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If this is the only way she can “win” the argument, then she 100% has proved him right, but she lacks the self-awareness to see this.

She’s certainly failing in her supposed objective of showing Jon that girls supposedly have things harder by torturing him like this. This is not a fair and honest average day for a girl, what with being tormented by a sadistic and petty person. If he gets through this with his memory intact (though I doubt he will) and gets his rock back, this version of him should definitely be ending his friendship with this nasty version of Karyn.

Thanks for the feedback

My suggested outline of remaining plot and subplots:

Molly/Matt and David encounter, Molly/Matt is more sympathetic to David with possible romance between them both in female form, but Matt eventually returns to normal and things get awkward but their friendship is resolidified. Eventually they also meet Jon in the park and David apologizes for mistreating Jon before, and Jon is dismissive because she has other things to worry about but still accepts the apology. David then builds up a friendly dialog and they learn of each others' ability to communicate with their respective animal kin and have a minor adventure pooling talents to facilitate communication between some rabbits and stray cats, and though not friends, at least the water is under the bridge between Jon and David.

Jon and Karyn find it is impossible to separate the stone from the statue without damaging the statue because when more than one conscious being is touching the stone simultaneously, only the one who has been touching it longer can wish with it and so the ancient Sphinx is the only one who can use it so they can't wish for it to be teleported out of her grip and Jon is not pleased with what the sphinx did to her, understands why she did it and forgives her, and the sphinx wants to continue holding the stone until the mission is complete in order to safeguard it, Jon and Karyn agree. But in the meantime ancient sphinx is willing to revise the original wish for the cold to be replaced by this transformation virus as she can wish for things, and everyone else changes back but of course Jon is stuck this way until 3 generations because that was explicitly wished for and isn't undone.

They later accidentally meet David who is a human male again with no memory of the ordeal as a rabbit girl and very confused by his encounter with Jon and Karyn but still somehow remains a kinder, gentler, more understanding and reasonable person and nice to Jon despite Jon's odd appearance which is now very alarming to him since there are no transformed humans on Earth any more.

Meanwhile Karyn has buyers remorse about changing back and wants to be a catgirl again, she came to like it and is truamatized by having lost her tail, and asks the ancient sphinx who is in control of the stone to explicitly turn her into a catgirl, and the sphinx to the surprise of Karyn but of no one reading wishes for Karyn to turn into a sphinx, justifying it by insisting she gave Karyn what she wanted since a female sphinx is still a type of catgirl. Karyn is angry at first, but Jon and Karyn, looking each over in sphinx form suddenly both seem very distracted and smitten by each other and both just lose control and start making out in the park and after a bit of a tussle, neither one of them is actually down about the new state of affairs.

Training ensues to teach Jon and Karyn to use their sphinx powers under the direction of the shadows and ancient sphinx directly, is met with success. However, contrary to the ancient Sphinx's plans, Jon now suddenly has a huge amount of leverage over the ancient Sphinx because that includes shapeshifting abilities and Jon can actually change back to his original body even though he's in a sense still a female sphinx merely exercising her shapeshifting ability, and doesn't actually need to have 3 generations of sphinxes and reproduce as a female sphinx to change back because he doesn't need a wish from the stone in order to do it. However, he feels sympathy for the ancient sphinx and also has become more attached to his/her female sphinx physical form and lives a dual existence between two species and genders, with he and Karyn as significant others. Jon and Karyn return a few months later, both of them in female sphinx form, heavily pregnant with each others' litters, to tell the ancient sphinx that they're actually going to be giving her exactly what she wanted anyway, eventually at least, but want her help with further generations, since of course they don't want it to involve incest, and the ancient sphinx is overjoyed to learn her species will return and they will oblige her desire even though they didn't have to.

Then 50 years later, and Jon and Karyn, appearing to still be teenagers and in human form, are at a wedding in the same park as the statue sphinx, who suddenly de-fossilizes and becomes living flesh again. She is so amazed to be living again, and is surprised that none of the people at the wedding aren't surprised by this. Until Jon tells her "don't you realize who all these people are? Everyone, let's show her." Everyone at the wedding transforms to their 'true forms', to sphinxes before her eyes, for they are Jon's extended family, hundreds of them. The ancient sphinx breaks down crying and Jon and Karyn hug her, she hands Jon the magic stone after holding it for 50 years, and then they make her a sort of guest of honor at the ceremony.

It's how I'd have it go at least. Maybe I'll write it up eventually.

Warning to anyone reading this. I consider this to be the last canonical chapter. It just degenerates from here on out into crap (I'll be generous and just call it really bad furry filler) and it is all written by catprog. I've had my problems with Chompy and nothingsp, but catprog proves to be really, not capable or interested in wrapping this thing up in a reasonable way or at all really. Please don't waste your time on it.

But anyone who has made it this far, if you wanted to finish it yourself, I think this right here is the right place to do it from. And if anyone comes along after that, don't waste your time with what is here now, namely the "Back to the sphinx" branch with 24 pages or "Karyn and Jon" singleton with 1 page.

Warning to anyone else here. I just looked forward and everything from this point forward was written by catprog and it just degenerates into crap from here on out. No end of the story. It wasn't even far from a resolution. What a rotten disappointment. It was good for a long while.

Ugh. At this point it is obvious this catprog is a hardcore furry and is trying to ruin the story. Why? Just why.... it's been a good story since BroomB wrestled it away from nothingsp's original.... and very similar.... intentions for it and steered it in a good direction. For the good of the world, take some saltpeter catprog, and some cold showers. A little bit of furry stuff is fine if it is tasteful, and a little bit of adult theme stuff is fine if it is tasteful, but you obviously don't even have a clue where that line is.

Oh no, don't throw in some complication like this so late in the story.

But you know, it seems to me, at this point, that since being a sphinx apparently comes with magic powers and one of those powers is shapeshifting powers, and another is a very slow aging rate, it really would make no sense for Jon to have any motivation to wish to change back, and there's also no reason Jon needs to breed at all, let alone have great-grandchildren as a sphinx. As soon as Jon gets control of the shapeshifting powers, she, or he, can simply change back to whatever body he wants to have. And since the wish was "I wish that any wish that would change the sphinx currently known as Jon would fail unless she has great grand children that are sphinxes", that was not a wish prohibiting Jon shapeshifting, just being wished to be changed. Once Jon gets control of those natural powers, he can be human and male if he wants, and have a much longer lifespan, and wishing to be changed from sphinx back to human male would effectively just be a wish to lose his supernatural powers. Why would anyone want to do that? Just keep the powers right?

Oh. I guess page 19069 wasn't canonical here then. Because here Sally is female. It did branch off one time but I interpreted that to just mean that it was what happened at the party.

No. David didn't get an age boost, he got regressed several years, they said that repeatedly. Seriously you've got to do a better job of reading and understanding previous chapters.

Funny how all these male characters change sex and it's always permanent, when the odds are supposed to be only 20% of changing, much less of a sex change, and even then it's supposed to be temporary at least half of the time. But deus ex machina I guess.

Another inconsistency. In an early episode, they said there were several other sphinxes just in Jon's state alone. It was I think in the first 10 pages of this story. I think they said there were 4. That would imply there are at least several hundred on Earth. Of course, you can use the stone to turn regular humans into more, and it probably wouldn't be hard to find willing volunteers. And of course there's no reason they shouldn't be able to just instantly wish an offspring into existence without actually gestating it inside her body.

Cutting it out of the statue's grip with tools? That's the best they can think of? They can still touch it even if they can't pry it loose, just wish it to be teleported one foot to the side.

Please change all occurrences of the word wonder to wander in this page. Also, did you know, rabbits actually hate carrots. They'll eat the green leafy part but not the root. Also why it is implausible there wouldn't be food for the rabbit around, they typically literally live off of grass or almost any other green plants. The rabbit wouldn't be searching for food and asking for it, and offering it carrots would be the last thing it'd want.

Yikes. We have a new writer too. Well, the good news Jon is you're going to solve your problem. The bad news is that it is going to take a certain amount of time and you'll have to do some things you really don't want to do. Though if she's creative Jon could cheat in the intent of this wish: instantly materialize an offspring into existence without birthing it with the help of the stone, materialize that offspring's offspring, and materialize that offspring's offspring, and then fix the common cold issue. But it also kind of ruins the story, because now it removes all the important uncertainty in the future of the story. We now know Jon is going to successfully get the stone back and any further quest is now irrelevant because it is predestined she'll get the rock back. What room is there left for an actual story from here on out then? We already know the outcome, Jon gets the stone back. Well, maybe some other writers will be able to fix that mess and keep it interesting.

Oh it was so HARD for her to FORGIVE him, when he could have easily TURNED HER IN for bullying Jon the day before and said "well if you put this on my permanent record, make sure to put that down in David's". And Matt wasn't even bullying her, just spreading information she wanted to keep secret that he didn't know she wanted to keep secret because he's dense. David should consider herself in Matt's debt, not the other way around.

Ugh. Chompy really needs to read the previous material better. "What have I done Karyn," .... Karyn was the one that did this, wishing for the common cold to be replaced with something else. "a minor change, much like Karyn and Sarah" ... they just said in the previous page that Sarah was more animal-like than Jon is, and earlier they said she had a full fox muzzle. I skipped some slow going tedious school chapters but I'll bet Chompy is the one that accidentally rewrote Sarah as a foxgirl instead of a rabbitgirl too. Your inattentiveness to detail is screwing things up Chompy, and the other writers are trying to oblige you on it but you ain't making it easy for them.

nothingsp also obviously trying to work with Chompy's weak reading comprehension skills, awkwardly retconning it here into it being telepathic communication instead of the cat actually talking, kind of sad that he had to do that, and it's painfully obvious that's what happened here. Bet BroomB wouldn't have made that mistake, he seems to be the most talented one here.

I just looked back and confirmed that David was the one antagonizing Jon for being changed into a female, just out of the blue, bullying someone who is already hurting and kicking them when they're down for fun. Suddenly 100% of my sympathy for David has evaporated. And here I was irked by David's mother so much. On second thought it's great that she changed this way and is getting a taste of her own medicine, she deserved every bit of it, couldn't happen to a more deserving individual, wish he'd changed even more after the experimental treatment failed than just getting a 3rd tit, wish he'd changed into a freaking pokemon or something. Though perhaps she'll get a meaningful confrontation with Jon now and break down and apologize and redeem herself just the tiniest bit.

2nd to last paragraph, from #29 "Jon and the Cat" or "Catfight?" depending on which title you use, Karyn says "'Kitten' indeed". She was mocking Jon for reacting the way she did and agreeing with the cat. Jon at no point said "kitten", all Jon said after the cat started talking was "Y-you can talk!?" and "A-are you...are you changed?". So there's no way to interpret this any way other than Karyn having directly heard the cat's comment calling Jon a kitten. It also said the cat was being sarcastic in retorting "No, you're just imagining it." when Jon said "Y-you can talk!?". So yes, the cat was talking out loud in English, not telepathically.

Oopsies. Chompy, you have made a mistake in comprehending 2 episodes back. Karyn was replying directly to the cat without Jon having repeated it. So Jon isn't supposed to be telepathically understanding the cat from some sort of telepathic cat communication ability and just hearing the words in her mind, the cat is actually supposed to be talking for real. It's the cat that's magic, not Jon. Oh well. If your miscomprehension becomes canonical because future episodes rely on Jon having this ability, I guess that's fine, but then the previous episode ought to be edited you know.

I'm definitely planning on taking it further. Stay tuned!

Any plans to continue this story?

Well, the issue here is that one doesn’t want to make a bad situation worse. They can work through this sure.. it would be hard but as a parent why take an even bigger risk to one’s child? That’s sort of what I was trying to go for, though I didn’t convey it too well.

Welcome to the town of terrible parents, where every parent is terrible. David's mom's like "being a girl is good enough for me so it's good enough for you, I am offended that you even be upset about it, and I'd rather have a daughter, why should I care about what YOU want for your own body".

Thank you BroomB, for rescuing this story from the jaws of doom and the stone from the trash collector. Though someone at some point was sloppy, they said earlier that Sarah was a rabbit, not a fox, and now everyone's saying she's a fox and it breaks consistency. I don't know, I skipped some chapters and went straight to last page at 19046 from 19040 I think. At some point in there, someone must have forgotten what Sarah was already established to be and started saying she was a fox.

This nothingsp guy...... this is some bullcrap right here. Jon's mom: "No, you can't have even one day off from school, even though I don't have any clothes ready that fits you, you must go to school today immediately and you must go NAKED! Not even with SHOES or anything to protect your paws, just totally naked to walk with your bare paws on sharp rocks and gravel and soil with hookworms and who knows what. Because I don't love you, son, I don't love you at all or care about your well being or mental health, to the extent I will force you to humiliate and endanger yourself in public like this just to serve as a very sketchy deus ex machina to keep you away from your magic stone for a few hours, but I'll give some BS excuse to justify it without pointing out how little it means I care about my own son. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to rush home to ruffle through your belongings and throw some of it in the trash without your permission on trash day before the pickup and before you get home so that the thing I throw out in your room will be gone forever, and it will also be the one thing you need that would fix all this, and I'll actually throw a rock in the trash instead of tossing it outside because that's a totally normal thing people do, throwing rocks out in the trash." Yeah, the number of coincidences and utter BS this requires are totally believable. It was bad enough when she did the same thing without forcing Jon to go to school shoeless and naked in that other branch. It makes me want to make another branch stemming off where Jon kills his mom.

Loving this story so far. Hoping you're planning to continue?

Such a great premise it started with, and such squandered potential now.

Oh this is the first one I've read that is truly a great premise. A disgrace that it has been up for over 6 years and it has no upvotes. Here, have mine.

Oh bigbustgazer oh you have a thing to learn about the fairer sex. Nothing that goes wrong is ever their fault, but rather the nearest male is all to blame.

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Glad you like it! This is a fun story to work on!

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Would someone answer that phone? Because I called it!

Sigh. I knew it. Him too. And it's gonna get made permanent now, isn't it. I'm calling it now. I would bet money it will end up being permanent in both of them and somehow they'll screw up fixing things with the rock. If that's what happens, I swear I will add to the story somewhere to change fate and steer it away from the deviantart furaffinity route.

You're kidding me. Now after submitting one myself, I keep running into these. If I had known how dreadfully abundant catgirl transformation stories were in fiction branches, I wouldn't have written one myself. I haven't even been seeking them out, they're finding ME, I click on a link saying the cure for the common cold, and bam, catgirl transformation story, because of course.

I think you mean that the table is set for five, not four. And there's four of them there - Jon, his two siblings, and his mom.

This is great. thanks for writing

Damn, did the Chad meme already exist in 2002, or was the author of this one just decades ahead of his time?

To quote Chidi Anagonye: "If we goin' out, I'm goin' out with a belly full of warm pretzels. Yummy, yum, yum."

Oh I get it now. It shows that as the title from the previous page, which is different from the title that appears at the top of the page the story I write appears on. You should have really made that clear. Hopefully I can edit it now.

What am I supposed to put in the "link" field? I have the title of my branch in the title, I have the story in the body, and the "link" field is supposed to be what exactly? I don't see a FAQ page here. Is it a link to the previous page that it is branching from? It seems to already know what it is, since the submit page has a whole section entitled "Previous episode". I'm just going to try putting in the link to this page, https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/4715 and see what happens I guess, since it just cryptically tells me that I can't submit it with the link text empty.

I'm inclined to think the point if it isn't to try to find "SOME way around it". I don't think you're supposed to find some way to fix the problem, but rather, it's a setup of "what would you do with your remaining time if the world was going to end?" I think you're just supposed to accept it and write a story with it being inevitable. By the way, this is describing vacuum decay. That's a real thing that may actually happen. There are youtube videos about it too, like one from kurzgesagt and at least one from sciencephile the AI.

Author's Commentary: This branch was inspired by a conversation on FB's Discord, discussing the lack of background or characterization for Karyn. I do have a few TFs planned ahead, but expect a lot of character building and not a lot of the usual smut.

I think the big problem is that as things are now, one can't really delete an episode without seriously affecting all episodes further down the branch, and as all episodes need an author account, you can't delete an account without also messing with all the episodes authored by the account, and thereby all the episodes afterward. IDK if there's a TOS somewhere that spells this all out, but hey, that's the spirit of the law anyway.

God, I love seeing more of this story... Keep up the good work!

Just FYI you should really implement the option to delete accounts unless you want some rando to come along and sue you under some data protection and control law.

Or starts swapping with someone else.

Fantastic addition. Thank you for picking this story back up for me :)