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Yes. But I am loving it in this branche. Can't wait to see Anne in action :)

Steve seems even a worse womanizer than ever here

Well, he's a travelling salesman... and Linda is an ambitious career woman... maybe he left one wife for another

I'm changing Linda's husband's name from Roger to James, to make it less confusing with Laura Ferguson's husband, which is also Roger.

Probably nothing…

Ha a fun idea but I’ve got a dragon situation somewhere else … this is something a little more standard but no less annoying ;)

So dragon or dinosaur?

And absolutely nothing will go wrong …

I wonder if Jon can test the coin on himself alone or if he would need someone to give him a coin and if he would remember himself before the changes.

Wonder where this story will go, how will the coins affect the characters, I am interested in reading.

This is turning into my all time favorite branch. You already nailed it in the last chapter with Anne calling Steve "monster", but this scene with Emma and Stevie in the bath really was something unique that I enjoyed so much. Everything worked really well here, with the roleplay and the bath speeding up the transition of Emma and Stevie in such a cute, hot and heartwarming way. I know that you already have the plot planned and it's probably way better than anything that I can imagine, but I can see a follow up Jason praising Emma for being such a "good fat... sister"to Stevie as he continue to play "princess" with him while Emma and Anne will go to a workout session at the gym, and maybe Anne being able to score with some chicks ;)

Well, think of it on a timeline level. Jon left the house, and it is established it was after school when he left, and he was gone for at least an hour. Let's assume Stacy went into the house right after Jon declined to play with her. Not that much time has passed, so assume we still have time till Jon returns. In the other branch, I had him come back immediately, but that contradicts the idea he just left.

Will Jon ever arrive home in this branch? That was left hanging a ways above.

Lovely dream sequences. Can't wait to see more of Anne transformation (the girl on the mall is the new Simon, maybe?) and maybe Jason will be the one who will bath Emma today, with some very interesting results :)

This is brilliant.

Fun fact - 19 years ago, I (as Anonymous51) posted my first episode ever (for any website) on this day - May 19th. Who could have known that back in 2004, I'd not only be still writing episodes in 2023, but that I would amass over 15,000 episodes over several websites?

I love this so much please continue

I about feel bad for little Emma. With her being so young she's surely got be getting pent up with her dad's dick.

Speak for yourself. Two out of three of those do it for me.

sucklink?

@Pallas: I'll be honest, life has been getting in the way a lot for me lately. I really want to finish off this story but finding chunks of time to write is a challenge. But thanks to your comment, I am forcing myself to make time to write tonight. There will be at least one or two new chapters by the morning :)

This branch is bringing me so much joy so far. It's like an inversion of all of the old branches I used to read growing up, yet at the same time having a truly feminine disposition. There's something truly cathartic about this, and the invocation of the Bard himself has been proven to be merited, rather than a point of hubris.
I shall continue reading with eagerness

I'm trying to decide if I should revisit Steve...in my branch, the last we saw him, he was saying he had nothing to say and didn't want to talk.

Love the thought of Steve Farber as a little girl (and playing with Karyn, maybe?). Little Emma growing to be a dominant man is also delicious :)

Great idea! It's the ideal spot of the story do go back and develop other branches :)

Thanks, always appreciate your kind comments. I’m glad the pictures work well. You wouldn’t believe how long I spend looking for the right ones sometimes.

Another perfect day. The Sarah and Lucy arc was wonderful, going from Sarah's realization about Biff and Mollie to a extremely delicious taboo play (going from "mommy" to "Daddy"). Also, excellent work with the images: it takes talent and effort to find the right pics that fits well with the halfway transformations and you nailed it. Those images really add a lot to the storytelling. Curious about Lydia and Max night/next day and also Buster and Penny. Simply delicious. Wonder what you will have in mind for the party, where all those characters will interact with major changes already concluded. I only know that I will for sure love it :)

Don't you dare delete this, it's fantastic.

Liking this branch already!

I really like the spin you’ve put on Lydia and Buster, and where you’ve taken Abby and her dad, especially seeing as I just added them as side characters. I must admit it’s inspired me to work on them some more

I'm not sure if I'm going to continue down this Branch I think I just had to get it out of my head we'll see. Part of me wants to just delete this.

This episode and the previous one are largely warmup acts for what I have planned to come, where things will indeed not be resolved so easily and so neatly. There will be some crazy and dark twists ahead. In the meantime, I decided to follow up on the earlier mentions of Mime Gun activity at MTI. I thought of having a character describe Peggy as the Harley Quinn to Stragey's Joker, but decided the reference would only be distracting. In any case, this episode is pretty light, given what I have in mind to come just a bit later.

Thanks, appreciate you comments. Rest assured I’m not quite done with Jon and Laura yet, and I have a few other bits planned. Wasn’t intending to do a massive chapter dump, but the flow hit and before I knew it, here we are.

It's Lawry's.

Delicious and masterfully executed. I wasn't expecting that much updates at once and was in doubt about reviewing all the chapters or just leave a big one here, and finally decided to do this. I loved this Laura and Jon arc that you did there. The whole thing about the wedding ring and they teasing and acting flirty around at each other still dealing with the arousal and confusion was really really well delivered. It was a slow burn that made the actual sex scene felt earned and extra hot. With Jon and Laura definitely adjusted (even though there might be something more to develop in they arcs, especially Jon and Sarah), I wonder how the others will adjust. I loved the arc with Lydia and Buster (genderswap animal role reversal was a thing that I didn't expect that I would enjoy so much) and curious about how the McMillans are adjusting (as well as Zoe/Athena and Simon's new mindset). So much potential here and I am loving everything about that. Thanks for writing this :)

Changed Zoe's twin's name to Juliet to be a bit more distinct from the other branches where I've used Jasmine for the transformed Jon's name.

Thanks, hopefully you enjoy where it goes. I had a solid plan for what to do with Jon and Mikey, but was much more up in the air on the others, especially Roger. Hopefully what I ended up going with will be interesting!

Can’t wait to see where this goes

I’m really enjoying the direction you’re taking this in. Keep up the good work.

That makes more sense as to why they tried to sepearte from people.

Thanks. I had a couple of ideas, but was playing off of your idea of rich people with peculiar pets.

Absolutely love this! Please keep it up!

Very interesting! I like the characters already :)

The scene of Karyn ressing Biffy is just the most adorable thing ever

I'm enjoying this story so far, you're doing great. I'll admit, I wasn’t a big fan on a few things before the rewrite, like the out-of-place gods approach (the teacher’s transformation and the fact that Damion is playing online with others kinda defeated a few points) and a few characteristic oddities (Luke seems like a good kid just to act like that). But as for the rewrite, I’m loving the changes.

I do have one issue, though: I don’t think a short amount of time in Kindergarten would be enough to have caused the kind of impact they had on our protagonist to affect him as much as it did. You may want to increase the impact a bit more.

I like this path idea. More please.

Maybe you are not into it, but I think it would be really fun adding a woman trapped in the life of a baby boy in the story XD Maybe a woman who doesn't her old life.

I'd say Mandatory Milf as well, it's one of my favorite story lines.

I loved the way you described Biff and Karyn making out.

Great addition! Having fairies run amuck is a fascinating concept. Agree with Immoral that both feminization or hyper masculine are a good route to go.