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Didn't even consider introducing another dog situation. Curious where it will go.

Looking forward to the next chapter! 🤩

I know that....I just said that is where my mind went.

Sarah and her family are rich. I don't see her needing to open a CC in his name.

I love fleshing out side characters

I figured it wasn't.

Nice angle, I was just viewing Abby and her dad as side characters, but I like how you’ve fleshed them out.

Does sound kinda suspect doesn’t it? Not my intention lol

Why, when someone in a story smiles and says, "Do you know your moms maiden name?" I think identity theft...she isn't going to open up a credit card in Jon's name is she?

Thank you! I thought it would be interesting to write a character that literally only cares about make-up, clothes and impressing boys and it would be a fun twist to have the changing Jon do some changing of his own to Karyn.

Lots of people being surprised today. Wonder who.

The way you're writing this branch is very excellent! I'm a huge fan of the vibes you're using for the transformation ("'hon', he liked that."), and look forward to more!

I pivoted a bit based on your version.

I like the direction you’re taking this

Ah yes, I’d forgotten I’d given her a surname. Just gone back and retconned that. I just used the puns sign cause I’m from the UK so force of habit really.

For anyone wondering, this is why I always mentioned them taking their hand off the stone the moment they finish making a wish in this chain.

The in-universe reason is that after Karyn's first accidental wish they're scared of it, afraid that they'll say something stupid while touching it.

Holy cow those girls are evil. Vengeance on them is going to be massive I imagine.

Also, this isn't important, but wanted to ask...what country does this take place in? I saw the pound symbol earlier for paying for the magazine, just wondering. The town has been in various different imagined places.

Wasn't it Ruby Fletcher earlier?

That's perfectly understandable, I also have loads of stories needing continuation, my muse is dependent on how stressed I am , which has been rather high recently so, no stories from me.

At some point I'm hoping to finish it up. My goal was to get Jon... Jo back to Lake Point, but life IRL got too busy/hectic for me to concentrate on writing. Over the last couple weeks I've been slowly wading back into writing, but finishing this is up is #3 or so on my writing to do list. Hopefully I can get back into the swing of things and knock this out in the next couple months. I have notes/ideas for how to get Jo back, but I still need to flesh those out and connect the dots.

Any chance of continuing this?

Sadly? Is she realizing why?

He might be getting a slight accent, whether he notices or not is another matter

Is he muttering in a French accent?

Hello. I was inspired by the Labatt Blue "Better Ex" commercial. It was a fun 30 seconds with no explanation or follow-up. I decided to create a place where beers like that were real. The characters are an homage to YAWYW, as drinking-age college students. I also enlisted the aid of ChatGPT for this, which I found to be an interesting collaborator that was fun to bounce "what ifs" off and see what happened.

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very nice

Interesting contrast...in my version, he just sort of drops into breakfast and the rest of the day is questionable...in your version, Lucy does it intentionally.

I’m loving what you’re doing with this. Keep up the good work.

Would be neat to bring her to a Dog's Accessories shop and find that everything there fits her.

I may use some of your description as I had a few scenes before arriving at a similar scene.

Woo! So glad you're back and so glad we're following Lydia! Seriously looking forward to her trying to find clothes that fit, or god forbid running into a female dog on the street!

this is good. id be glad to see more

Please continue

An harem conflict could be interesting, or maybe show how the school dynamics is now. I bet school is more interesting now where the post puberty guys are like kings or the cliques now are like harems or proto harems with several guys gathered around hoping oneof them hit puberty

Hi ilii01. If you go to the home page of the site, and click in "Discord chat" in the sidebar menu, you will receive an invite to our discord server. In this server there is a "web comics and art" channel where you can share some images.

There's no hard rule against sharing files, but since I haven't seen any prior community engagement from your account, and the fact that the file you shared was a corrupted .zip file, these things sent up yellow flags that I thought would be best to address. Once we come to know you better, I don't see why you couldn't share larger file archives you find interesting. :)

is there's a way to upload pics without mods worrying?)

I like the idea for Karyn to be dominant towards Jon. It could be fun to mess with their relationship dynamics.

I'm using NovelAI to generate all the images I use.

I think making Jon a cute submissive femboy, but not going fully female would be a great idea. Maybe make all males femboys similar to him? And make Karyn his sexy dommy mommy girlfriend.

What AI tool are you using to generate the images by the way?

Some rather big inadvertent changes for Jon. Not sure if i want him to become fully female eventually or not... If you have any ideas or suggestions for changes that could be made to Karyn, or Zoey, or even the world at large in the next chapter, I'd love to hear them!

I was thinking of having some sort of conflict there with Sarah's family but haven't really come up with anything I deem particularly good yet, that's why I haven't been adding to this.

great eisode, I wonder what if Jon imprints sarah mac Millan or even Biff

A little from column A and a little from column B. Though I don’t think Barry’s character changed that much from chapter one, just his body did.

Huh? Angel's got some weird power or is it Barry just reverting to his chapter 1 mode?

Ahh. Interesting, yeah I wasn't too sure what that part meant at the time. Was thinking it might mean that half of each of her would end up looking different from what it should to be symmetrical.

I'm a big fan of the images and using the AI tools is pretty brilliant. Really unlocks a lot of possibilities when used right and can't wait to see what else you do with it. Great work!

I liked the idea to used images, they really help tell a story, even if sometime leaving it to the imagination of people is also not bad

I'm trying something new with this one, I'm making AI images to pair with changes in the story. I feel like images can enhance a story if used right. Let me know what you think, or any thing I could do differently.

Okay, that's fair enough.