanted to let you know that I feel as if this branch has a potential to become a great story. It's very enjoyable so far! Thank you for your work!

Also, my english is far from perfect, but it seems that you might have missed a word in magic mirror description... If I'm right, could you post the corrected description in comment?

This is a really neat premise! I’m excited to see where you go with it.

I may write a side episode to set that all up. If you Google it, Karyn = Buffy, Athena = Giles, Zoe = Willow or Dawn.

Should note I know absolutely nothing about Buffy the Vampire Slayer, but I'm down for background gags

Just in case there is any doubt, In the background I am setting up a Buffy the Vampire slayer situation for Karyn and the gang.

Good to know

Ack, I sure feel like a jerk now. Been a busy summer, I can only apologize. If there's a statute of limitations on this sort of thing, it has certainly passed by now. I still want to continue my thing, but I don't know when it will happen and I can't reasonably ask you to wait for me.

Go have at it, whoever feels like it :)

Looks like the images are linked to an email attachment, rather than a URL proper. We can't see it because we're not logged into your email account (hopefully :-p). Try putting the images on Google Drive or Imgur or some other hosting service.

Let me know.

Maybe

Images work in Chrome

Can't see a thing

I love this, it built on what I did and left me a great challenge to follow up on. Who ever you are, great job, it's fun writing with you.

Probably one of the best stories on here

Shout out to Haloblablabla for the inspiration.

I'd say it's just what Jon's wearing that changed.

This is an incredible branch. I can't believe I haven't found it before. I'm going to read the whole thing through as soon as I get a bit of time.

@Mira: Is that how the stone works? If so, then I guess I would need to redo this. Would that mean that I would have to remake/edit the other chapters I made?

Hey! I really like the family acting storyline. Would you be up for continuing this thread or maybe another family acting thread?

I don't mind at all, thanks!

Doesn't sound too bad.

Again, did Jon's body change to match Zoe's, or just his clothing.

So did Jon's body change to match his mom's, or just his clothing? Is he her clone?

Okay, StoryLover88. You need to start posting more content on your posts on this website. FB does not work the same was UBE or Writing.com. We do no do one sentence option chapters here since there are no limits on the number of child chapters a parent chapter can have.

I'm very intrigued by this branch. I'll try and revive it with some of my own ideas.

Love to see the return of this storyline!

One thing I must note about this post is that it introduced something that wasn't there in the previous posts: transformation. Despite everything, it just seems everything is mental for now and Miss Fine hasn't done anything physically (and I don't think she can, as far as I could see).

Hey @Cork, are you still planning to add the 5 episodes or is this up for chiming in now?

Hi I created an account just to comment about your story I liked it a lot, especially that hey have to pretend to be mother and daughter. The only thing it put me a little off was the body modifications, I think the story would have been more interesting if there were no body modifications/shrinks only maybe mental ones, and so on. But, as they say, to each their own. It's your story.

Also, the scene Jon being changed by the mother of his little friend was EPIC. Also, taking into account how big this story is, you probably should post it on Fictionmania, it would definitely reach more people, since not everyone end up going down the story paths here on fictionbranches, sometimes it's hard to find these hidden jams.

Since she wasn't in the room to hear the wish, shouldn't Karyn be unaware that anything changed?

It's been on the to-do list for a while, just haven't gotten around to it yet

You know the episode is 12 years old, right? ;)

Fixed just for you :P

There is no 5'12" height, 5'12" is just 6'

This is a really fun arc, you're doing amazing writing it. Can't wait for the next segment

Slight necropost but I'd like to see someone else take off the 'Something interesting with Larynx there' root https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/297761

It's just Something Interesting but Jon tacks on a second wish for Karin to have been in the room long enough to hear the wish for something interesting to happen

Also I like seeing what someone else would do with literally anything I've added.

I'll actually take a look at a couple of these this evening. For me one of the primary things that motivates me is whether or not people are interested in a storyline.

Really love to see this getting continued! Hopefully there's more to come!