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I am absolutely loving this

I'm really falling in love with this story more and more with every new chapter. One thing I was wondering, I think the same way reality was bend to make Traver and John as lightweight as actual babies, maybe reality was also bend so that whenever Biff tried to use the bathroom, the pee just go downwards, like defining the law of gravity, I think it would be a funny concept.

Also, maybe you're not into it, you are the writer here, but I really think that in the same way Karen is stuck living the life of a woman, it would be somewhat funny to have some woman living the life of a little boy?

Although there isn't much difference in the life of a baby boy and a baby girl, so maybe it won't be interesting to simply put a woman in the kindergarten being treated as a baby boy...

So maybe, I don't know, showing a girly girl stuck in the life of a 10 years old boy or so (which obviously starts to differ from the life of a 10 years old girl and so on). I just found the concept of a girly teenage girl, who are into pretty stuff, having to be a "disgusting" little boy who plays in the mud and do other disgusting little boy things, absolutely HATING to not be able to wear her pretty dresses and doing ballet, and maybe even being bullied because of showing any behaviour that is not the expect from a teenage boy. The idea of one, instead of falling into their roles like all the previous characters, just feeling miserable and hopelessly, and straight out hating their new lives seems interesting, although somewhat dark, obviously.

Maybe a teenage girl switched lives with her young brother, but, like, she remembers what happened, but he doesn't, he just thinks he was always a young teenage girl. I find amazingly dark the idea of a teenage girl feeling envy of her young brother cause now he is living her life and doing ballet and wearing her pretty dresses anda yadda yadda, while she has to play stupid child games and stuff.

Also, another reality alteration that would be interesting, in the sense of preventing people from getting out of their roles is: in the same way that Trevor and John aren't able to tell others what is going on (people just hear nonsense baby noises), maybe, if we are talking about a person stuck in the life of anyone who isn't a baby, that person simply not being able to tell others, like whenever they tried... they simply can't form the words and speak out.

I've said it before but I'll say it again: I am loving this story. This is one of the few long term branches that has stayed consistently good AND has the transformation process be something I am naturally interested in. I love how the TF mechanism is technically partially under Jon's control, but he still has to struggle to figure out what works and doesn't. Please don't stop.

because in the future, most things will have space in their names. The best place to buy space pies will be space arby’s where they’ll have a deal where you get a space soda for free with the purchase of a space pie and a space sandwich, but only on space wednesdays

>Thus gentle touch from Sharon's hand was all it took to send Trevor over the edge and he exploded with an orgasm

I'm so glad I find this story! You are a LEGEND, dude! I love this, I don't know even know how to describe, like he is pervert but no matter what he does, people just see a baby girl. I wish I was a billionaire to make a movie out of this story 👌 Thank you so much. Those sort of stories, involving role swap/ABDL with reality alteration are somewhat to come by, so I just to thank you so much, cause you are very gifted author written an amazing story.

Thanks! :)

This is so hot. One of my favorite branches rn. You're really good. I would like to see they doing it while Jon watches. :)

Keep up the great work, I always look forward to your new chapters.

The link looks valid on our end, which probably means that Discord itself is having a hiccup, and unfortunately there's not much we can do. We've made a temporary invite for now that expires a week from this posting (expiry: 06/18/22), and hopefully that solves the problem:

https://discord.gg/N4ycm2Jz

Indeed. This is why I always keep a 'Whole Story so Far' open in another tab when writing new episodes in a long-running thread.

For example, in Transformation Guns, I keep that tab open so that when I think about bringing in another member of the quasi-canon cast, I have to look back and see if they've appeared or been mentioned before, and if so what was their last known status and whereabouts in the story leading up to the episode I'm writing.

And the more characters (quasi-canon or new ones introduced in that story) one brings in and the more they get changed, swapped, or whatever, the more you have to keep track of. It can be tricky, but as long as one looks back on what's come before frequently, it can be managed.

I would, but DIscord seems to be having troubles. The 'invite' expired for some reason.

The other principals mentioned are all principals of Jon and Karyn's high school in other branches. Principal Davison is the one that appears in the most branches. But I thought it'd be fun to mention the others as existing in the world this branch is set in, but as former principals or ones that were in the running at the same time as Simon Davison, but didn't get the job in this particular branch. I made sure they were all 'default' principals in those branches (as opposed to those who later get the job via magical shenanigans).

It's been a while since I ended an episode with a 'who gets transformed' cliffhanger. Loved doing that. Got some more twists to come, including the origin of the Transformation Guns.

Interested to see where this goes. Seems foolish of Sarah and that it will come back to bite her with John caring less about the wishes.

Thanks! That means a lot! <3

Digging this thread a lot. Can't wait to see where it goes.

I got a little distracted with the "what if" of having Sarah and Karyn swap, but this episode's more in line with where I want this thread to go

>Without even thinking he had reached out and grabbed one of her breasts and started to paw at it
>He stood up, now wearing only a small vest with ruffled edges on the straps, a pair of tights and a sagging diaper between his legs
>Trevor looked down at what he was wearing. The front of the night dress said "cutest little princess" but he couldn't read it. It was bright pink and the neckline and sleeve ends had frilly lace all around them.

Best story ever 👌

In the Jungle you must wait, til' the slots read 5 or 8.

it also seems like they should have been unaware of any ordeal happening at all. If the mom had wished they would become more than just friends sure, but she wished they were more than just friends, so history should have just changed with them thinking they were like that all their lives instead of spectacularly merging together. Of course that would not be as fun to read.

This is meant to be fun little side project while I work on other stuff, so expect splitting branches and things going in weird directions. Random ideas are very much appreciated

Nice! I’m excited to see where you go with this!

Heeeeey, I missed that bit! That was awesome, Nothingsp, as always!

Hey I like your chapter too, I just had my own take in mind for it

This branch is soooooooooo hot

Thanks! :)
There's definitely more to come I just need to find time in the day to write it up.

And thus the world changed and became as it is right now, a world in which women can vote but are exempt from the draft, where women always get custody in a divorce, where the only reproductive choice a man has is the choice between paying child support or going to jail while women get endless choices, where men are forced to pay child support for children that aren’t even theirs, a world where if a woman drugs a man and rapes him while he’s unconscious the courts will still side with her and make him pay child support if she chooses to have his child, a world where domestic violence against men is not taken seriously and all domestic violence shelters accept in only women, where if a man calls the police and tells them he is being attacked by a woman, they will come by and arrest him, while she gets free legal assistance from feminist organizations, and a world where it’s always women and children first and men are expected to sacrifice themselves, and a world where women are exempt from statutory rape laws, a world where a woman can destroy a man’s whole future with one wild accusation with no evidence, where all scholarships that are available to one sex and not the other, are available only to women, where all of STEM industries give preferential hiring to women, and yet after all this, women control the public narrative and have everyone convinced they are oppressed and that men are the privileged ones.

Thanks a lot Karyn, such a good friend of Jon’s you turned out to be.

Catmageddon. I thought about calling it that in the title but decided not to since the plot was a little serious and not entirely inane.

Big fan of this branch, looking forward to more

I miss the story so much :( If possible don't abandon it, it could go through so many paths, so many things could be explored :)

Sometimes you just have to eat perfectly cooked faces and hands together Mary, for the sake of a friendship.

Well thanks Noy2222 for fixing the misspelled Sarahs and changing carful into careful and two of the three “were”s spelled “where”, but note you still missed one in the first paragraph.

Yeah, because becoming a girl is a horrible fate.

Caaaarl!

so I’ve kind of set it up with a situation like the video “Llamas With Hats” where there’s the incredibly evil llama who’s for some reason friends with the sensible llama and does terrible things to others, just never to his friend. Jon and Karyn now find themselves in the eye of the hurricane with unique special status, but no one else is safe.

not buying the premise that she’d want to do that to him given the premise she’s not a nasty woman after all

Maybe one day. Feel free to add or suggest an idea. Just been writing elsewhere

Ah but it's a paradox. The fact that he wished for that proved that he was responsible and therefore worthy of it, while if the stone found someone else to use it, they would be less worthy than Jon.

Well this is probably the most underrated thing on fictionbranches. 25 views after 5 years and it was better than well over 90% of the things on here.....

I love how the hole Allison is in just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I'm really curious to see how this all plays out. Thanks for writing these chapters.

Well, obviously Allison as a beautiful and sexy girl. And pregnant. And that she is powerless to escape her situation.

based on the title, I was expecting a world where time worked differently, like maybe a “Groundhog Day” world so everyone literally had no concept of such a thing as “tomorrow” even existing

Maybe I should stop having them both use the word “then” so much. I want them to sound like different people after all, and not just both following scripts of the same writer. Probably I should reread the original introduction chapter to see how they talk and if there is anything distinguishing them from each other.

She’s the one unworthy of friendship. If he had done this to her, he wouldn’t have shone the stone to her at all in the first place, he would just have wished for her body to have been changed and she’d not only not know he was the cause, she’d never have known she wasn’t always that way. If she’s that toxic who needs a friendship with her.

Glad you're enjoying. Hoping to keep pumping these out a bit more quickly than I have been.

Dude... I am drooling. Soooo good!

“the most intense”, sounds like it will simply be instantly fatal. This could easily turn into a horror story despite its original intent.

Did it maybe mean to say “that when the conditions of the following wish are satisfied ”? I feel like an “are satisfied” was meant to be in there or else the sentence doesn’t make sense.

Unless of course we specify Madison is Jon’s mother’s maiden name and last name of his grandfather. Then it could technically be the Madison house.

Even so, no one’s reading the thing I put so much time into, which I posted 2 hours earlier. I guess they don’t want to spend the time investment to read all the stuff before it.

Sometimes, man, ya just gotta roll with the glorious stupidity.