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If you heard some kind of music in your head while reading this, I'll consider it a win.

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-02-02 04:12:32

On Overture



MaryMary (aka. tango) threw out the basic idea for this on the Discord about a week ago, and it was rattling around in my head enough that I had to make at least a one-off out of it.

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-02-02 04:08:32

On The Lake Point Musical



My thanks to the clearly one single person who has upvoted every chapter of this series, usually by the time the view count of each chapter gets to 20. If you reply with some contact info I’ll e-mail you the last chapter if you want.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2024-01-28 10:34:12

On Language and Possibilities



Could anybody continue these episodes I would but I suck at writing

By Eldridge - 2024-01-27 15:38:33

On Jon needs some new clothes



That sounds interesting!

By whitepantyhose9x - 2024-01-25 19:06:56

On Jon immediately regrets this



So basically a hentai version of Midori no Hibi.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2024-01-25 01:00:24

On chick for a dick



Haven't seen anything on this thread in a bit. Hoping it continues, great episode.

By jessica.cave - 2024-01-23 12:43:22

On Reunited for the First Time



As much as I want to say Zzyzx has morgan freeman’s voice so that it’s the most comfortable for Jon, I can’t help but think the voice of Fart from Rick and Morty would be much more fitting.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2024-01-23 11:17:36

On Language and Possibilities



Here’s an obscure fact for you: a male fox is called a reynard. Which is one letter off from renard, the french word for fox.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2024-01-23 09:23:51

On Language and Possibilities



Why put C cups on someone that tiny?

By Bunnie - 2024-01-21 05:45:59

On Trish's plan



I want to say I like this thread. Though to be fair to Jon, there was no malice with this wish.

I like the wish to be a proper queen without loosing her sense of self. I would be nice if other's in Jon's life were found and 'adapted' by similar wishes.

Key ideas: Mikey is now a girl, otherwise Jon would not inherit the throne. Mikey/Princess Michelle is still physically active, It's just now fencing, skeet and horseback riding/steeple chase instead of soccer and basketball and magic:the Gathering. Michelle is mastering the art of turning fighing spirit and willpower, qi, into attacks and practical effects.

Zoe is a Princess, but studying to be a high magi. I imagine there are two schools of Magic High Magic - Lex Arcana where one declares laws and works on a conceptual basis, and Low Magic, where though the power of language, including body language, you can prompt the Universe to do a trick. This is not conceptual, and the tricks are rather narrow. But the Universe is an old dog and knows a lot of tricks.

Karen: A guy now. Actually a girl using a magical trinket to pass as a guy so that she can complete in the upcoming tournament. Day job is a hunter for the royal family. Perhaps she can catch milady's favor?

Yuki: Jon's friend, one of the Nerds, co-GM of the local D&D group at school. Has a crush on Jon, but is friends with Karen and doesn't want to poach. Is now Princess Jeaun's ninja maid.

Sarah: Daughter of a buisness magnet, Still ritch. Not nobility. An advocate for the Socalist Party, advocates the dissolution of the Royal Family, unbacked fiat currency and direct democracy.

Biff: Now a girl. A dutchess, to be exact. In the Royal Sucession after Zoe and Michelle. A rival to Prencess Jeanne.

Queen Linda: Newly ascended to the throne, with the death of her father. Her mother serves as Queen Dowager/Queen Mother. A big celebration of her comming into her rule is upcoming.

My thoughts were people would report people acting out of place, they have partial and mixed memories because this is such a big wish. Enough memories to be the people they were prior the wish. Queen Linda 'adjusts/adapts' them, with their feedback. A theme is being Blursed - that is a mix of blessed and cursed. Each changes in a way that is beneficial, but change is hard. Biff doesn't have to assert his masculinity any more. Sarah is starting her career in politics, Karen actually gets to compete in a tournament, Zoe gets to study Magic with Athena. Even Mikey gets to do fun and interisting things.

As for Jon/Jeanne I see her meeting people both before anD after 'adaptation'. Leading to a late afternoon/evening meeting with the Queen, who reasons that there is no good single wish.Rather, it just might be that Jon's Grandfather set Jon up for failure. (My thoughts are that Granpa wanted to break the Veil/Masquerade that has hidden Magic. Lake Point is not the only place that has changed. As for the stone's range.. 100 miles or so. The border is unbroken fantasy kingdom during the day, and connects to the United States overnight.

That's all that I have. I'm making some ai art for Princess Jon/Jeanne.

By wingnut2292 - 2024-01-19 14:22:33

On A mild escalation



Check out the book, The Lord of the Flies by William Golding. There is a character that has visions, though it's associated with epilepsy.

By Lucus Rose - 2024-01-19 09:49:51

On The Trip to the Nurse



Posted with apologies to anyone who actually has this condition (I hope I got it right!) but this is a headcanon about Athena I've been contemplating for quite a while. Was really excited to write this episode tbh.

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-01-19 05:26:24

On The Trip to the Nurse



Welcome back!

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-01-16 18:37:45

On Jon immediately regrets this



Interesting idea focusing on Jennifer Taylor. I included her and her twin sister in Transformation Guns and the Wishing Coins branches, though they might play a slightly larger role in Wishing Coins due to an early wish in that branch involving them. But I think this is the first time we've seen Jennifer Taylor as a viewpoint character in a branch, since (as noted in the episode), she's usually just a bit player and part of the Lake Point ensemble.

By Christine L. - 2024-01-15 22:46:35

On Elsewhere with Jennifer Taylor



You didn't download it. You got it in the mail.

By Bunnie - 2024-01-15 12:56:47

On Jeff invites his girlfriend, Jenny



Species is a mental change?

By Bunnie - 2024-01-15 12:50:30

On Chronivac Version 4.0



Her speech reminds me of Saddam Hussein's "I can change" number from the south park movie. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yADrtfAmLTo "It's not my fault, that I'm so evillll! It's society! Society!"

By lifesmainantagonist - 2024-01-08 17:11:27

On So Close, Yet So Far Away



Wanted something short and quick. Hopefully there's still enough there to make the words all count.

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-01-08 04:59:28

On Explanation is owed (For real this time)



With the holiday season and all its madness finally behind me I can finally get back to writing semi-regularly again. Not gonna lie, though, I wasn't really as excited for this episode, at least not as much as for those that ought to follow after.

By avatar Matisguy - 2024-01-05 05:21:42

On Athena's Vision



This is amazing, I know very well that Inspiration can leave, and a story can die for that reason, so I hope that your Muse returns and brings more of this beautiful story

By Great Sage - 2024-01-02 09:23:22

On Every day contains a lesson.



Ha... Peachy. 🍑

By Bunnie - 2024-01-02 00:28:29

On Karyn gets him some sweatpants



I like where this is going. Thanks for writing

By thisguy10101 - 2023-12-31 07:26:27

On Call Kate



Yeah it was. How could I not use it?

By avatar Ms-Scarlett-Raven - 2023-12-26 11:54:42

On An (Possible) Ally



Wasn't that the name of the doctor in Dark City?

By The Guest - 2023-12-26 11:41:19

On An (Possible) Ally



I don’t know why almost everyone else thought it was essentially omniscient and willing to provide any information desired. The evidence is strongly to the contrary. Read the original letter from grandfather and see what it says. “There is no limit to the number of times you can do this, as far as I can divine”, “How it works, or where it came from beyond that, I have no idea. All I can tell you is how it works and trust you to use it wisely.”, “This range I estimate at several miles, but I fear I have not been able to determine an exact figure.” - Does it make any sense grandpa would have said any of these things in his letter, if he could have wished for information? Really I think everyone else has been screwing up, both being lazy with the deus ex machina, and negligent in maintaining consistency, by having information being anything anyone can ask for at all. Now I have put asking for information into some story segments I have written myself but I think I have only done it at depths where someone else had already written that into the story already so I might as well not have a reason to refrain from it then.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-26 08:19:07

On Serious Understanding



I only said "fix" because JonKaryn still seemed very angry about what Karyn did, so I assumed they'd want to separate. A "subjective fix", let's call it. Sorry for not making it clear at all.

By Zelo - 2023-12-25 12:22:33

On JonSarah+Karyn -Sarah+Sarah +Boobs=?



And The Lost Room is from 2006 and yet it’s still one of the best things I’ve ever seen. You shouldn’t limit yourself to the “new releases”, either here or otherwise.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-25 07:16:35

On The man



As for the change in narration, even before the parts I wrote, it started in 1st person told by Jon, and then because of sloppiness was suddenly changed to third person, so I thought it would be interesting if that was because the narrator changed to JonSarah and so it became first person again once she became the active character, but then with that precedent perhaps it should go back to third person when they separate and back to first person for JonKaryn to be the narrator. It’s partially created out of a desire to make that first change of narration not just seem negligent but I think it worked out nicely.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-25 07:08:11

On JonSarah+Karyn -Sarah+Sarah +Boobs=?



“fix” is a strange relative subjective condition. Was it not in need of “fixing” before this chapter but now it needs to be fixed? Why is that, because it’s ok to turn the males into females but not vice versa because girls are good and boys are bad? Who needs to be fixed specifically and in what way? If the outcome was Jon and Karyn separate leaving them identical triplets except with Karyn having blonde hair and breasts and then got a surgical mastectomy and then Jon broke his friendship with Karyn and created a new one with his new bro Sarah would that not be a fix? Jon and Sarah could even recombine if they wanted because that was not wished for in the past tense. They could even set up a thing where they can merge and separate at will whenever they want just for fun. The only ones who definitely would be different than how they started would be Sarah and Karyn and they would just be reaping the consequences of their actions while Jon is the only one who never did anything bad to anyone and he would be back to normal. If you see this as being a big hole and much worse in a way other than Karyn ruining her relationship with Jon, isn’t that opinion just created out of an anti-male bias? Because that’s the only permanent change, Sarah and Karyn have had their genders changed, which is especially inconvenient for Karyn considering her first wish.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-25 06:52:26

On JonSarah+Karyn -Sarah+Sarah +Boobs=?



I find the narration PoV changes intersting. It's almost like the combined willpower of two people is strong enough to overpower the 3rd person narrator.

Anyway, I wonder where this one will go? How will they fix this? Can they even fix this?

By Zelo - 2023-12-25 04:56:11

On JonSarah+Karyn -Sarah+Sarah +Boobs=?



I really miss this story. I hope one day you go back to it. Marry Christmas.

By whitepantyhose9x - 2023-12-25 02:06:49

On Biff gets ready



This sure has a lot to unpack doesn’t it.

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-24 22:57:50

On The Path to Atonement



Sarah dunking Karyn in a trash can is a reference to Shorts, in which Sarah’s counterpart Helvetica Black was always doing that to the main characters. Last name Black, hmmm, is that a coincidence or were they actually influenced by this website when they made that movie?

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-24 13:23:33

On Jon Decides More Cautiously



Why not just make him female?

By Elron - 2023-12-23 06:31:32

On Cocktail Waitress



How about a mom to some screaming toddlers and a breastfeeding infant?

By Elron - 2023-12-23 06:27:22

On jon gets a job



Too bad his girl job didn't come with a female body so he could do a natural childbirth.

By Elron - 2023-12-23 06:18:40

On Jon's Cravings



Aw, too bad Jon's job didn't start at the beginning of the pregnancy, so he could experience the entire thing.

By Elron - 2023-12-23 06:17:02

On A surrogate Mother



You volunteering to write it @lifesmainantagonist? Open to PRs https://github.com/fictionbranches/fb

By avatar Phoenix - 2023-12-20 04:16:15

On Also...



Apologies for the short chapter but I didn't want to define Mikey's actions in the previous chapter. I wanted people to be able to branch from there easily. <3

By Capt - 2023-12-19 19:30:25

On M'sPW: Oh Golly. Things Are Going to Spiral.



after use of web.archive.org and fixing the link to what it was at the time I was able to figure out the link you reference is now this: https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/15738 Maybe someone should have a bot look through all the links in the website and make them dynamically link to what the current address is?

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-18 18:07:35

On Also...



Curious, most curious...

...oh wait, this was made a year ago. :/

By Zelo - 2023-12-17 17:35:50

On The man



oh it’s like the occupant from The Lost Room

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-17 10:10:43

On The man



Oh, the pain of not being willing to confess something to your parent(s)... 😕

By Zelo - 2023-12-16 05:16:54

On Just what *is* "normal," around here...?



@Great Sage: heh, no, I hadn't heard of that before, but it's interesting to read about - looks like it has roots in an old Estonian folktale: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Child_who_came_from_an_Egg

By nothingsp - 2023-12-15 22:14:08

On Just what *is* "normal," around here...?



What if there’s a child of that branch which itself gets deleted and then there’s nothing? And does the existence of comments also prevent its deletion?

By lifesmainantagonist - 2023-12-14 11:08:10

On A reminder on the rules of the site



I second missing your contributions. Hope life allows.

By The Guest - 2023-12-13 22:39:44

On DMU - a break before the party



I am floating around, been having some troubles lately, and been sucked in by another project. Will be returning to this soon.

By avatar MightyMrJ - 2023-12-13 04:19:00

On DMU - a break before the party



I'd love to see Jon and Laura's story to continue

By username - 2023-12-12 20:12:08

On DMU - a break before the party



I didn't originally write this, just transferred it from the old version of the site. In some Zulo stories the medallion infers the purpose of a clothing item if it hasn't been worn before. In this case, really high heels might indicate they were designed for someone shorter than Sally's body.

By jessica.cave - 2023-12-12 09:14:40

On Dinner and Business, the Gang's All Here






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