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Would someone answer that phone? Because I called it!

Sigh. I knew it. Him too. And it's gonna get made permanent now, isn't it. I'm calling it now. I would bet money it will end up being permanent in both of them and somehow they'll screw up fixing things with the rock. If that's what happens, I swear I will add to the story somewhere to change fate and steer it away from the deviantart furaffinity route.

You're kidding me. Now after submitting one myself, I keep running into these. If I had known how dreadfully abundant catgirl transformation stories were in fiction branches, I wouldn't have written one myself. I haven't even been seeking them out, they're finding ME, I click on a link saying the cure for the common cold, and bam, catgirl transformation story, because of course.

I think you mean that the table is set for five, not four. And there's four of them there - Jon, his two siblings, and his mom.

This is great. thanks for writing

Damn, did the Chad meme already exist in 2002, or was the author of this one just decades ahead of his time?

To quote Chidi Anagonye: "If we goin' out, I'm goin' out with a belly full of warm pretzels. Yummy, yum, yum."

Oh I get it now. It shows that as the title from the previous page, which is different from the title that appears at the top of the page the story I write appears on. You should have really made that clear. Hopefully I can edit it now.

What am I supposed to put in the "link" field? I have the title of my branch in the title, I have the story in the body, and the "link" field is supposed to be what exactly? I don't see a FAQ page here. Is it a link to the previous page that it is branching from? It seems to already know what it is, since the submit page has a whole section entitled "Previous episode". I'm just going to try putting in the link to this page, https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/4715 and see what happens I guess, since it just cryptically tells me that I can't submit it with the link text empty.

I'm inclined to think the point if it isn't to try to find "SOME way around it". I don't think you're supposed to find some way to fix the problem, but rather, it's a setup of "what would you do with your remaining time if the world was going to end?" I think you're just supposed to accept it and write a story with it being inevitable. By the way, this is describing vacuum decay. That's a real thing that may actually happen. There are youtube videos about it too, like one from kurzgesagt and at least one from sciencephile the AI.

Author's Commentary: This branch was inspired by a conversation on FB's Discord, discussing the lack of background or characterization for Karyn. I do have a few TFs planned ahead, but expect a lot of character building and not a lot of the usual smut.

I think the big problem is that as things are now, one can't really delete an episode without seriously affecting all episodes further down the branch, and as all episodes need an author account, you can't delete an account without also messing with all the episodes authored by the account, and thereby all the episodes afterward. IDK if there's a TOS somewhere that spells this all out, but hey, that's the spirit of the law anyway.

God, I love seeing more of this story... Keep up the good work!

Just FYI you should really implement the option to delete accounts unless you want some rando to come along and sue you under some data protection and control law.

Or starts swapping with someone else.

Fantastic addition. Thank you for picking this story back up for me :)

Thank you for reviving a few of my old stories. I'm suddenly inspired to keep them going. Hopefully I'll have some time this week to write.

I wish I was Trevor :(

I like the perspective of cat-girl.

>His baby instincts kicked in and he subconsciously started to paw at the front of Biff's dress, instinctively wanting to feed from Biff's breasts
That is so cute! ◕‿◕

I love this episode and hope to see more continuation on it. I'm wondering how this wish plays out, with some situations where Jon admires her mom more and wants to be like her? A change of scenery basically? She's a good mother and gives him the okay to take a little time off school to help adjust and give him some breathing room. Pretty mucha beach episode where Jon is free to embrace his inner woman without judgment instead of all the glares at school? And a chance for Jon and mom to make more ill advised wishes. Idk, it's great and really hope it continues.

This was a fun read! Great work :D

I loooove the oblivious changes!!! Keep it up! :D

Just wanted to say. Love your continuation of various dropped story lines. Thanks for contributing so often.

Please add more than one sentence when submitting new chapters.

1)I thought it was at the end of the day
2)This is doubling up so he still has what he had before.
3)The collar is what the other person is using to appear to have pants.

A few questions. Why is the school being locked up? He was on his way to first period when he got the drink poured on him.
Also why is he putting on a collar? He was just looking for a top and bottom to wear.
Finally, you didn't mention him picking out any pants, so is he naked below the waist?

Glad you are back, this is story is so goddammit sweet. Personally I loved Trevor showing up, maybe you could do a chapter about him and his routine with his mom, like how it is when they are alone. Again, thank you very much, you are doing an amazing here.

I'm still here, I'm still reading your wonderful stories. Whenever you feel like, please come back.

Once I got started on this part, it went through so many rewrites. Time to actually progress.

Very good! Liked the pony tail style ears. Hm wondering what instincts she’s struggling with.

Thanks! I do have ideas for the next few chapters (which will likely hit tomorrow when I'm off work and have more free time. Just a few more pieces to put on the board.

After that though I don't have the long term set in stone, so other additions might be fun!

Do you have the next few chapters plotted out in your mind, or would you welcome additions?

Keeping up the momentum for sure. Well done.

Glad you enjoyed it! I too really enjoy stories where things look dark and dire for the heroes.

As for Jon... well, it's not much fun messing with characters who aren't there anymore, so I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of him. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!

Strong start! I'm already hooked. I love the stories where the heroes find themselves in somewhat... Dire situations. lol.

I hope we don't have permanent character death of Jon, but looking forward to what you come up with next.

I most certainly look forward to it! You really did a good job working out the details and challenges of her new body.

I'm glad you like it. :) I have a couple of ideas for Barry that I'll try to write on.

Upvoted and favourited. A wonderful addition! Thank you

Gary accidentally turning Zoe into a mini Cat is something that I always thought could be a possibility in this branch. Great job with this story. Very fun.

Definitely! It's linked on the main page of the site.

Seriously, FB has a discord. Well I will consider it.

Really enjoying your contributions Marazhna, please keep going with this

Have you considered joining the FB Discord? You've got some good ideas and I like the new female character types you've created.

When you're writing a new episode or editing an old one, there's a button which says "show formatting help" which explains some things such as strikethroughs and the line breaks. I recommend giving that a read first of all. But to actually answer your question, just put a line of at least 5 hyphens after a blank line, like so:

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becomes:

How do you do the line breaks between the body and the id card stats?

Quite adorable.

@shinzon gamma

Thank you for the encouragement I will try :)

I am enjoying this story so plz keep up the good work

Hell, a bunch of chapters. You are on fire! I will read them later, also, loved that detail of Trevor long being tied up in two pigtails •ᴗ•

I'm loving it more and more to see Jon decent into being nothing but a toddler, not only that the sheer boundless intimacy between him and Biff. Also, that the detail of Jon and Biff wearing matching dress was really icing on the cake. I also enjoyed the scene of Jon being putting into a pushchair. Keep up the good work. You are writing an ABDL classic. It reminds me a little bit of "Changing Reality" by "toddlergirl", if you never heard you might like or take some inspiration. Again, thank you very much. If I was a millionaire I would buy the movie rights and make a film of your story, cause it's THAT GOOD.