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Excellent scene! Wonder if we will be able to see other scenes like this for the rest of the gang. The way you are developing those subtle changes is really good!

Loved Simon calling Zoe "Zo-girl" and I would love to hear Lucy and Mollie conversation :)

Are you going to continue this storyline, or would you mind if I added a few chapters to it?

What are Mikey and Karyn up to I wonder.

I was just wondering that myself. Who got the stone from Jon's grandfather?

Ow, thanks for the follow up :)

It was really great, loved Molly's dream and Buster arcs sounds interesting too. Don't worry about pace, write when you can and I will be glad to follow. Xoxo

But she said he was very brave to put up with the teasing. It doesn't sound like he's being very brave about it right now.

I had planned out all their dreams, but wasn’t sure if I should include them all to keep the pacing up, but I don’t see why I cant add them in while I plan the next chapters.

Loved that!!! Now I want to see the other's dreams too. Especially Sarah's dad acting like Molly and Simon and Zoe dreams. Maybe they will have the same dream, making it extra taboo, since Jon and Karyn's parts have a thing for each other?

I liked this a lot.

Damn he really just built her a whole life in no time.

That is incredible artwork.

Thanks for continuing this branch.

Hii this is great, can't wait for more

I also prefer androids.
Your creativity knows no bounds.
Great writing, can't wait for more.

Oh, man, that really sucks. To have that itch, and not be allowed to scratch it - because of your clothing. That's so original. Great writing.

I've always thought it was Jon.

Jon must really hate himself to make Sue so miserable. No masterbation? What a bummer.

You really think of everything!

This is where Sue and I differ. I'd want the sensation to be much higher than average. Who cares what her husband thinks of them. They're there for my pleasure, not his. Haha

This was so hot

Thanks! See forum

I thought the stone had a range of maybe a few miles. Most of the time it can't even affect all of Jon's hometown.

Finders keepers.

Yeah, that's what I would do.

So Joseph wished to be attractive to any girl Jon wants and he wants Karyn. But there can't be two Karyns so one has to go.

These are incredibly enjoyable so far - thanks for the great work.

Well Jon's bed must be on the moon LOL.

This is how I spend my time in my own lesbian porn fantasies as well.

Wow, all 3 choices sound like fun!

Ima really liking this. Who wouldn't want to be Sarah? I wonder how much free will he actually has?
Please continue!

Oh, I hadn’t actually thought of going for that angle. I might try and work it into a later chapter though. Thanks :D

I predicted this all wrong... I thought his reaction was because he was feeling what would be felt if an adult hit on a teenage girl....

Reaaally interesting.

Can't wait to see what he does to fix this, only to make things worse LOL

Loving the recent chapters, great work. Not too be too needy, but think we might see Lydia either having an awkward night or morning with her first erection?

This is comedic gold as well as being really interesting to read in the context of this branch.

interesting

Awesome chapter. I loved the way Sandra's sexuality is starting to creep into Jon's mind. I hope there will be plenty of action in the upcoming week, both in alone time and with Karyn's father.
And I hope both Sandra and Zoe will settle into their new roles more and more as the week goes on.
Now I'm wishing it had been a month, or even a year until they could use the stone. Loving this story.

Great story so far!!!

Oooooh, gotta be good if she's being singled out. Dare I hope it's a dog dick between her legs?

And I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Yeah, it irks me every time Zoe uses Jon instead of mom.

I thought I could use the mis-phrasing as a way to show Zoe's mindset and how she feels about Jon's role in a given moment, showing that she's changing and finding it harder and harder to see her Jon in there.

Good point. What about Zoe's father? Karyn referred to her as "Miss Gibson", but whoever it was had to have been around long enough to help create Zoe, right?

I'm surprised Zoe's wish didn't compel her to always refer to Jon as Mom, considering all the other changes it made to their lives.

Zoe is the one making careless wishes, but she refuses to give the stone to Jon on the pretense that he might make a careless wish. That's messed up.
Love the way Jon turned out, especially the F-boobs. Great writing.

I like this concept

Thanks. I’ve got a lot of ideas for this story so stay tuned

No problem with your suggestions. Truthfully, I like hearing from the audience. Half the reason I write is for comments, so you commenting only encourages me :D.

Onto your ideas:

• Hair is a perfect one. I had a wish idea related to that one, basically make hair (mentally) a completely vital part of John's body, to mimic how important hair might be to a woman of Jon's age.
• Car repair is good too! I'd make John an idiot regarding vehicles
• A call to visit a friend....hm. I love this one

Thanks again for your suggestions!