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" as he.. became a girl" you say that as if that wasn't the norm, at this point I'd be much more surprised if he didn't, let alone if a female became a male.

Biff seems to be about as smart as the Biff from Back to the Future. Actually considerably less intelligent. First of all, NEVER accept the first offer. Second, what about the hospital bill. She should have at LEAST said "10 thousand dollars PLUS the hospital bill". I have a feeling she's going to be pretty steamed when she gets a hospital bill for 50 thousand dollars and has accepted the 10 thousand payout that she can't back out of as the full compensation. Though a real lawyer worth his snuff could get her out of obligation for signing anything while having just awakened in a hospital room after being drugged, as agreeing to anything under those conditions can't be made to stick. But she'd have to be smart enough to think of actually coming to a lawyer to hire him to represent her.

Great Sage not to mention it sounds like Biff's mother is even worse.

yeah I decided that would actually probably be most aesthetic for having four arms, and the next part with their parents reflects them leaning in that direction too.

I'm all for them getting four breasts. Bring it on!

Sometimes, I like to write Biff and Sarah as a couple who has had several public breakups during the course of the year.

Yes, they're dating, as usual, but as Biff transforms, their relationship would probably change, in some way.

So is Biff and Sarah boyfriend and girlfriend before the changes or just schoolmates/friends? Just asking cause I wonder if they are in a relationship how would the changes affect it?

I sort of liked the idea of Zoe being a socialite.

I can see Zoey staying a Madison and Jon and Mikey part of the new family, maybe Jon is the new mother and Mikey the new daughter with either Biff or Wesley as the new father.

Well, they stay themselves, but they'd have to exist with five other families that are just like them, either for better or worse.

Wonder what happens to the real McMillans.

The same mistake is here. "The female orgasm that he'd experienced the day before paled in comparison". Unless Jon played with him/herself later the night before after having sex with Karyn after becoming anatomically female again, Jon didn't have a female orgasm the night before. Jon was anatomically male at the time with Karyn, he just had Sarah's body in every other way.

There's a mistake on this page. "The female orgasm he'd had had been really nice." The author forgot that Jon hasn't actually had a female orgasm at this point, they just had sex with Jon's body being physically Sarah's body in every other apparent way, but Jon was actually anatomically male at the time. I'm just leaving this note here in case mystichobo ever comes back and sees it.

The tags just keep a-coming, piling on. I'm not going to try to complicate it further until I'm using them all though. Though that sounds like it would be an interesting challenge. But so far it's up to the Anthro Herm MC ML MTF Multi Super TF tags, having lost the FTM tag when Karyn settled into being a hermaphrodite instead of a full male. What can I do to throw in while keeping it an interesting story. The multibreast one would be easy considering they're 4-armed and cat-people, but TBH I'm not really into that. It just ruins the female figure to have them go all down the abdomen. Maybe 4 breasts wouldn't be excessive, just given they have 4 arms after all.

Well that was nice of Melanie. Not as selfish as I was led to believe.

"If I don't make it back with the others, then it will be up to you to repopulate the Earth." - Cartman
"But I'm the only one down here, what am I supposed to repopulate with?!" - Butters
"Well, you know, with your wiener." - Cartman

What ‘specifications’ did she build into that vagina she thought up? Is it horny? Having a period? What turns it on?

Hmm. It sounds like the Jon of this branch remembers the events of several different branches, meaning the end of this episode wouldn't be the first time a wish 'rebooted' things. It seems a little bit ridiculous that all of those events would have happened within one timeline without some form of 'turning back time'.

So, is Jon deliberately making a vague wish at the end of this episode? If indeed he, Karyn, Sarah, and the rest of the cast have gone through all the craziness mentioned in this episode and more, it seems like this version of Jon would know all about the dangers of making vague unspecific wishes like "I wish something interesting would happen" or (as in the case with this episode) "I wish it had gone a bit differently". So is he deliberately doing it this time deciding "Things are so messed up it's not like we've got anything to lose", and hoping for the best?

Jesus lol. Even a hippo and a pig, really?

It's okay, I was just curious.

I was planning on addressing this in a later chapter involving the medical team so keep an eye out. Apologies for not making it clearer that it wasn’t the whole town. As for Biffs parents… I may have forgotten about them

Interesting. I previously thought it was mostly everyone, at least those who was living with someone else (human or otherwise) in Lake Point at the time that had this transformation. If it is possible, I would like to see someone bring this curiosity up (it doesn't have to be soon, just something in the near future). After all, I'm sure the characters in the story is probably just as curious to why not everyone was affected.

Whatever happened to Biff's parents?

Tiffany was never changed, the only ones in Jon’s grade that had been mixed up were Jon, Karyn, Sarah, Biff, Abby, Yuki & Steve

Why is Tiffany surprised at this news? I mean, shouldn't she be dealing with the something similar?

I have more to come.

Yeah, I’d initially only had them as side characters, but after seeing what you’d done with them my gears started turning. I like the direction you’ve taken them too.

Your Andrews are very different from mine.

Thanks, glad you’ve been enjoying it so far

Really love this story line as well. Enjoying all the TF's and the pics and just all of it.

Thanks glad you’ve enjoyed this one, was worried I was rushing their transformations a little so I’m happy they worked well

Hey. Sorry if I took to long to catch up and review all those previous chapter, but once again I want to say that I am totally hooked in this story. I didn't expect that Jason transformation would end up being the most interesting. I simply loved seeing him dressing up nicely and give in to the new desires, and both sex scenes and pics with him and Emma were really hot. Also really enjoyed the way you described Stevie falling further into the ultra feminine role with the description of his new girly things and clothes and how Anne embraced the stallion role during the day. I think you would go for lesbian Simon route, but I am really interested to see Anne and Simon meet up in those new roles and start a thing, while Karyn and Stevie in their new roles would find it "disgusting and gross" while they play together with Stevie developing a crush. Would also be nice to see Anne's attitude towards the new Biff and Karyn. I will wait for Day 4 and the party but will also be happy if you want to explore further characters the way you did for the Farber family, since I loved the transformations of this arc :). Thanks for writing.

I actually was working on a branch where it worked and it didn't, you beat me to that.

Keep going with this one. I'd like to see where it goes.

I'm just bringing back all the characters...

Yes. But I am loving it in this branche. Can't wait to see Anne in action :)

Steve seems even a worse womanizer than ever here

Well, he's a travelling salesman... and Linda is an ambitious career woman... maybe he left one wife for another

I'm changing Linda's husband's name from Roger to James, to make it less confusing with Laura Ferguson's husband, which is also Roger.

Probably nothing…

Ha a fun idea but I’ve got a dragon situation somewhere else … this is something a little more standard but no less annoying ;)

So dragon or dinosaur?

And absolutely nothing will go wrong …

I wonder if Jon can test the coin on himself alone or if he would need someone to give him a coin and if he would remember himself before the changes.

Wonder where this story will go, how will the coins affect the characters, I am interested in reading.

This is turning into my all time favorite branch. You already nailed it in the last chapter with Anne calling Steve "monster", but this scene with Emma and Stevie in the bath really was something unique that I enjoyed so much. Everything worked really well here, with the roleplay and the bath speeding up the transition of Emma and Stevie in such a cute, hot and heartwarming way. I know that you already have the plot planned and it's probably way better than anything that I can imagine, but I can see a follow up Jason praising Emma for being such a "good fat... sister"to Stevie as he continue to play "princess" with him while Emma and Anne will go to a workout session at the gym, and maybe Anne being able to score with some chicks ;)

Well, think of it on a timeline level. Jon left the house, and it is established it was after school when he left, and he was gone for at least an hour. Let's assume Stacy went into the house right after Jon declined to play with her. Not that much time has passed, so assume we still have time till Jon returns. In the other branch, I had him come back immediately, but that contradicts the idea he just left.

Will Jon ever arrive home in this branch? That was left hanging a ways above.

Lovely dream sequences. Can't wait to see more of Anne transformation (the girl on the mall is the new Simon, maybe?) and maybe Jason will be the one who will bath Emma today, with some very interesting results :)

This is brilliant.