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very nice

Interesting contrast...in my version, he just sort of drops into breakfast and the rest of the day is questionable...in your version, Lucy does it intentionally.

I’m loving what you’re doing with this. Keep up the good work.

Would be neat to bring her to a Dog's Accessories shop and find that everything there fits her.

I may use some of your description as I had a few scenes before arriving at a similar scene.

Woo! So glad you're back and so glad we're following Lydia! Seriously looking forward to her trying to find clothes that fit, or god forbid running into a female dog on the street!

this is good. id be glad to see more

Please continue

An harem conflict could be interesting, or maybe show how the school dynamics is now. I bet school is more interesting now where the post puberty guys are like kings or the cliques now are like harems or proto harems with several guys gathered around hoping oneof them hit puberty

Hi ilii01. If you go to the home page of the site, and click in "Discord chat" in the sidebar menu, you will receive an invite to our discord server. In this server there is a "web comics and art" channel where you can share some images.

There's no hard rule against sharing files, but since I haven't seen any prior community engagement from your account, and the fact that the file you shared was a corrupted .zip file, these things sent up yellow flags that I thought would be best to address. Once we come to know you better, I don't see why you couldn't share larger file archives you find interesting. :)

is there's a way to upload pics without mods worrying?)

I like the idea for Karyn to be dominant towards Jon. It could be fun to mess with their relationship dynamics.

I'm using NovelAI to generate all the images I use.

I think making Jon a cute submissive femboy, but not going fully female would be a great idea. Maybe make all males femboys similar to him? And make Karyn his sexy dommy mommy girlfriend.

What AI tool are you using to generate the images by the way?

Some rather big inadvertent changes for Jon. Not sure if i want him to become fully female eventually or not... If you have any ideas or suggestions for changes that could be made to Karyn, or Zoey, or even the world at large in the next chapter, I'd love to hear them!

I was thinking of having some sort of conflict there with Sarah's family but haven't really come up with anything I deem particularly good yet, that's why I haven't been adding to this.

great eisode, I wonder what if Jon imprints sarah mac Millan or even Biff

A little from column A and a little from column B. Though I don’t think Barry’s character changed that much from chapter one, just his body did.

Huh? Angel's got some weird power or is it Barry just reverting to his chapter 1 mode?

Ahh. Interesting, yeah I wasn't too sure what that part meant at the time. Was thinking it might mean that half of each of her would end up looking different from what it should to be symmetrical.

I'm a big fan of the images and using the AI tools is pretty brilliant. Really unlocks a lot of possibilities when used right and can't wait to see what else you do with it. Great work!

I liked the idea to used images, they really help tell a story, even if sometime leaving it to the imagination of people is also not bad

I'm trying something new with this one, I'm making AI images to pair with changes in the story. I feel like images can enhance a story if used right. Let me know what you think, or any thing I could do differently.

Okay, that's fair enough.

This is Miss Fine unaffected by a wish...In other branches, a wish made her something else.

I don't know if it's a good idea to add a complex character like Miss Fine to an already complex story. It like trying to focus on two seperate giant plot points at the same time, which might complicate things a bit for both the readers and the people entering their entries.

I'm pretty sure female dogs can still urinate.

Fun fact, each half of her reconstructed the other half via a memory of what the other half was. So there is going to be a logical right brained version and a more artsy left brained version.

So is it two Gladys's now or one Gladys with two bodies? An interesting question indeed.

Maybe their younger brother?

fun additions. Looking forward to where this is going and how Karyn will react to this all.

I love how you worked in the confirmation that everyone still sees him as a boy.

This is a great one

Your story is very very interesting. Congratulations. I hope you continue it very soon

This is a great story. Please continue it!

I wish Caleb hit an hourglass square. I wanna see what happens!

Yeah, I thought that was a lot of fun to play with. I was thinking it could be interesting to explore the actors who play Tiffany, Biff, Steve, Jons Mom, etc, and how different they are from their characters. I'm thinking Shannon was a child star who is used to being the center of attention and was planning for the show to be her break into serious adult acting, but Madison was hugely popular in the first season, getting movie offers etc, so there's tension there.

For this branch, I'm toying with the idea of Jon eventually figuring out that the wish swapped him across realities with the real Madison Merlin, who thinks she's become trapped in the show she acts in. Whether he'll still want to go back by that point is up in the air, especially since his old reality will have altered to match the ongoing plot of the show.

That's similar to my original version, where it is Jon who is the breakout star, the actresses playing Sarah and Zoe are the nice ones, Shannon is a prima dona who thought she was supposed to be the star...and if they do end up in rewrites...what does that do to Jon's original life? If he gets back to it?

I'd be interested to see that! The whole premise sparked a lot of ideas for me. Planning to have Madison be the break out star who's in conflict with the more established star, Shannon who plays Karyn. Jon's going to have to struggle with Sarah suddenly being a supportive worried girlfriend, and Karyn suddenly hating his guts, his original body being a one episode gimmick, and an entire life outside the show he's a complete stranger to.

Might inspire me to add to one of the other branches. Bringing back old ideas.

So, the plan is for the episode they were filming to be the premiere of the second season of the show. In the plot of the show, Madison's regular character Jennifer has wished herself into Jon in this episode, which is why she was wearing all the makeup and clothes to make her look like a boy. Planning to have the show be a teen dramedy sort of CW adjacent. No clue if people still say Starlet, but the man she ran into, a producer on the show, was an older gentleman with perhaps a few antiquated phrases in his repertoire.

I want to know...what was the plot of the episode that required this? Episode 1, where the main character wishes themselves into a girl and that's the series? If it is more than 1 episode, there's the issue of the opening credits...especially if its an old school opener. Also, this is more curious...do people use the word Starlet?

I will be, life has gotten in the way the last few weeks

This was deliciously well crafted. Really enjoying this plotline.

Still hoping you'll come back to it.

Wow, you must be a mind reader. Love what you’re doing with this, more or less the direction I was thinking of.

I use my other monicker, Poliedro, there but yeah, just joined this week more or less.

Oh yeah, i'm actually on the fb server.

A newborn as the misterious voice puts it, I see, I like it. Partners in fucking around and finding out these two, much potential for shenanigans this premise much much potential >:)

I imagine less a magic wishing Stone MacGuffin and more... A magic freight train off the rails.

Just because he has the power and he's compelled to use it doesn't mean he knows how to use it. :3

I see, well that line wasn't really talking about a form of a powerful entity more so that in relation of a previous line "my dream familiar". Of course the whole initial chapter was meant to be vague enough that you could twist the narrative a generous amount without creating plotholes. However, I was thinking when thinking of the "familiar character creation system" as it were, is that the less true to her desires the witch is when choosing or designing a form, the less power the familiar has. Tried to kill two birds with one stone you see, a way to lure Jim to accept to let her choose and a way to tell future branch writers to "go nuts". But yeah considering he turned to a djinn I can see Little Ina playing a lot of The lamp of Aladin games as kid, but yeah I do like this direction, assuming he works like a djinn does, Sabrina might have gotten her own living equivalent of this site's infamous "magic stone" ;)