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Very fun. I love a good life-swap story!

Who did you have in mind that would swap with Jon @Gooose ?

@Endless Yeah, Gus is wearing a protective charm out of habit that has protected his memories somewhat from all the changes so far. That said, he didn't know Stephanie or Esme or Richard McMillan, so he really didn't notice any of those changes.

No firm idea, no. Just a handful of notions. I think Edgar would swap his role with someone that would have the knock on effect of Tiffany no longer being a cheerleader, to clear the way for Karyn discovering she's somehow the head cheerleader of the new reality with Sarah as her deputy, despite never being swapped directly. Other than that, nothing concrete.

Do you already have in mind who to swap them with or are you still thinking about it?

@Gooose with original do you mean when Esme was still Stephanie?

Ack! I have been summoned! Guess I'd better get to writing...

This was going somewhere interesting. Hope to see more.

Love these kind of stories, can’t wait to see what you come up with

Loving this!

Nothing like a good costume story, do you have ideas on the costumes yet!

Curse your sudden but inevitable disappearance!

Thanks! I don’t write a lot of stories but I do love a good costume story.

Always love a good costume story and this is wonderfully set-up! Really like how you're writing Karyn so far and looking forward to seeing what sort of trouble they get cornered into! Great work!

He more or less remembers the original reality, but also has an entire new set of memories for the new changing reality, and they're battling it out in his head. Athena and Zoe slept in their little protective circle, so won't have had their memories tampered by any wishes that happened the previous night, but will be vulnerable to any that get made once they leave it.

This series is great, I hope you keep adding to it

Nice I love this branch Gooose

True, I wonder if Jon and the rest of the family still perceives him as the younger brother or if that’s changed too

Well Mikey wish was “I wish I didn’t have to go to school”, so I don't think they percieve him as a kid, since that was kinda a specific wish, but not sure how they will percieve him.

So would everyone else perceive Mikey still as 10 year old kid but with an adult body or would they think Mikey is an adult with a childish mind?

I like where you’re taking this!

In any case, this is inspired by the site "TV Tropes" and its listing of tropes in entertainment. The Alpha Bitch is one such trope, as the character is an archetype of several stories set in high school. You see this sort of character in several movies and TV shows, usually as an antagonist.

I assure you, this is NOT written with some program. Every word was typed by a human being.

Interested to see more of this branch

Interesting. So he will join Athena and the group into figuring who is behind this. How much does he remember from the old reality?

More!

Thanks to Perri for help with some of the Korean translations. If I have still managed to get it wrong let me know and I will go back and fix it.

have played hs girl fantasy story enough w gpt to recognize this style

Children are also much more difficult to write just in general, honestly.

Actually, in other branches he is older.. in this one he is 6ish. In most branches I write him as 10... but in most branches Jon's mom is Linda, not Laura. We live on the multiverse I guess.

It doesn't seem to matter what branch I read Mikey is always established as being 9 or 10yo but authors always write him as being treated like is 5 or 6yo

I am loving your additions, and the changes are fantastic

Very interesting concept, wouldn't mind seeing more of this

This is a fun idea!

Congratulations! What a great achievement!

I really hope this story gets continued!

There certainly are. Really enjoying it.

I think there are some fun differences I tried to add between the two.

I always love reading your chapters for this. Keep up the good work

Yes... versus the other branch where she kept the blonde hair... but wishes can only be reinterpreted...

I'm trying to figure out what's happened here. So did whatever changed the family dynamic also basically change things as if Karyn's wish for blonde hair and big breasts never happened?

I’m personally a fan of a fair competition, but with the quality shown here I think you can make either direction work

Thank you so much! I have another chapter planned, but I'm not 100% sure if it would be better for Jon to step up his game to make the competition a little more fair, or if it would be better for Karyn to absolutely own him over and over.

Glad to hear people are still enjoying it

Omg I absolutely loved this. Great work!

This took me a bit, but this is such a good premise I couldn't resist adding onto it.

The best thread on this site. glad you're still writing

Great chapter! I really like the idea that Gwen can reshape herself faster with practice. Hope you don’t mind if I use that when I get back to them in my own thread.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCxgUPFVFkA

After some further thought I altered the trigger to remove 'no more fakes' and made it more ambigous. Hopefully a nice way of setting it in Xanadu