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Wow, all 3 choices sound like fun!

Ima really liking this. Who wouldn't want to be Sarah? I wonder how much free will he actually has?
Please continue!

Oh, I hadn’t actually thought of going for that angle. I might try and work it into a later chapter though. Thanks :D

I predicted this all wrong... I thought his reaction was because he was feeling what would be felt if an adult hit on a teenage girl....

Reaaally interesting.

Can't wait to see what he does to fix this, only to make things worse LOL

Loving the recent chapters, great work. Not too be too needy, but think we might see Lydia either having an awkward night or morning with her first erection?

This is comedic gold as well as being really interesting to read in the context of this branch.

interesting

Awesome chapter. I loved the way Sandra's sexuality is starting to creep into Jon's mind. I hope there will be plenty of action in the upcoming week, both in alone time and with Karyn's father.
And I hope both Sandra and Zoe will settle into their new roles more and more as the week goes on.
Now I'm wishing it had been a month, or even a year until they could use the stone. Loving this story.

Great story so far!!!

Oooooh, gotta be good if she's being singled out. Dare I hope it's a dog dick between her legs?

And I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Yeah, it irks me every time Zoe uses Jon instead of mom.

I thought I could use the mis-phrasing as a way to show Zoe's mindset and how she feels about Jon's role in a given moment, showing that she's changing and finding it harder and harder to see her Jon in there.

Good point. What about Zoe's father? Karyn referred to her as "Miss Gibson", but whoever it was had to have been around long enough to help create Zoe, right?

I'm surprised Zoe's wish didn't compel her to always refer to Jon as Mom, considering all the other changes it made to their lives.

Zoe is the one making careless wishes, but she refuses to give the stone to Jon on the pretense that he might make a careless wish. That's messed up.
Love the way Jon turned out, especially the F-boobs. Great writing.

I like this concept

Thanks. I’ve got a lot of ideas for this story so stay tuned

No problem with your suggestions. Truthfully, I like hearing from the audience. Half the reason I write is for comments, so you commenting only encourages me :D.

Onto your ideas:

• Hair is a perfect one. I had a wish idea related to that one, basically make hair (mentally) a completely vital part of John's body, to mimic how important hair might be to a woman of Jon's age.
• Car repair is good too! I'd make John an idiot regarding vehicles
• A call to visit a friend....hm. I love this one

Thanks again for your suggestions!

Hm. I like those ideas, don't get me wrong, but I also sorta like the idea of making a character independent from Jon. I'm split. Thank you for your suggestions :)

If there was a wish for his family coming back, there would need to be a reason for Joan to be in their house. Maybe by making Joan the sister of one of Jon's parents, or she's a family friend, or even something more "spicy" like she's in a polygamous realtionship with Jon's parents. If Jon wants his MILF life to be pornographic, that definitely would fit in well.

IMO these chapters are the perfect length and level of detail.

As for her schedule, she might have to do things like get her hair/nails done, go shopping for new clothes, go to the bank, perhaps theres an issue with her minivan so she has to take it to a shop, or she gets a call to go visit a friend. All relatively mundane things, but with the wishes made so far (and any new ones of course) could have potential for fun and sexy scenes.

(Also i hope my suggestions so far aren't making it feel like I'm telling you how to write your story, I just really enjoy it so far and am excited to see where it goes!)

Thanks for the suggestion Dargozo :D. Used it, in a somewhat modified form - I appreciate your suggestions!

For the second suggestion, I like the idea. Some ideas I had with it were:

• Jon wishes an alternate version of himself, Jon Gibson, were somewhere in the city, with a fake wishing stone that didn't work.
• Jon then, through his own idiocy, wishes that this Jon Gibson was completely sentient and functioned as him until the 48 hours was up
• Jon wishes his family began to return from their camping trip.
  Don't know how I wanted this to go

I hope I am not making too long of chapters for your liking. Sometimes I get bogged down in detail. Any ideas for what a MILF without children might do for their schedule?

Really love this thread! Great job! Can't wait to see what this all ads up to for Jon and how significant him waking up on his mom's side of the bed turns out to be. Amazing chapter!

This is such a hot story so far. Perhaps an inadvertent wish could be that when around people like the neighbor boys, Jon starts to act a little clumsy and ends up in sexy teasing situations (e.g. bending over a little too far so they can see down her blouse. Or accidentally spilling the lemonade down her cleavage)

Also maybe at some point Jon's family could come back home but a wish makes them believe Joan is supposed to be there instead of Jon.

Well, I provided enough clues so that if anyone actually wanted to work out that treasure hunt math puzzle from a few episodes back, they can do it, but I suspect most people don't come to FB for math puzzles. :) Anyway, I deliberately left the other Transformation Guns in the box unidentified so that I could move the story forward from 'Day one' while still leaving it open for new Transformation Guns that haven't been mentioned before to be revealed later.

:)

This will be the last piecemeal/slower chapter. Hopefully my pacing isn't too slow! Suggestions for what happens here are always appreciated ;D

I love both suggestions :). Will probably put my spin on them, but thank you both for the suggestions/critique!

I have no idea why, but my brain decided that Dr. Michaels sounds exactly like the Disney character, Professor Ludwig Von Drake. This isn't a good thing or a bad thing, but it is a thing and I felt that you should know.

Loved the idea of Jon getting horny every time he saves money at the store. Having such a mundane thing be come exciting for him is great. Things like that could be a reward for him to make him more willing to slip into the MILF lifestyle. Like a wish that every time a task is completed he has an orgasm would be fun in both making him like what's happening and having to hide the orgasm if there's anybody else around

Great chapter! Amazing imagery and deep dive into what should be a simple chore. Really showed how Joan isn't a hunter anymore, she's a gatherer and takes delight in it. It's a social event also with real stakes. Really fun read.

As for a suggestion, maybe Jon gets roped into hosting a book club or wine tasting night with the other mom's at the PTA night which is just an excuse to drink and gossip, complain about their kids, and swap stories of their sex life. Jon could wish he wouldn't be so bored about it and becomes enthralled and captivated by these lady's stories of passionate sex, possibly fantasizing about more of an exhibitionist streak with his husband. The wish possibly giving him vivid memories of his own bedroom escapades so he has something racy to share with everyone else?

I'd love to hear suggestions for wishes, both voluntary and involuntarily, for Jon. Happy to hear feedback as well :p

Stay tuned cause I did have something like this in mind

I hope it's not too weird, but would you consider having a girl who got her dog's penis?

This is probably the most detailed description of a math class in Fiction Branches. I also managed to find a use for the 'tables' feature in Markdown, working it in to the episode in a manner that makes sense.

Not so much giving away as reading my pieces correctly~! I really need to finish the Sly Cooper games.

I'm thinking "fearless leader" from Rocky and Bullwinkel had some effect on the chief's description. Also, finding the Batman / Catwoman setup interesting. Or am I giving away the direction this story is headed?

I really like this fun story-thread. The wishes go in surprising directions and everything feels like it is just for fun. There are (till now) no real consequences. And while I expect that will change when the heist will happen you have me hooked in this weird world you have created in just a few wishes.

"I wish Jon was eating his favorite hair accessory" Somehow I doubt "eating" was the word you intended to use here.

I like what you’re doing here, so I hope you don’t mind if I reboot it slightly.

Looking forward to seeing how this affects Jon's memories now

Thanks, I’ve got big plans for this story, but I’d be interested to see what others think/want to add

I know this site is titled Fiction Branches (meaning the events depicted in all the story content here are fictitious and any similarity to actual events is coincidental), but I still felt compelled to write that disclaimer at the start of this episode anyway, just in case someone wandered in and saw this out of context. I thought it best to err on the side of caution.

I like what you've set up. Can't wait to see the extent of this whole family shake up!

It's possible that a wishing coin could reverse a stone wish, or vice versa. And maybe another wishing coin could reverse another wishing coin wish. Of course, I have a few ideas in mind. Especially about what might happen when two people make seemingly mutually exclusive wishes on wishing coins at the same time.

Can a wishing coin reverse a stone wish or vice versa, or a wishing coin reverse another wishing coin wish?