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I’m loving what you’re doing with this. Keep up the good work.

By avatar MightyMrJ - 2022-12-30 03:10:22

On The Doctors Arrive



Would be neat to bring her to a Dog's Accessories shop and find that everything there fits her.

By TLA-Reo - 2022-12-29 19:07:52

On DMU - Lydia’s Wardrobe



I may use some of your description as I had a few scenes before arriving at a similar scene.

By The Guest - 2022-12-29 17:41:10

On DMU - Lydia’s Wardrobe



Woo! So glad you're back and so glad we're following Lydia! Seriously looking forward to her trying to find clothes that fit, or god forbid running into a female dog on the street!

By Panther - 2022-12-29 07:57:01

On DMU - Lydia’s Wardrobe



this is good. id be glad to see more

By wob wob - 2022-12-26 05:07:58

On Jon goes to bed.



Please continue

By KvothePhoenix - 2022-12-25 11:58:35

On Jon goes to bed.



An harem conflict could be interesting, or maybe show how the school dynamics is now. I bet school is more interesting now where the post puberty guys are like kings or the cliques now are like harems or proto harems with several guys gathered around hoping oneof them hit puberty

By eavatar - 2022-12-23 21:05:59

On Going out



Hi ilii01. If you go to the home page of the site, and click in "Discord chat" in the sidebar menu, you will receive an invite to our discord server. In this server there is a "web comics and art" channel where you can share some images.

There's no hard rule against sharing files, but since I haven't seen any prior community engagement from your account, and the fact that the file you shared was a corrupted .zip file, these things sent up yellow flags that I thought would be best to address. Once we come to know you better, I don't see why you couldn't share larger file archives you find interesting. :)

By avatar Perri - 2022-12-22 19:16:46

On So I tried AI and this happened...



is there's a way to upload pics without mods worrying?)

By ilii01 - 2022-12-22 15:30:05

On So I tried AI and this happened...



I like the idea for Karyn to be dominant towards Jon. It could be fun to mess with their relationship dynamics.

I'm using NovelAI to generate all the images I use.

By Dargozo - 2022-12-18 20:09:02

On At the mall



I think making Jon a cute submissive femboy, but not going fully female would be a great idea. Maybe make all males femboys similar to him? And make Karyn his sexy dommy mommy girlfriend.

What AI tool are you using to generate the images by the way?

By Thewayodaworld - 2022-12-18 18:33:26

On At the mall



Some rather big inadvertent changes for Jon. Not sure if i want him to become fully female eventually or not... If you have any ideas or suggestions for changes that could be made to Karyn, or Zoey, or even the world at large in the next chapter, I'd love to hear them!

By Dargozo - 2022-12-17 23:52:22

On At the mall



I was thinking of having some sort of conflict there with Sarah's family but haven't really come up with anything I deem particularly good yet, that's why I haven't been adding to this.

By ImmoralImmortal - 2022-12-17 12:38:34

On Going out



great eisode, I wonder what if Jon imprints sarah mac Millan or even Biff

By eavatar - 2022-12-17 10:32:16

On Going out



A little from column A and a little from column B. Though I don’t think Barry’s character changed that much from chapter one, just his body did.

By Chompy - 2022-12-09 18:38:21

On What Angel wants from Barry



Huh? Angel's got some weird power or is it Barry just reverting to his chapter 1 mode?

By N/A - 2022-12-09 17:35:40

On What Angel wants from Barry



Ahh. Interesting, yeah I wasn't too sure what that part meant at the time. Was thinking it might mean that half of each of her would end up looking different from what it should to be symmetrical.

By avatar Mira - 2022-12-06 14:58:46

On The Beauty: Split



I'm a big fan of the images and using the AI tools is pretty brilliant. Really unlocks a lot of possibilities when used right and can't wait to see what else you do with it. Great work!

By avatar MaryPear - 2022-12-04 22:33:17

On On the way to the bus



I liked the idea to used images, they really help tell a story, even if sometime leaving it to the imagination of people is also not bad

By TGAlmeida - 2022-12-04 22:14:20

On On the way to the bus



I'm trying something new with this one, I'm making AI images to pair with changes in the story. I feel like images can enhance a story if used right. Let me know what you think, or any thing I could do differently.

By Dargozo - 2022-12-04 21:44:05

On On the way to the bus



Okay, that's fair enough.

By Area82 - 2022-12-03 18:24:10

On Group Session



This is Miss Fine unaffected by a wish...In other branches, a wish made her something else.

By The Guest - 2022-12-03 11:20:44

On Group Session



I don't know if it's a good idea to add a complex character like Miss Fine to an already complex story. It like trying to focus on two seperate giant plot points at the same time, which might complicate things a bit for both the readers and the people entering their entries.

By Area82 - 2022-12-03 09:07:28

On Group Session



I'm pretty sure female dogs can still urinate.

By Bunnie - 2022-12-02 23:23:39

On Pissed Puppy



Fun fact, each half of her reconstructed the other half via a memory of what the other half was. So there is going to be a logical right brained version and a more artsy left brained version.

By Kylo - 2022-12-02 22:03:30

On The Beauty: Split



So is it two Gladys's now or one Gladys with two bodies? An interesting question indeed.

By avatar Mira - 2022-12-02 19:01:40

On The Beauty: Split



Maybe their younger brother?

By TGAlmeida - 2022-12-02 11:11:28

On Divergence



fun additions. Looking forward to where this is going and how Karyn will react to this all.

By funfun74 - 2022-11-28 15:47:17

On Flirting in class



I love how you worked in the confirmation that everyone still sees him as a boy.

By bigbustgazer - 2022-11-28 02:36:30

On Slippery slope



This is a great one

By TGAlmeida - 2022-11-27 17:42:29

On Ash's Metamorphosis



Your story is very very interesting. Congratulations. I hope you continue it very soon

By LadyViolence - 2022-11-27 13:27:25

On Slippery slope



This is a great story. Please continue it!

By Paula Clark - 2022-11-26 17:45:02

On Excellent Progress



I wish Caleb hit an hourglass square. I wanna see what happens!

By Bunnie - 2022-11-24 18:40:06

On Cindy rolls a four



Yeah, I thought that was a lot of fun to play with. I was thinking it could be interesting to explore the actors who play Tiffany, Biff, Steve, Jons Mom, etc, and how different they are from their characters. I'm thinking Shannon was a child star who is used to being the center of attention and was planning for the show to be her break into serious adult acting, but Madison was hugely popular in the first season, getting movie offers etc, so there's tension there.

For this branch, I'm toying with the idea of Jon eventually figuring out that the wish swapped him across realities with the real Madison Merlin, who thinks she's become trapped in the show she acts in. Whether he'll still want to go back by that point is up in the air, especially since his old reality will have altered to match the ongoing plot of the show.

By Gooose - 2022-11-24 00:54:19

On Sarah ... But who am I?



That's similar to my original version, where it is Jon who is the breakout star, the actresses playing Sarah and Zoe are the nice ones, Shannon is a prima dona who thought she was supposed to be the star...and if they do end up in rewrites...what does that do to Jon's original life? If he gets back to it?

By The Guest - 2022-11-24 00:46:04

On Sarah ... But who am I?



I'd be interested to see that! The whole premise sparked a lot of ideas for me. Planning to have Madison be the break out star who's in conflict with the more established star, Shannon who plays Karyn. Jon's going to have to struggle with Sarah suddenly being a supportive worried girlfriend, and Karyn suddenly hating his guts, his original body being a one episode gimmick, and an entire life outside the show he's a complete stranger to.

By Gooose - 2022-11-24 00:27:07

On Sarah ... But who am I?



Might inspire me to add to one of the other branches. Bringing back old ideas.

By The Guest - 2022-11-24 00:02:14

On Sarah ... But who am I?



So, the plan is for the episode they were filming to be the premiere of the second season of the show. In the plot of the show, Madison's regular character Jennifer has wished herself into Jon in this episode, which is why she was wearing all the makeup and clothes to make her look like a boy. Planning to have the show be a teen dramedy sort of CW adjacent. No clue if people still say Starlet, but the man she ran into, a producer on the show, was an older gentleman with perhaps a few antiquated phrases in his repertoire.

By Gooose - 2022-11-23 23:51:53

On Sarah ... But who am I?



I want to know...what was the plot of the episode that required this? Episode 1, where the main character wishes themselves into a girl and that's the series? If it is more than 1 episode, there's the issue of the opening credits...especially if its an old school opener. Also, this is more curious...do people use the word Starlet?

By The Guest - 2022-11-23 23:45:13

On Sarah ... But who am I?



I will be, life has gotten in the way the last few weeks

By avatar MightyMrJ - 2022-11-22 03:18:37

On McMillan Heart to Hearts



This was deliciously well crafted. Really enjoying this plotline.

By Wx2 - 2022-11-21 13:52:15

On Karyn takes advantage of Jon the Waitress



Still hoping you'll come back to it.

By The Guest - 2022-11-21 13:17:27

On McMillan Heart to Hearts



Wow, you must be a mind reader. Love what you’re doing with this, more or less the direction I was thinking of.

By avatar MightyMrJ - 2022-11-21 07:26:02

On McMillan Heart to Hearts



I use my other monicker, Poliedro, there but yeah, just joined this week more or less.

By N/A - 2022-11-20 17:34:35

On My best friend is a Witch and she wants me as her Familiar!?



Oh yeah, i'm actually on the fb server.

By N/A - 2022-11-20 17:26:13

On My best friend is a Witch and she wants me as her Familiar!?



A newborn as the misterious voice puts it, I see, I like it. Partners in fucking around and finding out these two, much potential for shenanigans this premise much much potential >:)

By N/A - 2022-11-20 17:25:05

On She starts to chant



I imagine less a magic wishing Stone MacGuffin and more... A magic freight train off the rails.

Just because he has the power and he's compelled to use it doesn't mean he knows how to use it. :3

By avatar Perri - 2022-11-20 17:05:06

On She starts to chant



I see, well that line wasn't really talking about a form of a powerful entity more so that in relation of a previous line "my dream familiar". Of course the whole initial chapter was meant to be vague enough that you could twist the narrative a generous amount without creating plotholes. However, I was thinking when thinking of the "familiar character creation system" as it were, is that the less true to her desires the witch is when choosing or designing a form, the less power the familiar has. Tried to kill two birds with one stone you see, a way to lure Jim to accept to let her choose and a way to tell future branch writers to "go nuts". But yeah considering he turned to a djinn I can see Little Ina playing a lot of The lamp of Aladin games as kid, but yeah I do like this direction, assuming he works like a djinn does, Sabrina might have gotten her own living equivalent of this site's infamous "magic stone" ;)

By N/A - 2022-11-20 16:58:35

On She starts to chant



Hey, are you on the discord btw?

By avatar Perri - 2022-11-20 16:49:36

On My best friend is a Witch and she wants me as her Familiar!?



I'm glad you like it, I was actually inspired by this one particular line from your origin chapter.

"I'm afraid as much as I'd like to make it easy for you and give you something mildly pedestrian, that would only make you a weaker familiar,"

This sort of forced me to start thinking outside the box and imagine things like this or perhaps a bakeneko or other powerful mythological creature. (That's also cute)

I don't really have the plan beyond the initial few chapters but I did want to include a couple of things to make it interesting if anybody else wanted to continue, like the booming mystery voice.

By avatar Perri - 2022-11-20 16:30:09

On She starts to chant






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