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The first time you typed couch instead of coach I thought it was a typo. Then you went and did it 2 more times and I knew you actually didn’t know the word.

Catprog in relative terms to their top speed yes, but a human 15 to 20 mph isn’t a sprint to them, it’s a brisk trot, Biff really shouldn’t have any trouble keeping up with the best human athletes for anything less than a marathon.

Aren’t we forgetting something rather important here? Namely the only reason Jon currently has a cat fetish is because Karyn turned into a cat girl. This was already earlier established. He likes cats because Karyn is one, not the other way around. It makes zero sense for him to go for anyone else. Also now we’re going with Biff having been a bully after establishing his strong moral character? Is it because Back to the Future ruined the name Biff for everyone or just because he’s a jock or because there are other branches where he’s portrayed that way, because the only questionable thing he’s done in the direct descendant stories up to here was a quick Nelson Munce style “ha ha” when Mikey transformed in the middle of class. And I don’t like a character’s image being ruined like this arbitrarily.

reminds me of something https://cat-nine.net/comic/episode-5/213-purrsonal-space/

I sure hope Elliot and James both become genderless cockroach or worm creatures. Petty, vindictive, psychopathic and shallow. And here’s hoping Sarah rethinks her stance and just accepts what she and Biff have even if it’s not ideal.

If Sarah becomes a wolf man that works fror her and Biff though I don’t think Biff would think it’s ideal, she’d still find it good enough. Unfortunately I fear the author is following the first law of gender bending and wouldn’t consider having a female become male, and just wants everyone to turn into girls.

Actually Biff’s nominal flying speed should be much faster than Mikey’s, because she’s much heavier being a winged lion while mikey is a bird, so Biff would need to go much faster for her wings to produce enough lift to keep her up especially while carrying Jon. It didn’t specifically say her wingspan but unless it was like 50 feet, she would need to fly at hundreds of miles an hour rather like a large airplane.

I like this interpretation that Sarah is actually kind and sympathetic, implying that her portrayal as a “bitch” in the first chapter “and so it begins” actually reveals that Karyn was actually just a petty and selfish girl herself, that it’s just in Karyn’s perspective seething with hatred that Sarah MacMillan is a “class A bitch”, and that viewpoint was just petty teenaged girl behavior. I don’t like the simplistic narrative that the most popular girl in school is mean. And Biff not being a psycho either. Hotheaded yes, but he isn’t being harsh to anyone that didn’t attack him first, aside from his initial introduction with the moderate derision of Mikey. The “revenge of the nerds” narrative that everyone is either in the jock/cheerleader caste or in the nerd caste and everyone in the jock caste is a psycho. Though all the other football players but Biff do seem to be.

it’s pretty clear that Jon and Karyn are too overpowered here relative to the werewolves and vampires so the only way to make it interesting is for a conflict between them to ensue. Because if they were in agreement, it’s just not plausible that anything could get in their way. The vampires and werewolves could then try to manipulate them and play them against each other maybe.

I think this should be edited. This is very inconsistent with what is later established of Shawn/Biff’s character. He would have been indifferent to the plight of a changed person but he shouldn’t actually be going out of his way to mock one. He is later established as pathologically stoic and refusing the help of others but by the same token not one to cause others trouble or suffering unless they antagonized him first, but this one incident here then just is the one thing out of place. Granted you want him introduced somehow but here it is and it just is all wrong for him later. idk if the original writer will see this or think it’s a good idea but it would also make him a much more relatable character and easier to side with if not for this terrible and unnecessary first impression that doesn’t fit with anything that follows.

So Biff temporarily becomes a few years younger for a few days, and everyone knows it’s temporary and will only last for a few days, and for that, they actually put him in Mikey’s class several grades back until he changes back… but then he turns into a winged freaking lion, permanently, and they know it’s permanent and that he, or she, will now be a winged lion for the rest of her life, so they… put him back in the same class he was in originally even though they have a separate class for the changed students. Oh yeah that makes a whole lot of sense.

" as he.. became a girl" you say that as if that wasn't the norm, at this point I'd be much more surprised if he didn't, let alone if a female became a male.

Biff seems to be about as smart as the Biff from Back to the Future. Actually considerably less intelligent. First of all, NEVER accept the first offer. Second, what about the hospital bill. She should have at LEAST said "10 thousand dollars PLUS the hospital bill". I have a feeling she's going to be pretty steamed when she gets a hospital bill for 50 thousand dollars and has accepted the 10 thousand payout that she can't back out of as the full compensation. Though a real lawyer worth his snuff could get her out of obligation for signing anything while having just awakened in a hospital room after being drugged, as agreeing to anything under those conditions can't be made to stick. But she'd have to be smart enough to think of actually coming to a lawyer to hire him to represent her.

Great Sage not to mention it sounds like Biff's mother is even worse.

yeah I decided that would actually probably be most aesthetic for having four arms, and the next part with their parents reflects them leaning in that direction too.

I'm all for them getting four breasts. Bring it on!

Sometimes, I like to write Biff and Sarah as a couple who has had several public breakups during the course of the year.

Yes, they're dating, as usual, but as Biff transforms, their relationship would probably change, in some way.

So is Biff and Sarah boyfriend and girlfriend before the changes or just schoolmates/friends? Just asking cause I wonder if they are in a relationship how would the changes affect it?

I sort of liked the idea of Zoe being a socialite.

I can see Zoey staying a Madison and Jon and Mikey part of the new family, maybe Jon is the new mother and Mikey the new daughter with either Biff or Wesley as the new father.

Well, they stay themselves, but they'd have to exist with five other families that are just like them, either for better or worse.

Wonder what happens to the real McMillans.

The same mistake is here. "The female orgasm that he'd experienced the day before paled in comparison". Unless Jon played with him/herself later the night before after having sex with Karyn after becoming anatomically female again, Jon didn't have a female orgasm the night before. Jon was anatomically male at the time with Karyn, he just had Sarah's body in every other way.

There's a mistake on this page. "The female orgasm he'd had had been really nice." The author forgot that Jon hasn't actually had a female orgasm at this point, they just had sex with Jon's body being physically Sarah's body in every other apparent way, but Jon was actually anatomically male at the time. I'm just leaving this note here in case mystichobo ever comes back and sees it.

The tags just keep a-coming, piling on. I'm not going to try to complicate it further until I'm using them all though. Though that sounds like it would be an interesting challenge. But so far it's up to the Anthro Herm MC ML MTF Multi Super TF tags, having lost the FTM tag when Karyn settled into being a hermaphrodite instead of a full male. What can I do to throw in while keeping it an interesting story. The multibreast one would be easy considering they're 4-armed and cat-people, but TBH I'm not really into that. It just ruins the female figure to have them go all down the abdomen. Maybe 4 breasts wouldn't be excessive, just given they have 4 arms after all.

Well that was nice of Melanie. Not as selfish as I was led to believe.

"If I don't make it back with the others, then it will be up to you to repopulate the Earth." - Cartman
"But I'm the only one down here, what am I supposed to repopulate with?!" - Butters
"Well, you know, with your wiener." - Cartman

What ‘specifications’ did she build into that vagina she thought up? Is it horny? Having a period? What turns it on?

Hmm. It sounds like the Jon of this branch remembers the events of several different branches, meaning the end of this episode wouldn't be the first time a wish 'rebooted' things. It seems a little bit ridiculous that all of those events would have happened within one timeline without some form of 'turning back time'.

So, is Jon deliberately making a vague wish at the end of this episode? If indeed he, Karyn, Sarah, and the rest of the cast have gone through all the craziness mentioned in this episode and more, it seems like this version of Jon would know all about the dangers of making vague unspecific wishes like "I wish something interesting would happen" or (as in the case with this episode) "I wish it had gone a bit differently". So is he deliberately doing it this time deciding "Things are so messed up it's not like we've got anything to lose", and hoping for the best?

Jesus lol. Even a hippo and a pig, really?

It's okay, I was just curious.

I was planning on addressing this in a later chapter involving the medical team so keep an eye out. Apologies for not making it clearer that it wasn’t the whole town. As for Biffs parents… I may have forgotten about them

Interesting. I previously thought it was mostly everyone, at least those who was living with someone else (human or otherwise) in Lake Point at the time that had this transformation. If it is possible, I would like to see someone bring this curiosity up (it doesn't have to be soon, just something in the near future). After all, I'm sure the characters in the story is probably just as curious to why not everyone was affected.

Whatever happened to Biff's parents?

Tiffany was never changed, the only ones in Jon’s grade that had been mixed up were Jon, Karyn, Sarah, Biff, Abby, Yuki & Steve

Why is Tiffany surprised at this news? I mean, shouldn't she be dealing with the something similar?

I have more to come.

Yeah, I’d initially only had them as side characters, but after seeing what you’d done with them my gears started turning. I like the direction you’ve taken them too.

Your Andrews are very different from mine.

Thanks, glad you’ve been enjoying it so far

Really love this story line as well. Enjoying all the TF's and the pics and just all of it.

Thanks glad you’ve enjoyed this one, was worried I was rushing their transformations a little so I’m happy they worked well

Hey. Sorry if I took to long to catch up and review all those previous chapter, but once again I want to say that I am totally hooked in this story. I didn't expect that Jason transformation would end up being the most interesting. I simply loved seeing him dressing up nicely and give in to the new desires, and both sex scenes and pics with him and Emma were really hot. Also really enjoyed the way you described Stevie falling further into the ultra feminine role with the description of his new girly things and clothes and how Anne embraced the stallion role during the day. I think you would go for lesbian Simon route, but I am really interested to see Anne and Simon meet up in those new roles and start a thing, while Karyn and Stevie in their new roles would find it "disgusting and gross" while they play together with Stevie developing a crush. Would also be nice to see Anne's attitude towards the new Biff and Karyn. I will wait for Day 4 and the party but will also be happy if you want to explore further characters the way you did for the Farber family, since I loved the transformations of this arc :). Thanks for writing.

I actually was working on a branch where it worked and it didn't, you beat me to that.

Keep going with this one. I'd like to see where it goes.

I'm just bringing back all the characters...

Yes. But I am loving it in this branche. Can't wait to see Anne in action :)

Steve seems even a worse womanizer than ever here

Well, he's a travelling salesman... and Linda is an ambitious career woman... maybe he left one wife for another

I'm changing Linda's husband's name from Roger to James, to make it less confusing with Laura Ferguson's husband, which is also Roger.