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Of course if this was supposed to be taking place in the year 2000 then gold should be 250 to 300 dollars per ounce and those 1000 ounce bars would only be worth a quarter million each.

Thanks for all the details! Appreciate the help ^_^

I hope everyone enjoys this addition! Again, I definitely will slowly be picking up the pace, but I want Jon to get entrapped by his wishes. I'm always happy to hear any recommendations for some entrapment ideas

Well, as Principal Davison notes in this episode, the change only happened an hour ago, so it's too early to tell how it will affect society. But some Transformation Guns are more obviously troublesome than others. And I've thought of ways some people might object to even the more obviously beneficial ones, like the Jock Gun. Will professional athletes be thrilled at the idea that anyone can make themselves into perfect athletic shape, meaning that they aren't as special any more?

Glad you liked the Babe Gun scene. It's one of my favorites, and was fun to write. Not just the transformation itself, but the reactions of Jacques and the audience to it. Anyway, I'm planning on writing more material with the Babe Gun in the near future. Stay tuned.

A little more info: you can modify any episode that you wrote, unless another author has written a child episode. This is to ensure that stories stay as consistent as is reasonable, and that one author can't make another person's work retroactively inconsistent. Usually this doesn't come into play for minor edits like yours, because they'll be spotted before someone else even has a chance to add another episode. But if in the future you're trying to modify an old branch of yours and you can't, this will probably be why.

Happy writing!

Really great addition. Hope you add soon!

I mean... The guns changing means they're no longer lethal. I fail to see the disaster. XD

Also, hawt. More babe guns. Yar. :D

Thanks! Fixed now :D. And thanks again for the writing compliment

Great writing! And welcome to the site—there should be a “modify episode” option at the top of the page.

Also, realized I messed up the previous title and put nolink. New to the site: any way to modify that?

Hopefully everyone enjoys. Apologies it's a bit 'slower'. Definitely like this whole idea, and am open to involuntary wishes which will help our friend Jon progress :)

I like your take on the switch! I'm interested to see where you go with this.

But don’t forget this is presumably all taking place in the year 2000 when the original fictionbranches passage was posted, so Jon should not know who fictional characters are that were created after this.

Honestly this ought to be fun for anyone else to add to. Be sure to include your favorite genius character or real life person on whatever you write for it. What will Jon have his crack team of intellectual giants cook up?

Also, i was wondering if Traver has a daddy. It would be quite fun the idea of seeing a teenage boy, who everbody treats like a little girl, being changed by a man. Hell, there is some many scenarios to explore!

Hey! I'm definitely going to come back, but I'm busy atm. It may be a bit before I'm free.

Ah I find it hard to deny a direct request sure ;)

Seems promising, write more, please :)

No probably not Mira. I was mostly thinking about this after watching a haunting youtube video called “Timelapse of the future”. I didn’t actually have a story in mind for this at all. There’s no conflict at this point, no villain, no macguffin, they simply both made mistaken wishes and are now stuck with the consequences. Feel free to write something for it yourself. Maybe have them face some problem which only they in their now botched altered states are qualified to handle.

Yay! I'm so happy someone added to family acting! I would love to see this storyline continue! You're really good!

^ ^ ^ boy, this would be a top notch story path! i defently feels that the concept of someone having their lives sorta "stolen" by someone who they already knew, would be a cool element to it. Cause, i mean, until this point every swap that happened it involved people having their lives switched with folks they didn't know previously before the swap. So, i mean, the idea of someone seeing another person living their lives, while they are now trapped in the life of that person, but only they remember that something is wrong seems worth exploring

<3 Loving where the story is going anyways. Thank you for these additions. Planning on adding more?

It seems like the whole point of this branch is just to be as confusing as possible.

It’s because they’re simps and you wrote something based and redpilled as heck that their puny minds couldn’t handle buddy. I see in the internet archive they used to have a rating out of 10 system but if you ever see this, be assured apparently all the old ratings are gone so there’s that at least. Which is also kind of a pity since a rating system is better than a simple upvote system with no downvoting but of course that’s no use if they get triggered and rate down your content for ideological reasons because they’re brainwashed slaves.

Very redpilled. But all the same I kind of would expect different behavior out of Karyn. Remember she ostensibly is best friends with Jon, that makes her probably pretty atypical for a female, I would expect better than an utter lack of sympathy, continually pidgeonholing Mark and standard shaming responses out of her. I’d almost want to continue from here but the problem is now her character is ruined beyond redemption.

This…. this is the sort of thing this website was made for.

As far as depth goes, this is nothing. Branches like 'The Bench', 'Musical Closets', and 'Iridescent Sun' have an insane amount of episodes, most of them by the same author.

Anyway, I've got more twists to come. Including some that will make the whole problem a lot harder to solve by using the most obvious method.

I kind of have to respect your dedication to writing at such depth so far in from the original starter passage.

She also left off the part about only respawning as soon as it is safe to do so without immediately getting killed again or severely injured

No problem :)

Thank you so much User 616, now to go modify episodes.

Have you got the formatting correct? You need 

@Hikaru It doesn't even have to be that... it might be that the best romantic match in terms of personality an interest is a guy... and I though I could have sworn I wrote it to only include women... going back to check I didn't. So it could match him with another guy and change them both. Or change their sexualities. Or give them transformation powers. Though technically the "satisfy each other" part should only kick in if they decide to start a relationship.

Still having trouble getting images to embed.

What a ride! Look at Zoe making the mature decision, but still not thinking it through. Who knows how many more episodes Jon, er Sandra, might have over the next week.

Awesome addition! Always love a thicc, submissive Jon. Can't wait to see the next addition!

I was thinking it could be messed up if the perfect partners wish worked properly, but Jon messed up a wish in some other way and the perfect partners made it worse--Jon changes into a girl for some other, temporary reason, and the perfect partners wish finds him a partner while he's a girl.

Nice!

Totally different idea of the "will both be able to satisfy each other" thing than what I had in mind. Love seeing your take.

At some point I'm going to write my planned take. Which was more they gain sort of powers based on the other persons deep fantasies/fetishes... which might change over time.

Really fun chapter, looking forward to what you do with it. I have to wonder if Sarah isn't going to get a change as well.

I think broom said it very well. Read what you enjoy. Don't read what you don't enjoy. For my part I don't even look at the number of upvotes before skimming something, the upvote has always seemed to be more of a passive encouragement for the author rather than a mark of what's good or bad.

There an old story called "A Whole New World" by Bfboy, also about reality alteration and ABDL, where a group of young adults are teleported to an alternate reality where they are treated like babies, you and your readers might like reading it as well:

https://web.archive.org/web/20220618045724/https://paste.ee/r/WyIWL

Hmm, I tried putting it parenthesis as the formatting directed but it's still showing up as just text for me. What error am I making?

@Gooose: when you add an episode, there is a "show formatting help" button just below the title textbox. Clicking it will show you all of the rules to FB's formatting system.

The relevant part for you here is that putting a URL link with an image extension in parentheses will embed the image, but there are all sorts of formatting options you might want to use in the future.

Excellent. Cant wait to read it

I really like Jon being embarrassed, I think there is many scenarios work exploring, like he being changed naked in publicly and so on. Keep up the good work 👌

I can understand why DevArt needs something like that. There are thousands of new additions per day and for artists offering commissions gaming the system means more money coming their way.

Here, the community is small enough you quickly learn to recognize authors by name for good or for ill. And awesome stuff like the "Iridescent Sun"-story predate the whole upvote-system and are literally underrated as a result. So checking out zero-upvote additions to branches you like the concept of, is a good policy anyway.

Upvotes seem more of a way to pat the author on the back for work well done, without jumping the hurdle of composing an original sounding comment.

Not sure if there's a better way to embed an image.

matisguy I have seen some “empty “ pages, I suspect that’s what happened, that the writer of a page deleted it even though it had descendant pages and the result was a page with empty as a title and no text but followup pages.

Hi Everybody, I have some idea for continuation for this cool branch, but probably won't be able to submit updates regularly. Sorry! Also sorry if my English is far from perfect, but doing my best here! Any remarks will be appreciated!

On a side note: I know that in parent story Karyn's surname is Johnson, but somehow the surname "Blacks" fits better for me. For now let's assume that her mother had kept her maiden name, and we will see if I will have to refer to Karyn by her surname later on...

Oh great, another one written by a writer that thinks the world is set against females. What a surprise considering the writer has a girl’s name.