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No problem with your suggestions. Truthfully, I like hearing from the audience. Half the reason I write is for comments, so you commenting only encourages me :D.

Onto your ideas:

Hair is a perfect one. I had a wish idea related to that one, basically make hair (mentally) a completely vital part of John's body, to mimic how important hair might be to a woman of Jon's age.
Car repair is good too! I'd make John an idiot regarding vehicles
A call to visit a friend....hm. I love this one

Thanks again for your suggestions!

Hm. I like those ideas, don't get me wrong, but I also sorta like the idea of making a character independent from Jon. I'm split. Thank you for your suggestions :)

If there was a wish for his family coming back, there would need to be a reason for Joan to be in their house. Maybe by making Joan the sister of one of Jon's parents, or she's a family friend, or even something more "spicy" like she's in a polygamous realtionship with Jon's parents. If Jon wants his MILF life to be pornographic, that definitely would fit in well.

IMO these chapters are the perfect length and level of detail.

As for her schedule, she might have to do things like get her hair/nails done, go shopping for new clothes, go to the bank, perhaps theres an issue with her minivan so she has to take it to a shop, or she gets a call to go visit a friend. All relatively mundane things, but with the wishes made so far (and any new ones of course) could have potential for fun and sexy scenes.

(Also i hope my suggestions so far aren't making it feel like I'm telling you how to write your story, I just really enjoy it so far and am excited to see where it goes!)

Thanks for the suggestion Dargozo :D. Used it, in a somewhat modified form - I appreciate your suggestions!

For the second suggestion, I like the idea. Some ideas I had with it were:

Jon wishes an alternate version of himself, Jon Gibson, were somewhere in the city, with a fake wishing stone that didn't work.
Jon then, through his own idiocy, wishes that this Jon Gibson was completely sentient and functioned as him until the 48 hours was up
Jon wishes his family began to return from their camping trip.
Don't know how I wanted this to go

I hope I am not making too long of chapters for your liking. Sometimes I get bogged down in detail. Any ideas for what a MILF without children might do for their schedule?

Really love this thread! Great job! Can't wait to see what this all ads up to for Jon and how significant him waking up on his mom's side of the bed turns out to be. Amazing chapter!

This is such a hot story so far. Perhaps an inadvertent wish could be that when around people like the neighbor boys, Jon starts to act a little clumsy and ends up in sexy teasing situations (e.g. bending over a little too far so they can see down her blouse. Or accidentally spilling the lemonade down her cleavage)

Also maybe at some point Jon's family could come back home but a wish makes them believe Joan is supposed to be there instead of Jon.

Well, I provided enough clues so that if anyone actually wanted to work out that treasure hunt math puzzle from a few episodes back, they can do it, but I suspect most people don't come to FB for math puzzles. :) Anyway, I deliberately left the other Transformation Guns in the box unidentified so that I could move the story forward from 'Day one' while still leaving it open for new Transformation Guns that haven't been mentioned before to be revealed later.

This will be the last piecemeal/slower chapter. Hopefully my pacing isn't too slow! Suggestions for what happens here are always appreciated ;D

I love both suggestions :). Will probably put my spin on them, but thank you both for the suggestions/critique!

I have no idea why, but my brain decided that Dr. Michaels sounds exactly like the Disney character, Professor Ludwig Von Drake. This isn't a good thing or a bad thing, but it is a thing and I felt that you should know.

Loved the idea of Jon getting horny every time he saves money at the store. Having such a mundane thing be come exciting for him is great. Things like that could be a reward for him to make him more willing to slip into the MILF lifestyle. Like a wish that every time a task is completed he has an orgasm would be fun in both making him like what's happening and having to hide the orgasm if there's anybody else around

Great chapter! Amazing imagery and deep dive into what should be a simple chore. Really showed how Joan isn't a hunter anymore, she's a gatherer and takes delight in it. It's a social event also with real stakes. Really fun read.

As for a suggestion, maybe Jon gets roped into hosting a book club or wine tasting night with the other mom's at the PTA night which is just an excuse to drink and gossip, complain about their kids, and swap stories of their sex life. Jon could wish he wouldn't be so bored about it and becomes enthralled and captivated by these lady's stories of passionate sex, possibly fantasizing about more of an exhibitionist streak with his husband. The wish possibly giving him vivid memories of his own bedroom escapades so he has something racy to share with everyone else?

I'd love to hear suggestions for wishes, both voluntary and involuntarily, for Jon. Happy to hear feedback as well :p

Stay tuned cause I did have something like this in mind

I hope it's not too weird, but would you consider having a girl who got her dog's penis?

This is probably the most detailed description of a math class in Fiction Branches. I also managed to find a use for the 'tables' feature in Markdown, working it in to the episode in a manner that makes sense.

Not so much giving away as reading my pieces correctly~! I really need to finish the Sly Cooper games.

I'm thinking "fearless leader" from Rocky and Bullwinkel had some effect on the chief's description. Also, finding the Batman / Catwoman setup interesting. Or am I giving away the direction this story is headed?

I really like this fun story-thread. The wishes go in surprising directions and everything feels like it is just for fun. There are (till now) no real consequences. And while I expect that will change when the heist will happen you have me hooked in this weird world you have created in just a few wishes.

"I wish Jon was eating his favorite hair accessory" Somehow I doubt "eating" was the word you intended to use here.

I like what you’re doing here, so I hope you don’t mind if I reboot it slightly.

Looking forward to seeing how this affects Jon's memories now

Thanks, I’ve got big plans for this story, but I’d be interested to see what others think/want to add

I know this site is titled Fiction Branches (meaning the events depicted in all the story content here are fictitious and any similarity to actual events is coincidental), but I still felt compelled to write that disclaimer at the start of this episode anyway, just in case someone wandered in and saw this out of context. I thought it best to err on the side of caution.

I like what you've set up. Can't wait to see the extent of this whole family shake up!

It's possible that a wishing coin could reverse a stone wish, or vice versa. And maybe another wishing coin could reverse another wishing coin wish. Of course, I have a few ideas in mind. Especially about what might happen when two people make seemingly mutually exclusive wishes on wishing coins at the same time.

Can a wishing coin reverse a stone wish or vice versa, or a wishing coin reverse another wishing coin wish?

So yes, the letter ends up being very long and taking up most of the episode's length, but there's a lot that needed to be addressed. This is mostly setup for all sorts of other possibilities, with the letter explaining the Wishing Coins being pretty much the equivalent of the letter explaining the wishing stone in the very first episode.

Thanks for the upvote! I had more fun writing this episode than the expository episode that follows, because I generally like writing not just about wishes and magic, but also about the consequences of the way wishes are worded.

I also had fun giving lunchlady Enid Parkes (an extremely minor bit player in the Transformation Guns branch) a moment in the spotlight. While the students of various cliques and communities get plenty of episodes focusing on them in Fiction Branches, it's not often we give the cafeteria staff much attention.

I edited this and the other episodes a bit to refer to the new building as a Performing Arts Center, so as not to confuse it with a real life chain of music stores.

Working out exactly how the stone handles time travel was going to be part of the fun/central conflict of the branch from here, I imagined, so I can't really say what exactly would happen from here.

However, it's basically established by the root episode that the stone can in fact change the past, if only to make things so that a wish "had always been that way." That's a sort-of time travel aspect that's always been there, sending magic itself backwards in time to make changes, and Zelda recognized that right away here. So of COURSE the first thing she does with this knowledge is try to abuse it, right?

She's supposed to be Zelda Whitefield. This is an old episode back from when I was vaguely aware Zelda existed but I didn't actually know her last name yet.

I had a power failure TWICE while working on this episode. Fortunately, I saved most of it to text. And it allowed me more time to revise things I wasn't satisfied with. I greatly shortened Samantha's recap of what happened, and worked in some more material with Rachel and the transformed Richard McMillan.

So, yeah. The moral of this episode is: Don't use some weird transformation ray on your boss, or you'll not only get fired but get stuck in some form different than the one you started out with. :)

I'm trying to figure out how time travel is supposed to work here. What Zelda's saying makes a certain amount of sense, in that the stone was still capable of telling them all this information about the death bubble and its origin, even though it was currently several light years out of the stone's range.

However, if the wish she makes at the end of the episode comes true, then things would be different. If all of them knew yesterday what they did today, they wouldn't have the same conversation that led to the wish being made. Unless you go for the 'branching timelines' theory of time travel. I'm thinking of adding something here addressing that and the possible consequences of that.

"Athena DeVries exhaled a puff of air through her nose in that way one does when stumbling across something mildly funny on the internet." I'll admit I've done that a number of times myself.

Just wondering: Is Zelda Lorentz supposed to be Zelda Whitefield (Zoe and Athena's cybergoth friend from other branches), or is she a different Zelda introduced in this particular branch?

These days the word 'hero' is an accepted term for a heroic person of any gender. But I suppose the old wizard here is used to it being a gender-specific term.

Seeing Jon totally regressed, even for a few minutes, made me think that a scenario of an adult baby totally permanently regressed might be an interesting addition to this story. Maybe not with Jon nor Trevor, cause I think the essence of them both living in this sorta intermediary world of being a teenage boy and yet sometimes going full baby mode, I think this duality really suits their character development.

But, like, in the same way that Trevor is taking advantage of his new mother, maybe a new character might appear in this story. Maybe one of Jon's female school friends from his old life might appear in the kindergarten as "the new baby", but she – unlike Jon and Trevor – doesn't know anything is wrong, she acts like a little baby and truly believes it. I think it would be fun the idea of Jon "taking advantage" and being naughty with her, it's not fair that Trevor and Biff are the only ones here having some fun with their new lives. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Maybe, to make this more of a "Jon thing", the new baby might be the child of some of Biff's work friends, to give Jon and her some privacy, I don't know... some situation excluding Trevor, so that Jon and his new friend might have some fun alone all by themselves. Maybe some other mom at Biff's work brings her daughter to a child play date at Biff's house?

Anyway, again thank you very much for writing this story I'm loving to read it, I come here every day looking for new chapters. And honestly, at this point, I already consider it one of the best ABDL stories I read on the internet on all these years. I like it because most stories end up being heavily pornographic and neglect other elements of the story, but yours, there are obviously erotic elements, but you don't go overboard, and you know to measure hints of arousing scenes, without making it to sound "that dirty", if that makes any sense. Like when Trevor was having an erection while exploring his mom's body and you described how in the same scene a part of his mind was afraid of him being a bad baby and making his mommy angry.

This duality and fine-tuned between erotism and innocence I think you really nailed it.

Nice seeing Jon getting frustrated and being forced to communicate through the most basic words ever ◕‿◕ More scenes of frustration and Jon, getting embarrassed, please !

I updated the newspaper story in this branch to the headline that did appear in April of 2020.

Interesting reading an episode set in 2020 but written years before then. :)

I have been reading a lot on this artificial intelligence art creation, images and videos and visual depictions – very interesting subject by the way, DALL-E, and deep learning and so on, and this scene you described of this teenage boy being breastfeed in the middle of the mall, I wish I am alive in the day that machines will be able to create a visual depiction of this scene you so beautifully described. A beautifully arousing moment.

Not only that but... the contrast you created, I mean Sharon was like "oh, I will cover my boobs because I don't want some horny perv erection-driven man, maybe even an erection-driven teenage boy staring at my breasts" and this is honestly brilliant to me. Like, she covered her boobs, probably indicating that she is more of a traditional inclined woman, as I understand some more modern women nowadays don't cover her breast while breastfeeding, but not Sharon.. meanwhile... well there is a "fucking perv erection-driven teenage boy" trapped in the life of her daughter who is not only staring at her boobs but actually touching and breastfeeding out of it while gets a violent erection.

And Sharon can't even imagine what she is doing, like she is inadvertently and by no fault of her own doing things that people in our real reality would only do in porn movies or in the privacy of their own bedroom and SHE IS DOING THOSE THINGS IN PUBLIC!

The shear absurdity of this new reality, the contrast between a scene that for anyone who isn't under this freakish spell would sound absurd and freak, for those people who are under such spell it is just..... normal, just a mommy nursing her baby, as innocent as it can get.

Well done, well done.

I couldn't resist this one, a way of working in one of the new additions to the Lake Point High School cast I introduced in another branch into this one. This wish seems like one someone like Starla Stanfield would seem likely to make. And of course while this wish will certainly have its consequences infrastructure wise (parking is likely to be a problem given the school's new neighbor), there's still plenty of potential for more wish mischief here.

I'm enjoying seeing Jon sorta humiliation, it would be nice more scenarios of Biff forcing Jon to act as the baby that he is now

>In his old life Jon and Karyn had both been aware of a certain unspoken sexual tension between them. On Karyns side that was replaced with parental love for Jon but Jon still had enough self awareness to notice that he was sitting right next to Karyn's boobs

I find it amazing this sort of weird "love triangle" between two teenage boys trapped in the life of two females and an actual female, well done on exploring this idea.