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I am glad that you have something planned for Simon too and I liked how Zoe was able to stand up for him. Biff is on the path to be an even sluttier and sex-obsessed Sarah and he will for sure give Molly very pleasant sexual experiences that would form a great contrast to what she had before. The mall arc was delicious and now I thnk that the hottub will do wonders for the new adult couples there. Maybe preceeded by a Jon and Sarah re-acting what their mothers did in those tapes to get their new hubbies in the mood ;)

Ah brilliant! Thanks for your help. I’ll keep that in mind in case it happens again

Delete tags first. Then remove chapter.

So glad you came back to this story!

Just pinged Phoenix in the Discord (have you considered joining?). I can't delete them either.

I do love me some mandatory milf as well, but better genes is such a great environment and interesting re-imagining of Jon. I second the 'no wrong answer' here. Also, I guess I'd be more likely to contribute to milf since it's more episodic and I don't think I'd be stepping on the toes of a narrative, but chances are really slim that I'd add to either.

Not through a new episode directly but you can easily add a hyperlink to another branch at the bottom of the text. You could create a new episode which is just a link without other text but that might get flagged as spam.

I might be a little biased and say mandatory milf lol, but honestly your writing is good enough quality that either choice would get people’s attention

I thought it was best to use a fictional President (Elizabeth Loughty) and a fictional Russian President (Andre Sedulov). Any mention of real-world figures of the past twenty years would have only distracted from the story. And if any real people with those names actually run for public office and win after the date of this episode's posting, it's a complete coincidence.

Anyway, this episode's main purpose is to further illustrate the world at large's reactions to the big world-changing event about four hours or so later.

If the dating is right, this is the first appearance of both Steve "The Stud" Farber and Mike "Moose" Matthews. So yes, they've been around YAWYW almost as long as Jon, Karyn, and Sarah (who of course appeared in the first episode).

Thanks, glad you’re enjoying. I always planned to go the Athena/Zoe route as I felt Zoe/Simon would just be too similar to Jon/Laura. Don’t worry, I have plans for Simon too now though.

I get that, but for this branch I wanted to explore the idea of, what if we only think Sarah is mean because we're used to Jon's perspective? What if Jon is the mean one, and Sarah's actually pretty cool? I definitely love all of the "evil Sarah" branches too, but I also like humanizing her, and variety is the spice of life :)

Or is garlic salt the spice of life? I always get those two mixed up.

It's hard to picture Sarah being honest and actually wanting to help anyone else.

The first part of the episode addresses a plot hole. As Ms. Cork, The Guest, Matisguy, and a few others noted on the Discord chat, YAWYW's first episode takes place after spring break, which is after high school football season is over. And earlier, I at least implied that there was a scheduled football game between Lake Point High School and its rival Forestville High. While I didn't mention football specifically (it could have been soccer, which is still played in spring), it was at least implied.

So I came up with the whole 'the schools agreed on an out-of-season 'tiebreaker' football game' idea as a way to resolve the plot hole. Of course that'll only be relevant if indeed there's a game later on in the story. But anyway, for those who still want to have a high school football game in their branches despite it being after spring break, there are certainly plenty of ways to get around that. And this is just one such way.

I like the whole equilibrium concept. And the adjustment in the panties. Great writing.

Ooooooh, I love where this is going. The scene between Molly and Biff on the last chapter was brilliant and really hot - nice usage of pics too - and I love Biff's internal struggle and justification to act like Sarah ("it's not gay/cheating if it's my cock, right?") and I can't wait to see more of those two in action. About the current scene, I am confused now. I would love to see Simon and Zoe develop that taboo feelings and attraction, but the way you wrote Zoe and Athena here was soooooo cute and heartwarming that I can't help, but root for them. Maybe an awkward love triangle between the three of them would be interesting to explore and test the limits of the experiment (free will x determinism) . Also looking forward to see Jon/Karyn mom/son moment before Jon gives in to his urge and get with Laura. And, of course, Sarah and Lucy intense lovemaking session, but that will also leaving Lucy interested into making a visit to Richard's room... Thanks so much for writing this.

"motherly curves and womanly padding." I love it!

Loving this story, can't wait to read about Sandra and Liam.

I like where this is going. Great writing.

I think Jon is going to slide into his role as Sandra no matter how hard he fights it - and he's not fighting it very hard at this point.

Thank you for the episode.

Couldn't she have just done one at a time? He wouldn't be able to run after she just took one off, or having one big and one small. His best chance works be to run after he gets one small and she takes the other one off. But that's still not a win for him.

Metacorp... That aged well lmao

Not bad, I highly suspected you plan on going the slow feminization route but the "fertility fairy" could also make him hyper masculine which would be an interesting change from the usual here.

Thanks. I also responded in the forum to your earlier post. As we can see here, Athena is already preparing herself for the possible consequences of magic being 'outed' to the world.

I think I'll give hints as to what I've planned next. A few speeches from fictional world leaders and political figures, as well as returning to MTI to deal with the risks involved with trying to help those changed in the board room Random Gun craziness. As we move in to Day Two and beyond, there will be further conflicts in Lake Point and beyond as people confront all the changes.

Thanks glad you enjoyed. I’ve been a little sidetracked lately, so it feels good to get this story rolling again.

I love the directions you are going. The work with Lydia arc was really good and even if I am not a furry person, I found all the scenes extremely hot. I like that you decided to let "the adults" in this bathtube scene and the videos were an unexpected, but really interesting addiction to the plot, especially because it involves Sarah and John character development in a nice way. I hope you will let us see "the kids" at the mall, notably Zoe deciding to spend more time with Simon and Mickey starting to hang out with Athena. Curious to see what Athena will think about this situation. And, of course, it would be really nice to see Molly and Biff finally going at it with Richard just watching from distance (and maybe exploring his new assets too).
Once again, thanks so much for writing this.
The use of the pictures also adds a nice flavor :).

err, darn auto-corrupt. That's supposed to be 'Yay, you're back!'

For story purposes Lakeview Academy offers like a dozen different language courses.

Couple of things here - I figured it would be easier to still use the original pronouns - Mark he/him and Stephanie she/her even though they are both now Juliette ( a college - aged version of Julia, and Stephanie doesn't know it's Mark) and Stephen. Hope it's not too unclear.

Lunchlady Enid Parkes and school nurse Dawn Carrington first appeared in the Transformation Guns branch. Enid Parkes has since appeared in the Wishing Coins branch. Both of them are well-meaning, friendly people normally. Enid Parkes genuinely wishes to do the best she can with what resources the cafeteria has to offer and Nurse Carrington is devoted to helping people. I thought it made sense to bring them in at this point, since we hadn't really heard of what the cafeteria staff were doing during this crisis, and of course Athena's injury required the attention of a nurse.

Decided to have a brief flashback to what else was going on during Jasmine's first night as a Djinn. As we see, while the girl's had their sleepover, the elder Galenos women had some fun of their own, whilst a few dark clouds gather on the horizon

I couldn't think of a better thing to call it. But I tried to make mine distinctive.

“Prime Version” love it. Love the direction you’ve run with this as well

That picture looks a lot like Katarina Klaes from My Next Life as a Villainess. Which is a fun show about a girl who gets isekai'd into the life of her favorite game's villainess, and tries to avoid the various terrible fates that befell the villainess in the original game's multiple endings. It's all the more fun that she ends up changing the game's storyline without even realizing it at certain points.

My favorite part of this story might be coming up with different exclamations for the different magical creatures. Bark on a Tree! for Dryads, Shards and Shells! for Dragons (From Eggs), By My Mothers' Magic! for Djinn, that sort of thing.

Thanks, it’s bee n hard to find a balance for the changes, want to keep bringing more in, but the more subtle ones are my favourites. Im planning on building towards to a massive get together, but I kinda pictured this first one to just be Jon, Laura, Lucy, and Sarah

After seeing a wish for a 'super hot sports car' in the Barter Stone branch, I thought "Oh, I've just GOT to use that wish with the Literal Stone." Since it didn't quite fit in with the existing storyline where Jon gets stuck in the school wall, I thought the best place for it would be where Jon's outside at the front porch, where the unexpected results of the wish taken too literally would be noticed right away.

When I created Mr Hargreeves for Nametags, I didn't foresee him becoming a recurring character, I think I based him off of a teacher from Grange Hill, a kids TV show from the 80s, and that character was, indeed, a hard ass, so well done, you continue to delight me with this

For only $10,000, this is an insane demand. Especially since it wasn't in the original plan.

$10,000 would hardly be enough to demand something like this. Maybe $500,000 or more. A real life changing amount of money for someone.

Decided to keep this mostly focused on the new Fiona's POV, but I might hop back for a chapter to establish what's going on with the other four briefly.

This could alternatively be titled, Three magical girls accidentally end up in a romantic comedy.

Oh yes!!! I loved this chapter. You've been doing a really nice job into making their slow transition and you nailed Sarah's changes in this one. All the gang gathered together in the hot tub? In their swimming outfits and all those hormones running? Nice. Lucy and Laura conversations, as well as Jon and Sarah's will be interesting, especially about their newfound lust. Will Biff and Molly "slow-bully" Simon and Zoe? I got a feeling that things will heat up and this night will be a memorable night for many of them. Really looking forward to Laura/John, Lucy/Sarah and Molly/Biff hot action, and curious about how Zoe will deal with Athena, now that she is becoming more attached to Simon. Thanks for writing.

There might be a problem when new Jon finds the stone, I anticipate shenanigans

This is a branch where I have some fun ideas that are all fairly far into the story, so I feel like I'm having to get through a lot of set up to get there. Debating employing a few timeskips, or focusing exclusively on Jon's POV to get there quicker.

Djinn allow for romantic partners of any sort, including more than one, which is helped by their alternative magical reproductive system. Later in life, Jasmine could literally blend her magical essence with both Sarah and Karyn, creating a child from all three mothers. Older Djinn are also quite proficient with minor perception altering magic, allowing her to potentially make people not think it odd that she's married to two women if they one day get married. That's actually something Djinn have done historically to make them working in masculine fields or being married to women seem unremarkable. So it won't be a problem as far as Jasmine's family is concerned, have yet to decide about Dryads and Dragons, but probably all three races will be cool with polygamy. I'm thinking for Dragonnewts it's much more of a class thing, IE are any potential suitors sufficiently wealthy to be a good match.

This is showing a lot of promise. There are multiple directions the story could go from here. We could end up with all the rifts between the 3 girls ended or become even wider through competition and secrets coming out unexpectedly. Have you decided yet if one or more of the magical races represented allow for multiple life partners?