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I really hope this story gets continued!

There certainly are. Really enjoying it.

I think there are some fun differences I tried to add between the two.

I always love reading your chapters for this. Keep up the good work

Yes... versus the other branch where she kept the blonde hair... but wishes can only be reinterpreted...

I'm trying to figure out what's happened here. So did whatever changed the family dynamic also basically change things as if Karyn's wish for blonde hair and big breasts never happened?

I’m personally a fan of a fair competition, but with the quality shown here I think you can make either direction work

Thank you so much! I have another chapter planned, but I'm not 100% sure if it would be better for Jon to step up his game to make the competition a little more fair, or if it would be better for Karyn to absolutely own him over and over.

Glad to hear people are still enjoying it

Omg I absolutely loved this. Great work!

This took me a bit, but this is such a good premise I couldn't resist adding onto it.

The best thread on this site. glad you're still writing

Great chapter! I really like the idea that Gwen can reshape herself faster with practice. Hope you don’t mind if I use that when I get back to them in my own thread.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCxgUPFVFkA

After some further thought I altered the trigger to remove 'no more fakes' and made it more ambigous. Hopefully a nice way of setting it in Xanadu

Hope to see more of this branch

Nice. Curious to see if Linda makes more wishes or maybe even Zoe and Mikey get a turn with the stone. Since the stone was not mentioned in the morning plenty of opportunity for them to use it

On time this week

Thanks. Also thanks for showing the difference between Xanadu and NMF… I’m at a bit of a loss though because I don’t want to start with a full animal tf of a main character. There might be some but I don’t know so I’ve hybridised it a bit.

Perfect example of thoughts make the costume

"just a plot hook for other people"

Ah, good idea!

As for the weird looks from Athena, currently it is just a plot hook for other people. I have no plans for her right now.

I honestly did not think of his sexuality at all. (being pan probably influenced that a bit)
I guess he would bi-curious at most, he still mainly likes women but since his main crush shifted from Karyn to Harry he started to feel more than nothing towards other men. (But a lot towards Harry)

Tbh the only thing I didn’t like was Jon not having a crush on Karyn anymore, he could still have one while still liking Harry more. Though did you make Jon gay, bisexual or straight with Harry being the exception?

I wasn't originally going to add to this branch, but Sabrina's rant popped into my head and would not leave me alone until I wrote this episode. I'll admit there's more use of the F-word here than in many of the episodes I write, but Sabrina strikes me as the sort who doesn't hold back on using it much. Especially when she's calling people out on their B.S.

Paradox's cheerleader story also acknowledges that football season is over, but in a different way. The twist at the end of the episode is mine. Of course, given the fact that magic is involved and certain wishes can lead to the intervention of other people with magical powers or resources (such as Ms. Holloway), it's not too difficult to reset the school year back to the start.

Well that's one way to make sure no one would make fun of his torn skirt. :) It also seems like Athena might have some degree of awareness, if those "weird looks" are any indication. Curious to see where the wishes made in this chapter will lead us, whether it's Jon's responsibility or his new body.

Forgor💀 to post for 2 weeks so here are two chapters at once.

@Lucus Rose - Please do take this story and have fun with it! This website woudn't be called fictionbranches if it didn't have any branches.

That's the prompts apart from a few lines done. Now its time to try and continue this as a story.

love the zoe branches

It's FTM Friday!

I've given Sarah and Nicole their due in other story branches, so I thought it was okay to have them here as victims of the one-week Alpha B's wishes.

Did someone overhear that wish and rush back into the cafeteria? Maybe. Or maybe it was Jonnie's imagination. I can think of several people who might have overheard it. So many I'm not sure who to pick. I just know that different people might respond differently if they DID overhear it.

And here we get the "I wish" cliffhanger, where several possibilities are likely. Barring possible interruptions, there are a number of possibilities. I have one in mind myself.

Ah, this is one of those scenarios where someone under the influence of a time-limited wish could do a lot of damage within that time limit. I have a few new ideas for this one.

@Christine Exactly. In game dev, how the player interacts with the game world is paramount for obvious reasons, and as an upshot there's a lot of leeway for the world to be directly centered around the Player and their avatar. I already have a kind of game in mind built for Sarah to play, for another example.

Interesting and fun. Excited to see where this goes.

Loved the whole thing about why Kyla doesn't like dancing. Ah, it seems the point of these video game scenarios is place our protagonists in situations outside their comfort zones. You've done a pretty good job at describing the dance/rhythm game, and Kyla's feelings about it.

So would this mean Jon wears her underwear now or does Jon wear no underwear since she didn’t wear any when making the wish

Hoping for more soon. This story has me thinking about directions I'd take it, but I'm going to respect the author and allow it to proceed their way.

Gotta wonder if Jon will have made some wishes to make his mother ok with Harry coming over. Maybe also make Harry be focused on him and Linda accepting that.

Should've been more specific about which Madison you're talking about. ;)

Oooh, an underwear swap! I've definitely been looking forward to that.

I am loving this story, keep up the good work

Really good job on the fight scene extremely entertaining and fun hope to see what happens to Zoe when she hits 0 poise

I didn't actually know about hifi rush before this

But yeah, from what I've googled it's kinda like HiFi Rush lol

I guessing this is kind of like hifi rush?

Enjeublue's Royal Mistake branch introduced me to the idea that only someone Queenly should have the Stone, and I'm afraid I like that idea so much that it might already have become a trope for me.

I'm gonna be honest; this episode was difficult as hell to write. Tutorials are hard to make interesting.

Yes, it's Kyla that's getting the Rhythm game that everybody expected. I hope this works out; the idea of writing about a rhythm game through just text, with no backing music, sounds like the sort of thing that might possibly be a very bad idea for some reason.

My original idea is for stoned Karyn to first wish that the transformed girls are able to retain control as long as they willingly keep in character, the autopilot only snapping in if they deviate too much. So they have to lean into being Buffy and Leilani to retain their control. Then, since the stone has made her somewhat alien and inhuman to make her truly unbiased, she'd observe humans often coped better with big life changes when they had others going through the same thing beside them, like birthing classes or group therapy, and she'd pick a handful of other Lakeview students and teleport them in before pairing them up and transforming them into their partner's ideal partner and saddling them with the same character maintaining controls Buffy and Leilani have.

That's my first idea at any rate, but Marazh and I have a nice back and forth thing going and I want to see what direction they take it in. I never would have thought to have the second transformation into Leilani, and that was fantastic.

Okay, the description was hilarious for me of their travel. I pictured like in the cartoons when they put a giant map and the protagonists were all over the map before finally reaching destination. Also, wondering if stoned Karyn (heh, pun) knows about real John or nope, instead will do a wish that works for Leilani/Buffy

For clarity, the stone is basically copying all the wishes Karyn has made so far in pursuit of her dream woman. So, 1. Jay and Vivian swap bodies and lives. 2. They won't tell anyone about it except each other and Bethany. 3. They'll be able to to tap into their new bodies muscle memory. 4. They will follow any suggestions Bethany has regarding the swap. This one doesn't copy the commands Karyn has made to Sarah and Jon, just the ability to do it. Of course Bethany doesn't know she has that power, so things might get out of hand. 5. Isn't one to one since Vivian's parents are dead, and she's not on a cheer squad, but Vivian's family and close friends will be very supportive of the new Vivian, and accept any changes she makes. 6. Again, Karyn's latest wish isn't exactly applicable, but basically the next time Jay-as-Vivian does something outrageous that could get her into trouble, she won't be punished and people will generally take her side. The big difference maker here of course is that Bethany won't secretly be in control, or know she has a lot of power over the pair, and she'll also potentially be dragged along for any further wishes Karyn makes.

I have a definite idea of what stone zonked Karyn might do to "help", but I'm really curious to see what direction Marazh is going to take it.