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What an interesting and original idea, I do hope this gets continued beyond the point it is at with the next branching off point

This is the leaf on the branch that I don't actually expect to nurture into a full branch of its own, but it's here for Possibility's Sake.

This is where I'm stopping for now. I have a lot more planned, though! I just need more time and more energy.

Everyone knows that legal arbitration and enforcement is one of a mother's most important responsibilities, right? You don't see a lot of it in the horny MILF stories, though; can't imagine why.

Also, I have decided to resolve the age-old "Singular/Plural They" grammatical dilemma by writing a story where "They/Them" is both singular and plural.

Headmates have been kinda an elephant in the room on this site for a while, so here's a branch where they're given direct focus.

A new story root inspired by an interesting new friend of mine.

Can’t wait to see what transformation you have planned for them

Zoey certainly wasted no time in assuring Linda would get her girl’s V card while guiding Lin to return the favor in a mutual fashion. Very sensual way to get their day started; great chapter Mr. J and welcome back! Hope all is well with you, take care :-)

-Sje-

This is such a fun idea. I like the mechanic that even though he has this gorgeous body, he is hung better than most guys and for some reason women throw themselves at him!

Wondering where Jon would live if she can’t live in her old home. Also wondering which skills and knowledge were downloaded into that body

Thank you for the comment. Needed that!

This is fantastic! I hope this nightmare can continue!

Curious to see what that dream body looks like

Clearly this episode is in an alternate universe from the first episode, since in the first episode, Karyn DID make a wish, and it worked. Though I think it could be made clearer so as not to confuse readers who are wondering about how this episode's premise contradicts the last third of the first episode.

i sure miss seeing updates to this one, it was a great story

Disturbingly wholesome.

I really like these sort of 'soft mental alterations' where they are both very mentally aware who they are, and how strange this all is. And yet Karyn doesn't see it as odd peeing with the door open so she can keep an eye on Jon (just like a mother would do!) The de-sexualising of their relationship makes it all the more sexy!

Interesting bit open ended. Interested to see which direction you will take it

Interesting to see how this will differ from the rewrite

No, though it plays with similar themes. This one is a bit more grounded, I guess

Is this a remake/reboot of your “the rewrite” branch?

am really enjoying this and am excited to see where it will go!

An interesting idea!

Very very fun!

Very excited to see you back Belchest! Your stories on here are what brought me to this site and appreciate with it's different authors!

This is a really interesting idea!

"Whoa," Jon said. As he looked at himself in the bedroom mirror, but instead of seeing himself, However. -> I think he meant this parte here

When he looked down at himself, he saw himself dressed in Karyn’s clothes. He turned towards Karyn still confused and was about to ask her what was going on when she explained things.

Should read better now

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> "Whoa," Jon said. He looked at himself in the bedroom mirror, but instead of seeing himself, However. When he looked down at himself, he saw himself dressed in Karyn’s clothes.

DAMN YOU JOONNNN! You and your horny fantasies!

This is really good!

Fun and sexy!

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Another great addition! Can’t wait to see where this leads

Loving these additions, thanks for going with my suggestion, will be watching this branch with interest!

A small child hearing the party down stairs, dressed up as a 'fairy princess'. Tiffany dressed as a Football Player and Moose as a cheerleader or due to a bet dressed as sexy teacher.

Biff and Sarah as a role reversed Bride and Groom?

Love Paula’s suggestion too!

Great work, can’t wait to see where you take it, and if you have any other transformations in store

Here’s a suggestion. Jay went to the party in his mothers clothes, but didnt know she was there to chaperone. She went as a cheerleader as she promised the parents she would chaperone. She saw Jay drinking in one of her suits. An expensive suit. She dragged him home and grounded him for wearing her suit. Come next morning, they wake up and Jay is acting like his mom, becoming her in mind and personality while his mom(dont know her name. Use mine) is acting like a teenage cheerleader who was busted the night before for drinking at the party.

Running out of steam a bit here. Could explore some other party goers and their costumes.
Any suggestions would be welcome.

I was thinking something else, but I want to see where you take this.

Love the addition

If Zoe isn’t attending the party would she also be oblivious to the changes?

The return! Love it already, great foundation, can't wait to see how this plays out!

Hope you revisit this branch in the future

Found this old branch and thought it'd be fun to add to it, feel free to suggest gifts and changes.

I almost don't want to give my thoughts, because what I love about this branch is that I can never predict what's going to happen next and I don't want to influence you. But I have a feeling that these most recent age changes have generated some knock-on effects that neither Donaldson girl is anticipating.

I love the dynamics between Joanna, Zoe, and Karyn in these last chapters and the little twist with the aging there. Really appreciate the quick updates too and excited to see what's next!

I do have some stuff squirreled away, was working on this line for so long I just wanted to get some other branches done, but I do plan on revisiting this