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Can’t wait to see what comes next!

Ah a great shame but also great to hear from you! I think it was a very fresh take on the idea of body swapping and transformation in general. It created a lot of room for really interesting and creative transformations and considering how the fabric of perception/reality works

Sincerely appreciated. I was working on two pieces and then realized that combining some of the parts I didn't like from either made something about which I was really pleased. Now to figure out what to do with that remaining 1.5 pieces. :)

Also, are you assuming I'm a guy?

@aashen What did you enjoy about my work?

I second that. I would love to see him continue the work

Glad you liked it

I love accidental swaps like this! Also, very well written. Thanks for adding to the story.

I was wondering when we'd get more of this! I'm glad to see you're still pushing forward with the story. Another fantastic chapter :)

I want ekempo back, but I guess I'll have to start contributing now since he's been gone for over a year

Was thinking Tiffany was going to get a himbo curse, and now steve and biff are gonna be cursed but one will be a bimbo and one a himbo. figured it be a good place to make a choice.

Maybe Jon should be a girl where it counts, even while in control at this point. :-P

Lucky neither of them lost their ring in the first two years. That happens.

do you think people would be aware of the bimbo/himbo curses? or would it be more of a secret to normies and everyone just thinks the host and bimbo/himbo is another person?

it be interesting to if the stronger a bimbo the slower turning back to normal physically worked so youd be stuck with her body.

Interesting setting! Can0t wait to see how it will develop!

Nice chapter, short but well-written and interesting.

Short, but very sweet chapter. I especially enjoyed how you subtly changed the names in order to better represent each boy's new identity.

Fixed!

Thank you Gopher! Reading that my kink is appreciated only gives me fuel to continue to write more. I have another few posts in mind, I only need the time to write them down. However if someone would like to add a path it would be great, sharing my story with other fellas and building something together would be wonderful.

Great Idea!

I find this so adorable for some reason

This is a great storyline!

It's an interesting twist in the story I really like this milf branch and I hope you can continue it

Love the idea of a "Mandatory Milf". Liked every chapter so far. Must onestly say that for my tastes I prefer the submissive routes a bit more. It would be great if he would wish himself into a pornactress Milf. That would be hot as hell (but love to read everything written by you).

Interesting but what had you in mind should have happened afterwards?

Really hope to read something more, loved this path!

Glad you like it! I don’t know what to do with my own branch atm, but I’ll get back to it eventually.

Would love to be able to make the same wishes, really hope that this branch will become extremely long!

Really enjoying this world you set up

Thanks for the feedback everyone :)

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@Thun: Let's be more constructive with how we word things. Criticism and feedback are fine, but this was not the right way to phrase your opinions. We want to encourage writers here, so try to make sure you're being encouraging, even when you're giving negative feedback. In short: don't be a jerk.

@User616: I hope you do keep writing and experimenting with the Fiction Branches format. This website is only improved when new users come here with their own ideas, and their own permutations. As Bigbustgazer states, we do not have any rules against making multiple branches. However, speaking from my own experience, I think you'll engage your readers more if you create more variation between your different paths. Right now, it looks like you're pasting the same branch twice, with only minor changes. I encourage you to be more creative, figure out how these two parallel worlds are different, and how the two scenarios might create different stories. The more differences you create, the more fun your stories will be :)

Keep writing, everyone.

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thun I don't think there's any rule against writing multiple paths, and multiple paths is kinda part of the point of the site. It's not like anything is being used up.

Don't double post. Pick a path and stay there

LOL, mistakes were made.

Oh no

Yes, doing deals with powerful beings never works out the way you want it.

Sure hope you come back and continue this some day Alojz, it's been great!

What are luck shires?

The 'Star Trek' episode mentioned within this episode is called "The Enemy Within", if anyone's wondering.

Revised this so you can see how two line breaks instead of one make text much more readable.

Oh the cliff.

In a way I envy you.. You've got so much to discover still! I think I've largely seen all that is of interest to me :/

Thank you for the suggestion. Damn. 2012. That is from a long while ago. I am somewhat new to this website. There are moments when I'm browsing that I feel like an archeologist digging through ancient ruins. I might have a look about adding to that branch at a later date. (no promises tho)

Not directly relevant, but seeing this episode reminded me of this storyline from a long while ago - https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/8340

I think you might enjoy it.

It's really appreciated. I'm really enjoying writing this, and I'm glad anyone at all is enjoying reading it.

I don't have anything specific to say that I haven't already said in other episodes, but I want to reiterate how much I'm enjoying this branch, just in case you thought my appreciation may have waned.

Thank you!

There's a few, look at "Jon's Perverted Fantasies" as a good start.

If you don't want grown boobs but swapped boobs from someone else, search for (without the quotes) jon + breasts | boobs | tits

Hi, I was a huge fan of your story of the same name back on writing.com. I was wondering if there was any way you still had access to the story there, I would be willing to host it and have a paid account under the same name as here (Dante). Please let me know and sorry for any bother