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I love the direction this one is going :3

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While I think I'll still use the setting and character in my other chapter, I like the pacing of you branch much more. I also got some ideas. Thanks for the add.

Thanks. tbh. I have nothing planned. I had a mental image of a particular small town I'd passed through before, and I wanted to set the stage with some delinquent getting on the bad side of P&R.

Pretty original intro. I'm looking forward to w/e you had planned :)

thanks. Was hoping other people would post more on it to and it branch out a bit from just my own ideas though.

Thanks, thought both of the two storyline templates you started seemed really interesting, and very well detailed and thought out I'm really enjoying the P&R thread

really loving that youre running with this. you're taking this in a more interesting place then i could. c:

I love the idea of coming to work wanting to complain but being stuck saying you're happy and love your job. I can just imagine them passing them over for a promotion since they are so insistent on being happy/content with their job.

Excelent template story. And for some reason i was thinking in a asian girl right from the start lol.

Oooh interested in where this is going!

@Catprog

Sure if you wanted. I left it vague so people had space to do what they wanted on it. I try to set concepts with a good base, but leave it open enough for people to explore.

Would punishment include non human roles?

Thank you, I will take it into consideration

Jesus, that's brutal.

Why did you put a picture of a girl with brown hair?

zozo got got

ooh, fun

You have the pronouns all over the place - Karyn is she and her unless you are going to change her sex too? Only Plays use that Name: Dialogue format, it is enough to use a more natural prose format

i love this hope you keep going

thanks for adding

Thanks for adding

I really like your work

Pfff. Just realized I changed Jake’s name halfway through the episode. Fixed it now, but I can’t believe it took me so long to catch that.

I am intrigued.

Oh ho, and so this perverted journey begins anew. I'm very excited for this.

This kind of part swapping I can really really get behind. I like this a lot. I wonder what else they will try adding to him. And I wonder how long he will keep those B-cups. Also what happens if he wears clothes incorrectly. Like say, putting a bra or shirt on backwards. Or wearing clothing that has been modified. Like having other things sewn into them like extra sleeves, or bra cups.

Thanks!

This is an interesting concept, and I really like the way you wrote it from Linda’s perspective. Nice work!

Not too much experience writing in it myself, but I think it’d work really well with this storyline.

@Enjeubleu what do you think about changing the narration to first person pov?

I don't suppose it is going to take the wish literally?

Excellent choice.

The second one from the first comment.

Or her?

So something like her, more like her, or her?

Whoops, sit down at tables. In restaurants for example, there’d be difficulty navigating though close-together tables without knocking things over. Or, as I was sorta trying to get at, being unable to cross one’s legs under a low table—there’s just not the room.

Struggled to sit under tables? How do you mean?

Hi Alojz, it’s good to hear from you again! I usually keep descriptions like this kinda-vague, partly because strict measurements aren’t my thing, partly to leave creative freedom for anyone wanting to follow up—so no worries there about getting it wrong. That said, I was envisioning that Sue still has a relatively slender upper body, but hips wide enough to be genuinely inconvenient; I’ve known girls who’ve struggled to wear pants or sit under tables, and wanted to channel that. So... Hips wide as they could possibly be, without delving into the realm of being unnatural or unattractive? (Sorry I can’t be more precise)

Btw I was planning to let Jon get away with this one. You seemed not to spare him 😉

Great to see you add to this! Maybe it inspired me to return as well ;)

How large were you thinking for Sue's hips? Like, your episode conveys that they're generally larger but if you were to be more specific? I don't mean I need measurements in terms of inches more just I'd hate to write followups where I incorrectly assume Jon's new figure is narrower or wider than you have imagined it here.

D’awww, that’s really sweet. Thanks aashen!

Always glad to see more of your work. Looking forward to see what other branches get a bump from you

Been meaning to add to some older episodes. Found this one and really liked the premise, so here we go.

Is Nick actually Megan's twin at this point? He dropped the medallion after the effect went up to his waist.

When is this going to continue?? This is the most devastating cliffhanger on the whole site!

Damn, it's almost been 2 years, fuck me man

So good to see you back at it Ekempo. This should be a fun, I am wondering what this did to Jon and his intentions going forward.

I think there's plenty of room to write still before that even becomes an issue. And I feel like the best way to handle that is in some form of the compulsions he's already under - the inability to show frustration, swear, etc. in front of others. Can't complain about the way he's being treated while he's with someone, and may quickly run out of time alone being a mother / housewife / what have you. And I would certainly consider wishing away someone's behavior to be a form of complaining about it.

> What he means to ask for and what he gets are likely to be different things.

Yup, totally. Or he knows that he's asking for something kinda shit (being the masochist he is) but doesn't realise just how bad it'll be to actually live with it.

I'm struggling a bit to come up with ways to prevent him making clarifying wishes fixing things without removing the way of wishing from him altogether.