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Interested to see where this goes. Seems foolish of Sarah and that it will come back to bite her with John caring less about the wishes.

Thanks! That means a lot! <3

Digging this thread a lot. Can't wait to see where it goes.

I got a little distracted with the "what if" of having Sarah and Karyn swap, but this episode's more in line with where I want this thread to go

>Without even thinking he had reached out and grabbed one of her breasts and started to paw at it
>He stood up, now wearing only a small vest with ruffled edges on the straps, a pair of tights and a sagging diaper between his legs
>Trevor looked down at what he was wearing. The front of the night dress said "cutest little princess" but he couldn't read it. It was bright pink and the neckline and sleeve ends had frilly lace all around them.

Best story ever 👌

In the Jungle you must wait, til' the slots read 5 or 8.

it also seems like they should have been unaware of any ordeal happening at all. If the mom had wished they would become more than just friends sure, but she wished they were more than just friends, so history should have just changed with them thinking they were like that all their lives instead of spectacularly merging together. Of course that would not be as fun to read.

This is meant to be fun little side project while I work on other stuff, so expect splitting branches and things going in weird directions. Random ideas are very much appreciated

Nice! I’m excited to see where you go with this!

Heeeeey, I missed that bit! That was awesome, Nothingsp, as always!

Hey I like your chapter too, I just had my own take in mind for it

This branch is soooooooooo hot

Thanks! :)
There's definitely more to come I just need to find time in the day to write it up.

And thus the world changed and became as it is right now, a world in which women can vote but are exempt from the draft, where women always get custody in a divorce, where the only reproductive choice a man has is the choice between paying child support or going to jail while women get endless choices, where men are forced to pay child support for children that aren’t even theirs, a world where if a woman drugs a man and rapes him while he’s unconscious the courts will still side with her and make him pay child support if she chooses to have his child, a world where domestic violence against men is not taken seriously and all domestic violence shelters accept in only women, where if a man calls the police and tells them he is being attacked by a woman, they will come by and arrest him, while she gets free legal assistance from feminist organizations, and a world where it’s always women and children first and men are expected to sacrifice themselves, and a world where women are exempt from statutory rape laws, a world where a woman can destroy a man’s whole future with one wild accusation with no evidence, where all scholarships that are available to one sex and not the other, are available only to women, where all of STEM industries give preferential hiring to women, and yet after all this, women control the public narrative and have everyone convinced they are oppressed and that men are the privileged ones.

Thanks a lot Karyn, such a good friend of Jon’s you turned out to be.

Catmageddon. I thought about calling it that in the title but decided not to since the plot was a little serious and not entirely inane.

Big fan of this branch, looking forward to more

I miss the story so much :( If possible don't abandon it, it could go through so many paths, so many things could be explored :)

Sometimes you just have to eat perfectly cooked faces and hands together Mary, for the sake of a friendship.

Well thanks Noy2222 for fixing the misspelled Sarahs and changing carful into careful and two of the three “were”s spelled “where”, but note you still missed one in the first paragraph.

Yeah, because becoming a girl is a horrible fate.

Caaaarl!

so I’ve kind of set it up with a situation like the video “Llamas With Hats” where there’s the incredibly evil llama who’s for some reason friends with the sensible llama and does terrible things to others, just never to his friend. Jon and Karyn now find themselves in the eye of the hurricane with unique special status, but no one else is safe.

not buying the premise that she’d want to do that to him given the premise she’s not a nasty woman after all

Maybe one day. Feel free to add or suggest an idea. Just been writing elsewhere

Ah but it's a paradox. The fact that he wished for that proved that he was responsible and therefore worthy of it, while if the stone found someone else to use it, they would be less worthy than Jon.

Well this is probably the most underrated thing on fictionbranches. 25 views after 5 years and it was better than well over 90% of the things on here.....

I love how the hole Allison is in just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I'm really curious to see how this all plays out. Thanks for writing these chapters.

Well, obviously Allison as a beautiful and sexy girl. And pregnant. And that she is powerless to escape her situation.

based on the title, I was expecting a world where time worked differently, like maybe a “Groundhog Day” world so everyone literally had no concept of such a thing as “tomorrow” even existing

Maybe I should stop having them both use the word “then” so much. I want them to sound like different people after all, and not just both following scripts of the same writer. Probably I should reread the original introduction chapter to see how they talk and if there is anything distinguishing them from each other.

She’s the one unworthy of friendship. If he had done this to her, he wouldn’t have shone the stone to her at all in the first place, he would just have wished for her body to have been changed and she’d not only not know he was the cause, she’d never have known she wasn’t always that way. If she’s that toxic who needs a friendship with her.

Glad you're enjoying. Hoping to keep pumping these out a bit more quickly than I have been.

Dude... I am drooling. Soooo good!

“the most intense”, sounds like it will simply be instantly fatal. This could easily turn into a horror story despite its original intent.

Did it maybe mean to say “that when the conditions of the following wish are satisfied ”? I feel like an “are satisfied” was meant to be in there or else the sentence doesn’t make sense.

Unless of course we specify Madison is Jon’s mother’s maiden name and last name of his grandfather. Then it could technically be the Madison house.

Even so, no one’s reading the thing I put so much time into, which I posted 2 hours earlier. I guess they don’t want to spend the time investment to read all the stuff before it.

Sometimes, man, ya just gotta roll with the glorious stupidity.

I just realized a potential dilemma for Jon. I'm not sure how it could be put into the storyline, but if Jon is fully-encased in latex, then he can't use the stone. Because he has to be able to touch the stone to use it. Of course, it wouldn't be a problem if he could somehow take the latex off, but what if he can't, for some reason?

@Thisisnota_Realname: Cool interpretation. If that's how you want to write the story, then you can add that chapter. There's a million different ways any story can go, which is part of what's so great about this format. Not every story has to follow strict rules, and sometimes they're written with multiple possible interpretations on purpose, to allow for more ideas. As long as the reader can follow what's going on, it's still fun. Heck, if you see something that you think it inconsistent, you can even add a chapter that plays up that inconsistency. See where it takes you.

But most of all, remember: this is a place for fun writing, nobody's getting a Pulitzer or a Hugo out of this website. Take it easy, try not to be so negative, and show your fellow writers some support. and you'll be amazed at how much your experience here improves :)

pretty sure this was written by a prepubescent girl

But if someone else comes along and wishes on the stone, their wish almost certainly will not apply to either Jon or Karyn. So it won’t affect them both since it won’t affect either one of them. Jon also wished for any wish affecting one if them to affect the other. That is still not asking for it to be the same effect. So for instance if he wished to go to Cornell, she would still not be forced to go to Cornell, she would merely be affected by his departure for Cornell, which she would be anyway. I don’t know but maybe you ought to reword this a bit.

this is so stupid I don’t have any idea how to continue the story, but still, I couldn’t resist.

#fundamentallymissingthepoint

You get notified for comments on your own writing, but not comments on other's writing. I just have a habit of keeping an eye on the "Recent Comments" page to see new comments/replies as they're posted.

Are you able to monitor others’ comments on others’ writing or is it a coincidence you seem to keep leaving comments within minutes of me leaving comments of my own?

A pity this seems to be getting less attention than most of the other things I’ve been writing.

You also use the Madison name here. You only corrected the first one. It’s a pity since Madison is a much better name than Gibson, but they already called him Gibson earlier. It’s like the stone itself, once specified in a branch, that is the way it is, and the stuff that is written in the future stemming from that branch must conform to it and can’t go back on what was written earlier in that branch.

Ok. So what. If I encounter such a branch and I add a chapter to it, I will use the name that was established in direct descendant branches, no matter what the name is. It doesn’t seem hard to me. It’s like the stone itself, once specified in a branch, that is the way it is, and the stuff that is written in the future stemming from that branch must conform to it and can’t go back on what was written earlier in that branch.

I suspected as much. But it keeps telling me I have 7 new notifications so even though they appear to be from the site itself, I was holding out hope.