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I love this series.

Thanks Mira, in the mean time, please enjoy my take on the Goth Squad, I think I made them a bit more nuanced than sweary rebels without a clue

Happy to hear it! It's great seeing your writing again Sage. I missed your content for sure.

Actually, I take back what I said, this seems is starting, this thing of them "falling into the role" if they don't obey it, make it everything worth, even if I would still prefer if it was an alternate reality instead XD

I will one day, maybe quite soon, I've been building up my Muse to have another run at tit and there is much more story to come from there

I loved the concept, but I really think the simulation thing doesn't work that well. Like, it would be cooler if they had went to some sort of alternative/parallel universe. Be that as it may, I loved the idea of this guy, all of sudden becoming his "girlfriend's daughter", while him girlfriend now ends up trapped as her boyfriend's daddy XD

I MISS your SSTRS branches so much, those were so fun. I especially loved the Tiff branch. Hope those get picked back up some day.

Thanks Mira, I like playing around with the stereotypes, this version of Sarah and Tiff are taken from my SSTRS branches and I wanted to make them more likeable than usual, have no fears, Karyn will be joining her friend on the squad if Saah's plan works :D

Great addition and can't wait to see where this goes! Always love to see how you toy and tinker with the existing relationships, Jon and Biff especially, and this mother-daughter experience looks to be quite eye opening for the both of them. Can't wait for the next installment!

You know, I really like the sound of this version of Sarah and her friends. I'm curious to see how this goes with the future cheerleading bi or lez female Jon, hope he and Karyn can actually hook up through this.

One of my favorite threads on this site! I hope you keep it up!

Shame that this ended

That's interesting, curious to see how the other's are reacting to their new bodies.

Do kids like hot tubs? I don't know anyone with a hot tub and kids to ask.

Really like the addition of new characters. Keep up the great work!!

Something tells me that the ring he took off isn't going back on that finger. Keep up the great work!

Didn't even consider introducing another dog situation. Curious where it will go.

Looking forward to the next chapter! 🤩

I know that....I just said that is where my mind went.

Sarah and her family are rich. I don't see her needing to open a CC in his name.

I love fleshing out side characters

I figured it wasn't.

Nice angle, I was just viewing Abby and her dad as side characters, but I like how you’ve fleshed them out.

Does sound kinda suspect doesn’t it? Not my intention lol

Why, when someone in a story smiles and says, "Do you know your moms maiden name?" I think identity theft...she isn't going to open up a credit card in Jon's name is she?

Thank you! I thought it would be interesting to write a character that literally only cares about make-up, clothes and impressing boys and it would be a fun twist to have the changing Jon do some changing of his own to Karyn.

Lots of people being surprised today. Wonder who.

The way you're writing this branch is very excellent! I'm a huge fan of the vibes you're using for the transformation ("'hon', he liked that."), and look forward to more!

I pivoted a bit based on your version.

I like the direction you’re taking this

Ah yes, I’d forgotten I’d given her a surname. Just gone back and retconned that. I just used the puns sign cause I’m from the UK so force of habit really.

For anyone wondering, this is why I always mentioned them taking their hand off the stone the moment they finish making a wish in this chain.

The in-universe reason is that after Karyn's first accidental wish they're scared of it, afraid that they'll say something stupid while touching it.

Holy cow those girls are evil. Vengeance on them is going to be massive I imagine.

Also, this isn't important, but wanted to ask...what country does this take place in? I saw the pound symbol earlier for paying for the magazine, just wondering. The town has been in various different imagined places.

Wasn't it Ruby Fletcher earlier?

That's perfectly understandable, I also have loads of stories needing continuation, my muse is dependent on how stressed I am , which has been rather high recently so, no stories from me.

At some point I'm hoping to finish it up. My goal was to get Jon... Jo back to Lake Point, but life IRL got too busy/hectic for me to concentrate on writing. Over the last couple weeks I've been slowly wading back into writing, but finishing this is up is #3 or so on my writing to do list. Hopefully I can get back into the swing of things and knock this out in the next couple months. I have notes/ideas for how to get Jo back, but I still need to flesh those out and connect the dots.

Any chance of continuing this?

Sadly? Is she realizing why?

He might be getting a slight accent, whether he notices or not is another matter

Is he muttering in a French accent?

Hello. I was inspired by the Labatt Blue "Better Ex" commercial. It was a fun 30 seconds with no explanation or follow-up. I decided to create a place where beers like that were real. The characters are an homage to YAWYW, as drinking-age college students. I also enlisted the aid of ChatGPT for this, which I found to be an interesting collaborator that was fun to bounce "what ifs" off and see what happened.

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very nice

Interesting contrast...in my version, he just sort of drops into breakfast and the rest of the day is questionable...in your version, Lucy does it intentionally.

I’m loving what you’re doing with this. Keep up the good work.

Would be neat to bring her to a Dog's Accessories shop and find that everything there fits her.

I may use some of your description as I had a few scenes before arriving at a similar scene.

Woo! So glad you're back and so glad we're following Lydia! Seriously looking forward to her trying to find clothes that fit, or god forbid running into a female dog on the street!

this is good. id be glad to see more