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Current rough plan is to have Jon be somewhat forcibly taken into the Vanderfield family. She can still visit the Gibsons from time to time, but she'll BE a Vanderfield with all that entails. Of course, the beauty of a branching story is others can make a path going in another direction.

I wonder what Sebastian will do to Jon, will he force him to be his daughter, will he marry Linda or what, I like that there are a lot of possibilites to this story.

I added another chapter; I have a few vague ideas where this can go. Tentatively planning to have Rose Vanderfield be Jon's new name, to match her sister's flower theme.

Please , continue, you never know, it might inspire me to revisit this story

A good question Goose, one I have not yet figured out, . Let's find out together one day :D

"I just wish you'd gotten us pregnant back when you were still a guy" - but the 3 of them had unprotected sex all that morning between 2 and 3 chapters earlier, and technically Jon could just wish for them to be pregnant with herself as the source of the other genetic material even if she’s female now.

I'm curious if Sarah is going to move in with the Gibsons or if Jon is going to move in with the McMillans, considering they'll need to be close most of the time. Either way, rather interesting stuff!

Looking forward to it, I'd also be interested in seeing the original Sarah's reaction to the game world later on, perhaps having been put into another role when she tried to enter it. Just an idle thought.

Glad you're liking it!

I would like to see this one continue. Where’s his mother now? Did she cease to exist as her? Jon now exists as her and himself?

Oh, I didn't take any offense, sorry, tone is a little hard to convey via text. I was just attempting to explain some of the thinking that went into this branch; I enjoy exploring the impersonation angle. I've also obviously enjoyed your additions as I've borrowed a few of your characters here and there :)

I meant no offense Goose, I've enjoyed your other contributions very much, so I'm sure this will be an interesting story

Wow! That was a really fun chapter and I can't wait to see how Jon manages the dirtier details and all the extra responsibility of his swapped life. Also really loved the phrasing of 'the voice that came out of his lips was liquid,' what a great little phrase! Amazing work, can't wait for more!

Some of that will be addressed in the next chapter to a degree. Part of it comes down to the fact that they're exchanging minds not physical brains, so whoever is in Leonard's body will become as smart as he was, if not as knowledgeable. It's a sort of software vs hardware kind of thing and it will extend a bit to muscle memory and so on as well. You're right that this class isn't something that would normally exist, even if the technology for it to happen did, it's purely a result of the stone that people are broadly okay with that. I tried to get that across with Jon, who wasn't mentally affected by the wish, being the one to be the most confused/put off by the whole concept initially.

I suppose some of this comes down to a difference of preference; I prefer a body swap to a transformation personally, particularly if the exchange is uneven in some way. It's interesting to explore a complete swapping of identities both physically and socially. I agree that this can lead to some situations that no real person should have to go through, but these are fictional characters. Hopefully you can still find some enjoyment, and if not, I have contributed to other branches that may be more up your alley.

"I sat on the wall after class, nervously fingering the box", "Karyn fingered the stone, passing it from hand to hand" You know there sure is a lot of fingering going on in this introductory chapter. I wonder if that's supposed to be foreshadowing, maybe the creator anticipated the number of times Jon was going to get turned into a girl.

To be honest, this episode raises some very serious concerns, for example, no matter how detailed the log book is, it cannot possibly go into every detail, also, the point Leonard raised is very valid, if he swaps with someone that lacks his intelligence then his grades will plummet, ruining his life, even more seriously is what happens to Nadine and her partner, their lifestyles are incompatible, morally and ethically it is absolutely wrong to force Nadine to give up her beliefs, no matter how odd they might be, same with Alyssa, how can either of them possibly live the others life without betraying their deepest held beliefs?. This goes well beyond interesting into actually quite nasty territory, I think the basic idea is quite interesting, although, I've never been very keen on Body Swaps, especially unequal ones, however, that is my personal preference. There's some good writing here and it might be fun to see just how this turns out

It amuses me that Ms Esposito has (apparently )become a canon character :D

Intentionally left who's in this class a little vague, to give writers open room to branch off from here in different directions.

Except Jon (Juniper) wished "I wish that no one would be able to take the wishing stone from me, unless I willingly give it to them." So it violates what was already wished for for new Jon to wish it away. The only way for it to make sense is if by wishing for it to "disappear" that he just made it invisible and possibly for old Jon (Juniper) to not be able to feel it, but it should at least still be there.

Interesting. I was a bit worried Biff was just going to be cured. I’m rather glad she’s sphinxified again. Cute kissing scenes

Very much enjoyed it thank you for adding to it. Loving Jon’s thoughts and curious how this magic could work

Boldore not really, natural log is still not defined for anything but positive real numbers, because although e^(iπ) is -1, so is e^(5iπ) and e^(9iπ) and e^(-3iπ) so the inverse function would need to be defined arbitrarily over a particular range. And there is a function which does this but it is called the complex logarithm or complex natural logarithm.

love this story

The last paragraph is not made up, pi is equal to all of that.

This is a really neat idea! I kind of love Jon experiencing the unfamiliarity while knowing that it shouldn't be unfamiliar!

anyone who thought this was vapid wish fulfillment, your WTF moment is here

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It's no wonder Sarah is surprised to see Freddy. After all, she hasn't seen him in... (looks at watch), about 23 years.

What is a tiny?

Thanks

Really enjoying this path, very fun writing.

Rearranging atoms require energy .. doing it in a specific pattern decreases entropy for that area… you are literally extending the life of someone, putting more sand in their hourglass. At least that’s how I saw it

I would say AR is not actually breaking the laws of physics.

It is just rearaging matter into a new form that already existed.

It would be interesting to see her start to get more perverted later her and yuki start to perv on girls together. Maybe abby gets a boner from one of the teachers and goes to the bathroom to jerk off. As shes going at it she hears someone in the stall next to her. Its yuki. But this is just an idea im throwing out

I just wonder what everyone will be thinking as the days progress....after all...they are becoming new selves.

It's always a good day when I see this branch continued :)

Have you considered joining the Discord server? Enjoying this branch by the way. Nice to see some new ideas around.

Hey sorry been away for 3 weeks so missed your messages.

It’s all fine. I like people adding their ideas. It usually tempers my own writing.

That's actually roughly my plan for what to do with Mikey, Roger underwent his own drastic change.

It’s all good. My primary thought was that these were young people new to a relationship. A jock and a pretty cheerleader girl. That relationship is probably 90% physical attraction, since that’s generally how it starts. A change in physicality can result in a sudden loss of that relationship… not necessarily a gender change. If Biff was paralysed in an accident for instance would Sarah be at his side? She would like to think so I think… and this chapter addresses the exact thoughts I had there.

…lately felt more optimistic. It is new to Sarah but that 10% of him she likes is still there.. and even the physical bodies we have will grow old and wither… male or female. I think Sarah does still like him she just has to get used to the new Biff. That’s my take on it.

I don’t mind stories going down darker/lighter routes I mean it’s there to be used as you like ;)

Unique names are hard. I wanted to give a ‘clever’ sounding name but one that felt ‘nice’ . It probably would be Emmett in retrospect.

Hey nice. Forgot about this story thread lol

I do! Got a draft and everything, but have been a little sidetracked with life and all

Loving this thread! Really hope people continue it for other family members too

Loving these role swaps. Can we have the next one be Jon's dad swapping with a 5 year old rich girl whose a spoiled princess? I think that would really add some variety to all this and lead to some fun scenarios

Voting for the #GirlBoss if you decide to continue this.

All right Ms. Cork, I went to the “most hits this week” page and it’s clear that my stuff is highly clicked on and yet highly hated. Here are the top 4 positions:

Author Episodes Hits Views Upvotes
Gooose 9 3523 850 37
lifesmainantagonist 7 2232 719 3
Ms. Cork 5 2138 717 18
Marazhna 2 1184 479 17

You can’t blame that on the weather. Just look at how much your content is loved by comparison. And the chapter after this one was one of only 2 additions to the website on 7-06-23 in Eastern time. Mine has 0 upvotes and the other one already has 5. Or is everyone else just upvoting their own content with multiple alt accounts? Either way I guess I’m done here after all.

Damn It! Just when this was getting really interesting! Ah well, it isn't like I don't do the exact same thing, hopefully this gets continued someday.

Thanks. Well when I tried to go to the discord server, it kept asking me for things, and I stopped when it asked me for a cellphone number and said it was going to send me a text message. There was a limit to the amount of my personal information I was willing to put in someone's system. If it was a more innocuous sort of chat or message system that didn't require that sort of thing, I would have been more willing.