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Okay, StoryLover88. You need to start posting more content on your posts on this website. FB does not work the same was UBE or Writing.com. We do no do one sentence option chapters here since there are no limits on the number of child chapters a parent chapter can have.

I'm very intrigued by this branch. I'll try and revive it with some of my own ideas.

Love to see the return of this storyline!

One thing I must note about this post is that it introduced something that wasn't there in the previous posts: transformation. Despite everything, it just seems everything is mental for now and Miss Fine hasn't done anything physically (and I don't think she can, as far as I could see).

Hey @Cork, are you still planning to add the 5 episodes or is this up for chiming in now?

Hi I created an account just to comment about your story I liked it a lot, especially that hey have to pretend to be mother and daughter. The only thing it put me a little off was the body modifications, I think the story would have been more interesting if there were no body modifications/shrinks only maybe mental ones, and so on. But, as they say, to each their own. It's your story.

Also, the scene Jon being changed by the mother of his little friend was EPIC. Also, taking into account how big this story is, you probably should post it on Fictionmania, it would definitely reach more people, since not everyone end up going down the story paths here on fictionbranches, sometimes it's hard to find these hidden jams.

Since she wasn't in the room to hear the wish, shouldn't Karyn be unaware that anything changed?

It's been on the to-do list for a while, just haven't gotten around to it yet

You know the episode is 12 years old, right? ;)

Fixed just for you :P

There is no 5'12" height, 5'12" is just 6'

This is a really fun arc, you're doing amazing writing it. Can't wait for the next segment

Slight necropost but I'd like to see someone else take off the 'Something interesting with Larynx there' root https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/297761

It's just Something Interesting but Jon tacks on a second wish for Karin to have been in the room long enough to hear the wish for something interesting to happen

Also I like seeing what someone else would do with literally anything I've added.

I'll actually take a look at a couple of these this evening. For me one of the primary things that motivates me is whether or not people are interested in a storyline.

Really love to see this getting continued! Hopefully there's more to come!

Just throwing some ideas out there in the hopes of inspiring another chapter!

-Higher pitched, younger sounding voice - the incongruence of being so much older but sounding young would certainly be uncomfortable for Sue.

-Further Height Reduction - she's already pretty short, but it would still be funny.

Incongruent memories - Ex. Keep his 100% straight male mind until the end, but give Sue an interest in say, giving blowjobs
Age Reminders - anything that would remind Sue that while she's hot, she's still much older. Switch her generational knowledge, give her the back pain of a lifetime of large breasts, give her bad eyesight.

Hope this ends up helping at least a little!

Oh and don't worry, you were definitely right in seeing the foreshadowing of more discomfort on the boob side of things ;)

The desire to add to this story comes and wanes for me. I mean, I keep thinking about it but whenever I've got actual time to indulge in TGTF fiction I seem to be mostly catching up on my RPs haha.

One thing I for sure know would help to motivate me is knowing that I wouldn't be the only one adding to this. I feel that knowing exactly how the story will go, just allows me to play it out in my head so I feel less need to put it down in writing. Other people's contributions introduce enough of the unexpected to make it worthwhile.

Sad to see a potential update got lost with a crash :(

Hope the bug bites you to come back to this at some point! I'm really looking forward to the awkward husband scene. In fact, the whole family would be interesting - Sure struggling to make dinner for the family while simultaneously trying to stay in character waiting for mental changes that seem to be taking forever to kick in. I'd also love to see the foreshadowed bigger, more awkwardly uncomfortable breasts wish too.

Really enjoying this branch, hope you continue with it. I'm curious about how these changes are rippling out to the rest of the world. For example, since reality has altered for Cat to have an expensive car and wardrobe, is her family wealthier in general now? Where does she stand in the social hierarchy at school, what's her relationship to Sarah, Karen and other characters? Does she take different classes than Jon, or perhaps involve herself in different activities like Cheerleading, Dance, or theater? Maybe Gary will decide to give her some extracurriculars that match his ideal image.Does Cat now know people that Jon didn't etc? In any event, enjoying the story, please keep it up.

Hoping you continue this. Has been a fun read so far.

This is exactly what I was hoping for too. I really wanted him to end up with a copy of her body.

Oh this one is wild. A really creative use of the blade. I would have never thought of it.

Out of story note for any future additions to the story from here. The idea is that the stone was stopped up, it couldn't grant any new wishes till the Sibling wish had been completed, and since Karyn is being "stubborn" about choosing a sibling, it can't grant the wish. Jon making more wishes creates a backlog, though he wishes for small things, it still takes "resources", and puts more pressure on the magic. Zoe then wishes for something big, and the stone breaks. This doesn't mean the magic is broken, and these wishes all still will be granted as the story goes on, but now the magic is more wild, less contained, and more dangerous. Do with that what you will. I don't want to say that in the story yet, but I thought it would be good to let everyone know where my head is at before I continue. All ideas are welcome.

So are they just strapped to each other? Or are they actually getting attached to each other?

Awesome twist, I love it!

a great beginning! hope to see the next soon ;)

FYI you can use stuff like the 'Typio' extension that will try and save text input from browser crashes. That or just type everything in word/Google docs and then copy and paste it over.

I actually almost added a thing there recently but my browser crashed when I was writing it and then the mood was gone.

Is there anything in particular you're hoping for here?

Please don't let this story line die

Shapewear indeed. Curious where this will lead.

That's a much worse problem for him since he needs that to pee.

i'd love to see a continuation of this

I'm really quite interested to know where you plan on this going, to be honest. I was also unsure of how long it would take her to start being attracted to guys.

I had been considering writing it for a few days but was honestly waiting for you to continue it!
Glad to hear we're one of the same mind right now haha

Ah you beat me to it! I was going to add to this episode today. Honestly, the first half was pretty similar to what I was thinking anyway; so my addition probably isn’t advancing the story too much. Either way, thank you for contributing to my branch! Or our branch now, as it seems.

Time travel is the solution for lots of things. "Oh, no, I made a wish to change the sun and it was a special time when the wish range was bigger than normal so I can't do it for another six months". Travel back in time to when it happened and make the wish to change it.

And any wish that "can't be reversed" can be reversed by travelling back in time to just before the wish was made, and making your new wish the one that came first and can't be reversed.

Well, in order to reach the actual source of the problem, Jon and Karyn would have to not only travel back in time two billion years, but also a place two billion light years from Earth. The way I understand it, the alien civilization that created the universe-destroying weapon was most likely the first to be destroyed by it, so traveling to their home world in the present day is out of the question - it was destroyed two billion years ago. Nothing's left but a void in which nothing could survive.

Wishing to time travel first would also present its problems, as what would one day become the Earth we know might not be easily survivable. Of course our protagonists don't really have much to lose at this point. They're in a situation that's way over the Godzilla Threshold (the term TV Tropes gives to a situation so dire that anything that might help solve it, no matter how dangerous, crazy, or bizarre - is called for because things are so bad that these things really wouldn't make the situation worse. Our protagonists literally have nothing to lose.

In the next episode, Zoe has an idea, even though she suggests it sarcastically. But would everyone go along with it? Unlikely. In any case, saving the world (or at least its population) is not going to be an easy task, given what we've already established. It will require clear-headed thinking, ideas bounced around, and taking risks. Among other things.

I was thinking a great direction to go would be for the stone to have JUST enough power to send them back in time to the time and place of the incident, and give them the chance to stop it. Naturally the stone would be totally burnt out, giving half way wishes on the fumes of magic after such a feat. (And Jon and Karyn would have to assume the form of the world they travel to.) Maybe the stone can still give them just enough wishes for a final few TF's necessary to carry out their mission.

Well, if this would be my story, I'd make Jon and Karyn look for more ancient artifacts containing "some" power and merge them with the stone to power it up. The more artifacts are integrated into the stone, the more "chaotic" the wishes become, but the stone also becomes more powerful. Maybe the saving wish restores the universe and destroys the death-bubble, but the alien lifeforms brought back are also in chaotic form, like planets full with DnD races suddenly, slime-people, etc. etc.

This episode was hard to write. It's one thing writing an episode that recaps things that happened ten or more previous episodes ago, but it's another to have to recap things that were established only one or two episodes ago. It can lead to things seeming a bit repetitive. But due to the nature of this episode (it being mostly about Jon telling Karyn what he himself just learned), it's kind of unavoidable.

Well, the deck seems stacked against them. I do have some ideas for what comes next, though, as well as a possible way to save humanity. But of course it won't be easy or quick. The whole point of this branch seems to be that there are some situations that not even the magic wishing stone can provide an easy fix for, so one just has to look for some way to try to salvage things while still acknowledging the limits of the stone's power.

Yes I am. I guess your episodes motivated me to add again. Thanks for continuing my branch!

You're back! And you even kept my episodes as canon!

As always, well worth the wait.

I know that in other branches, Jon or other characters have successfully wished away the stone's range limitation, but I always felt that was a bit too easy. We of course know there has to be a reason Jon's grandfather didn't do this: Either he felt it was better that the stone DID have a range limitation, or he DID try but found he couldn't increase the range that way. In any case, I feel it works for THIS particular branch that increasing the stone's limitation requires jumping through more hoops (metaphorically speaking) AND requires more time than our protagonists have.