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I wish I was Trevor :(

I like the perspective of cat-girl.

>His baby instincts kicked in and he subconsciously started to paw at the front of Biff's dress, instinctively wanting to feed from Biff's breasts
That is so cute! ◕‿◕

I love this episode and hope to see more continuation on it. I'm wondering how this wish plays out, with some situations where Jon admires her mom more and wants to be like her? A change of scenery basically? She's a good mother and gives him the okay to take a little time off school to help adjust and give him some breathing room. Pretty mucha beach episode where Jon is free to embrace his inner woman without judgment instead of all the glares at school? And a chance for Jon and mom to make more ill advised wishes. Idk, it's great and really hope it continues.

This was a fun read! Great work :D

I loooove the oblivious changes!!! Keep it up! :D

Just wanted to say. Love your continuation of various dropped story lines. Thanks for contributing so often.

Please add more than one sentence when submitting new chapters.

1)I thought it was at the end of the day
2)This is doubling up so he still has what he had before.
3)The collar is what the other person is using to appear to have pants.

A few questions. Why is the school being locked up? He was on his way to first period when he got the drink poured on him.
Also why is he putting on a collar? He was just looking for a top and bottom to wear.
Finally, you didn't mention him picking out any pants, so is he naked below the waist?

Glad you are back, this is story is so goddammit sweet. Personally I loved Trevor showing up, maybe you could do a chapter about him and his routine with his mom, like how it is when they are alone. Again, thank you very much, you are doing an amazing here.

I'm still here, I'm still reading your wonderful stories. Whenever you feel like, please come back.

Once I got started on this part, it went through so many rewrites. Time to actually progress.

Very good! Liked the pony tail style ears. Hm wondering what instincts she’s struggling with.

Thanks! I do have ideas for the next few chapters (which will likely hit tomorrow when I'm off work and have more free time. Just a few more pieces to put on the board.

After that though I don't have the long term set in stone, so other additions might be fun!

Do you have the next few chapters plotted out in your mind, or would you welcome additions?

Keeping up the momentum for sure. Well done.

Glad you enjoyed it! I too really enjoy stories where things look dark and dire for the heroes.

As for Jon... well, it's not much fun messing with characters who aren't there anymore, so I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of him. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!

Strong start! I'm already hooked. I love the stories where the heroes find themselves in somewhat... Dire situations. lol.

I hope we don't have permanent character death of Jon, but looking forward to what you come up with next.

I most certainly look forward to it! You really did a good job working out the details and challenges of her new body.

I'm glad you like it. :) I have a couple of ideas for Barry that I'll try to write on.

Upvoted and favourited. A wonderful addition! Thank you

Gary accidentally turning Zoe into a mini Cat is something that I always thought could be a possibility in this branch. Great job with this story. Very fun.

Definitely! It's linked on the main page of the site.

Seriously, FB has a discord. Well I will consider it.

Really enjoying your contributions Marazhna, please keep going with this

Have you considered joining the FB Discord? You've got some good ideas and I like the new female character types you've created.

When you're writing a new episode or editing an old one, there's a button which says "show formatting help" which explains some things such as strikethroughs and the line breaks. I recommend giving that a read first of all. But to actually answer your question, just put a line of at least 5 hyphens after a blank line, like so:

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becomes:

How do you do the line breaks between the body and the id card stats?

Quite adorable.

@shinzon gamma

Thank you for the encouragement I will try :)

I am enjoying this story so plz keep up the good work

Hell, a bunch of chapters. You are on fire! I will read them later, also, loved that detail of Trevor long being tied up in two pigtails •ᴗ•

I'm loving it more and more to see Jon decent into being nothing but a toddler, not only that the sheer boundless intimacy between him and Biff. Also, that the detail of Jon and Biff wearing matching dress was really icing on the cake. I also enjoyed the scene of Jon being putting into a pushchair. Keep up the good work. You are writing an ABDL classic. It reminds me a little bit of "Changing Reality" by "toddlergirl", if you never heard you might like or take some inspiration. Again, thank you very much. If I was a millionaire I would buy the movie rights and make a film of your story, cause it's THAT GOOD.

Absolutely adorable.

Yeah, these are always fantastic adds and an amazing story. I hate trying to pitch ideas to an author who has AMAZING ideas and writing, but it could be fun to see more characters added to the story. Zoe as the babysitter, his mom supervising a sleepover, Mikey as the bully at preschool who's just a year older, Jon not caring about using his diaper in front of Biff to show he's becoming more complacent.

But wherever the story goes, I'm on board. Great job! It's a blast!

Hi again, I just read your new chapters, I like to read them before going to bed, they are a like a fine wine. I'm finding pretty interesting to see Jon regressing more and more (maybe you could write more scenes describing how he is getting used to wear toddler clothes, maybe now he even prefers to wear baby's clothes even when he is alone with Biff, maybe he find tights comfier now, also he doesn't even know how to tie his shoes anymore) . Also, it just interesting to see Biff and Karyn romance.

And lastly, I think it would be cool to add a new character on the story, maybe one of their high school female friends is now trapped in the life of a baby boy, something like, or maybe trapped in the life of a cat or a dog. I think this would be a nice add-on, since there wasn't any story of people trapped in the life of animals in this story yet. But unlike Karyn, this person knows she is trapped in the life in else's role, but they can't do anything about.

All in all, I'm anxious to see what is next.

"Jon stood before now wearing only a pink diaper but still crying. Biff easily picked him up and held him to his chest. Jon started to calm down, enjoying being comforted like this. He wrapped his arms around Biff's neck and nuzzled his face into Biff's chest. He could feel the soft, empty cups of Biff's bra through the light material of his dress"
Also, the last thing, I loved this scene so much, the sheer vulnerability and helplessness is pretty cute and somewhat arousing.

Hey! I'm so glad you are back!

And if I'm already piggy-backing on Krystren's comments, I may as well also repeat: you're making some great contributions, and I'm looking forward to seeing your next chapters!

I'll follow up to Krystren's comment with a gentle nudge: a good, readable paragraph is usually 3-5 sentences long. Sometimes your story will call for shorter paragraphs or longer paragraphs, and that's okay based on your judgement. Paragraphs with dialog will tend to be shorter in general. But if you have a 6-sentence paragraph, it's a good idea to look back and see if there's a logical place to split it up.

Sometimes there won't be, and that's okay. But usually there's a thought that can be connected to the previous sentence, but doesn't have to be. Like, for example, the sentence "sometimes there won't be, and that's okay."

:)

I really like your additions to the site, but could you please try to add some paragraphs? The walls of text are quite hard to read.

@broom11 thanks, I appreciate the comments and up votes :) I’m going to be a little busier so might not be able to update for a while.

Looking great. Loving the balance of worldbuilding and Tf content so far.

Thank you Marazhna for continuing this story. It's very interesting. Please, continue!

Funniest anti-climax on this whole website. 10/10

Pardon the typo's I got the coof, so I'm just too tired to deal with them right now.

@perri Well my ideas are vague still. I have a few ideas but I would certainly love to see your ideas too!

That so...

I would love to add to this story, but I'm afraid I would too quickly stunt some of your intended plot hooks.

In any event, it's always a joy to see you publish a chapter Chompy. :)

I had a feeling you would enjoy that ;)

Yay for new sphinxes