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I rarely check the forums, otherwise I would have responded!

I like that chapters you're creating here. They're a lot of fun, and really scratch a very specific itch. You do an amazing job at it, but if I can make a suggestion. In my experience, if you're going to focus almost exclusively on the fetishistic aspect of a story, your story paints itself into a corner quickly. It's a good idea to make stories like that one offs. Get done, what you'd like to get done, and wrap up the story.

Alternatively. I've been playing with a few ideas to add some story depth. Not much. Maybe not nearly enough to make it a long story, but definitely a twist that gives you some interesting plot hooks.

If you think you might be interested, I'll type it out.

Love your work!

@Cork From you, that is quite sincerely high praise. Thank you.

Teerack,
Nowhere started it back up, and it was a cool premise. Thanks for the idea.

Hi. I was the one who made the original interpreted wishes routes like 8 years ago. I think its cool people are suddenly adding to them again... what spurred it on?

In all honesty, I think this story belongs some place a little more professional than Fiction Branches, but I'm glad it's here. There's a lot of good worldbuilding in this thread, enough that you could make this story stand alone with only minor changes to the first few branches. It's a wonderful little departure from what I normally come to this website to read. Good job and keep going :)

There bigbustgazer, fixed it. Thanks for pointing that out.

Okay, this is one of the coolest changes that Karyn has made. The full multihead and body part experience combined with the full multibody experience. Love it.

Wrong word in there, "expectable" should be "acceptable"

@aashen good point about the name inconsistency! I'll modify the episodes to fix that.

I’m really loving everything you’ve done so far—you’re hitting all the beats I had in mind with the starting episode, and then some. Whichever direction you end up going will probably be as good as your past posts, so I wouldn’t worry too much about alienating the audience. I’m honestly considering adding an episode myself, if it’s alright.

I hope you like what I added and will add to it when you can!

What's interesting is that Jon's sexual and romantic fantasies are very typical for the kind of woman she's become (non-con, having a tall dominant partner, feminization, the fantasy of being a domestic goddess). It'd be neat to see Jon/Laura meet with other MILFs, only to realize she was already more like them than she thought, even before her transformation!

If you want to add, feel free. Sometimes there are long gaps between my branches.

Ok I can add after the next one if you want.

Well, the other branches with the character have the two becoming each other. Here, they swapped roles, not identities. And both are about to realize that what feels normal isn't.

Can’t wait to see where this goes! If you want me to add...just let me know what way you want to take it

Also just a note: I noticed you've given the new MILF two names. Jon refers to get as Auntie Sue but then her new memories refer to get as Laura.

I think its going great right now and don’t worry too much about personal wish fulfillment. The only thing I want to see is long term development. Maybe karyn finds out and Jon tells her he was cursed and they “work” on fixing it while Jon slips more into the role.

First off, I think those personal fantasies probably coincide with a lot of other people that read this site, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.

As far as ideas go, a few things that would be neat to see -
Jon continues with the tweaks, but realizes shortly after meeting David that he is in over his head, despite being so firmly stuck.

being trapped is still a turn on, but it's awfully inconvenient when you're y'know, trapped
The method of changing Jon could cross over into David's hands.

Though I think Jon probably needs to go on a bit longer 'enjoying' himself before he really realizes the consequences of his actions

Well worth the wait, great work!

Really good stuff here!

Here are some good ones https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FoV7W2GbBi8&list=LL&index=221

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FZcL6Pf-p4A&list=LL&index=106

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IeE6Lp5mUKs&list=LL&index=179&t=1s https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7xXtVrYTsYs&list=LL&index=18

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=BgTCU8YoIuU&list=LL&index=198&t=687s

Hmm I don’t write that well but I have some f2f YouTube video that could inspire yoy!

Nothing like a Sarah transformation.

Wow, how do i not know this branch before? Is really good.

There's a "bar" that should be "bra".

I've been enjoying this branch a lot, I'm curious what's going to happen when Jon meets back up with Karyn...

I think both become like the original Elena. Karyn don't change because of the "wishs cannot be undone" thing.

So did Jon get turned into a copy of what Karyn became, a modified Elena, and Darian get turned into a copy of the normal Elena?

Hah, definitely the best outcome for the Sarahs. Nice creativity putting the vaginas on the others chest. That was an enjoyable surprise. Good to see some more TFs floating about.

I loved that this path was not forgotten. This chapter was incredible.

Jon has no limits that's for sure.

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Nothing says the stone can't work on a case by case basis either

I was thinking that there could be six different interpretations of Jon's words for the first six days, and then on the last day, any of those interpretations could apply on a case by case basis to various "girls" (however defined) on campus, making poor Jon unable to predict how to cope with his fluid reality. But a case by case interpretation of the Thursday transformation works for me too.

Back in 2009, The Guest wrote,

One could also theorize that the families themselves would change and the girls would remain exactly as they were.

and for 11 years I was assuming a scenario like the novel The Great Mom Swap in which the girls are temporarily adopted by different families who aren't genetically changed. But Jon turning black to match Aisha has made me see other possibilities in familial transformation.

Again, thanks to you both for exploring what could be done with my idea! I'm half-hesitant to add any more episodes to this thread because it's so much fun to sit back and read whatever you come up with!

Just expressing my preferences here ... my big hangup is universe-internal consistency. I've seen stories/episodes with the transformation equivalent of a time travel paradox. A character is left untransformed even though their whole world has changed and their parents don't exist anymore or never got together in the new history. So that character shouldn't be able to exist.

(There are stories, of course, in which such characters are fish-out-of-water heroes, remnants of a continuity that no longer exists, but the rules as established in this branch are that the altered universe is internally wholly consistent except for Jon's memories. [No one else was with Jon when he made the family swap wish, so no one's else's memories remain intact.])

Hence my logic - if (1) Aisha is still black and (2) Jon is now her brother, her new family - Jon's family - has to be biologically related to her. The stone has lopped off all the lower branches of her nuclear family tree except for her and has grafted on the Madisons who are now (whatever Aisha's last name is). Julie is the new daughter of Aisha's maternal grandparents and whoever Jon's father was is now the new son of Aisha's paternal grandparents. Meanwhile Aisha's parents and siblings (if any) are now grafted onto some other family tree, most likely white due to the town's demographics.

Susan Madison's family swaps with Linda McMillan's. Susan has a mother, maybe Father, and two siblings. Linda has no siblings. Is Susan Madison suddenly an only child and her parents are Richard and whoever replaced her as Mom?

Yes, that's what I was thinking (which doesn't have to be the only way things work): Richard-Mrs. McMillan-(daughter slot) are one unit and (Jon's father)-Julie-Jon-(daughter slot)-Mikey are another. The daughters change slots, and the rest of the units alter to fit the daughters. So Richard McMillan morphs into Susan Madison's father Richard Madison, and (first name) McMillan morphs into Susan Madison's mother (first name) Madison.

But ...

Do the extra kids swap with the help?

That would be fun. The number and type of slots in Linda's family remaining fixed and the Madisons being forced to fit. The parents would remain parents, and one daughter slot would be fixed, but one could have fun with the rest:

Mr. Madison > Mr. McMillan (genetic changes)
Julie Madison > Julie McMillan (genetic changes: e.g., red hair to blonde, less prone to fat)
Linda McMillan > Linda McMillan (no genetic changes)
Jon Madison > the McMillan housekeeper Jon (genetic changes; new last name); the stone regarded the housekeeper as being "like part of the family"
Mikey Madison > Mikey Orr (genetic changes; replacing Fred Orr, Sarah/Linda's cousin since there were no spaces left in the immediate family)

Conversely:

Richard McMillan > Richard Madison (genetic changes)
(first name) McMillan > (first name) Madison (genetic changes)
Susan Madison > Susan Madison (no genetic changes)
McMillan housekeeper > (first name) Madison (genetic changes)
Fred Orr > Fred Madison (genetic changes now Susan's brother instead of her cousin)

What if the family you swap for yours has kids of different ages? What if Jon is suddenly the younger sibling...etc etc etc.

That would be the age-constant model (Jon being forced to fit into a preexisting younger sibling slot in another family) which also works for me.

Jon and Aisha seem to have been the same age before. Are they fraternal twins now? Or Jon could be Aisha's younger brother. I like how The Guest didn't make Aisha specify whether he was older or younger: "my brother."

The key point is that the girls in the school are remaining the same for the most part.

I agree that is key. Something has to remain basically the same, for Jon's sanity as well as the reader's sake. The fun will be seeing how families adapt to fit their new daughters. If, for instance, Linda McMillan is now Julie's daughter, Julie could be a lot like the old Susan McMillan, both physically and mentally. Maybe with a shorter haircut. We've already seen a glimpse of how Jon has adapted to fit his new sister Aisha.

On the other hand it would be interesting if the new families in turn influence the girls in some nongenetic way. Maybe Julie McMillan is kinder than Susan McMillan or whoever Linda McMillan's mother was, and Linda is less nasty.

require a ton of reference to know who has been what if we warp people around too much

Maybe the temptation to introduce more characters should be kept in check (as much as I'd love to see them) and the focus should be on a small core: Jon's new black family and his familes from before and after the swap (Linda McMillan and Susan Madison).

I'm thinking of going with a mix of your ideas while staying within the same theme. The key point is that the girls in the school are remaining the same for the most part. It may get too confusing for future parts, or require a ton of reference to know who has been what if we warp people around too much. I've got some ideas for family combinations, and changes that will influence the girls going into new families, and the people already in those families. Nothing says the stone can't work on a case by case basis either

Well looks like a lot of babies are in his future.

You also have to ask..if you swap families with someone..how do their roles change? Example... Susan Madison's family swaps with Linda McMillan's. Susan has a mother, maybe Father, and two siblings. Linda has no siblings. Is Susan Madison suddenly an only child and her parents are Richard and whoever replaced her as Mom? Do the extra kids swap with the help? What if the family you swap for yours has kids of different ages? What if Jon is suddenly the younger sibling...etc etc etc.

Spelling out my assumptions about the Thursday wish: the girls keep their genetics and names, but their new families are altered to be the biological relatives of the girls and have
new last names.

Note that “genetics” doesn’t necessary equal being physically unaltered, as the girls could have nongenetic traits altered because they grew up in different families. And their personalities and life histories could be different too.

One possibility that just occurred to me is that some of the girls may end up being adopted daughters of new families. In that case the parents and other children wouldn’t be altered physically or in name, but the girls might have new last names, though their genetics would stay the same. That does raise the question of who their biological parents are in the new reality.

Example: On Wednesday X is the biological daughter of A and B. On Thursday X becomes the adopted daughter of C and D, but is still the biological daughter of A and B (who gave her up for adoption at birth). A and B in turn become the adoptive parents of Y, the biological daughter of E and F, and so on.

My assumption was that if Jon is black, he’s (whatever Aisha’s current surname is) now, and Julie and Mikey are Aisha’s mother and brother, while Aisha’s original family now has some other last name and is the same race as their new daughter (who is likely to be white).

BTW, back in my original episode in 2012, I mentioned Jon’s father, but everyone ever since, myself included, forgot about him. Could he make an appearance as Aisha’s new father?

It seems that Aisha Johnson lucked out and was swapped into another black family (albeit fatter than the Johnsons) on Wednesday. (Odds are she was white on Tuesday with a different first name like Alicia.)

Pre-wish black Aisha Johnson > Tuesday: white Alicia X > Wednesday: black Aisha Y > Thursday: Black Aisha Y with Jon’s family as black Ys

X might equal Brewer, and if so, Aisha on Wednesday might have carried over her weight as a white girl into her new identity as a black girl. Julie’s weight already happens to nicely match that of her new daughter Aisha. Mikey could be chubby now. I’m assuming Jon didn’t gain much if any weight as he would have noticed even without a mirror. (Did Tiffany have one in the office because she was so vain?)

I'm looking at it as Aisha is now a Madison, but the family will change to fit her being there. I'm thinking this means Julie and other adults will look and be different, and any guys will too. There's also the possibility of families having more or less kids. What I'm interested in too is that any family in the town is liable to have the girls added or subtracted from their families. I've got some ideas bouncing around, and will try to have a chapter up later that I hope sets up some fun options.

For me, I just love looking for the new twist. So, I wrote a few twists to open up options. I figured, I had Tuesday happened again, which means only students were affected...so all kids turned into adults skipped the day. I had Tiffany becomes the girlfriend, because it's the only way to explain them being together with her top off, I had Jon ends up there alone...and the everyone but the girls change...which probably has the most wild options. So, Jon is now Aisha's sister....does that mean she lives at his house with her family or vice versa?

I've been thinking up ideas and twists for another day based on the options. I can see some possibilities with families changing to match the daughters they are getting, like with Jon becoming Black from Aisha joining the family. There are some fun options I can think of for the older cast changing in some unexpected ways, and possible combinations

I want to thank you and The Guest for building upon the premise I had established 12 years ago and taking it in directions I could never have foreseen.

I’d love to see continuations of all four of The Guest’s branches, but if I have to choose only one, it would be “ Tiffany and All The Female Students are Unchanged” which shows something we’ve never seen before: the families (and Jon) swapped but not the girls.

Wow, this is a very interesting alternate storyline. Love how Jon is going off the deep end. Heh, was surprised he didn't get hit with a change of gender since he forgot to exclude himself. Happens so often in these situations. Sorry for not commenting on the other recent posts, I need to read them still. Right in the middle of a move and have been too distracted to read anything lately.

I've always loved your writing, Pro, and remember us corresponding a long time ago. I am contemplating returning to writing and would be interested in talking with you. My email is in my FM bio.

Love this branch! The stuck is very hot. "transformation masochism" theme, very hot. Hope to see more.

Hah, thanks aashen! I don't think I can offer much quality in writing when it comes to plot of dialogues, but I do put great care in making my writing descriptive for the specific purpose of people being able to picture well what the main character is going through.

Some of the best writing I've seen on here in years. Please keep up the great work!

Hey what the fuck is this