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"Bizarre punishment" indeed. 😳

Has Jon completely just forgotten that he can just end this at any time by wishing it was over without even being in contact with the stone? Because that’s what he wished for in part 3 of this chain. Or does he know this all too well and he just is playing Karyn? What we need is some additional thing to anchor him to this reality so that he can’t just end it when he gets bored with it, or at least strongly motivates him not to do so.

I knew it!

I absolutely love this! A small novel in length and really about nothing super dramatic but sweet and endearing and Slice-of-life, wel done, after you have recovered I look forward to more of the same

An idea if someone continued it - the shadowy figure wishes that any animal parts wished back to the human counterparts would revert after 20 days; so the next morning Jon gets his kangaroo ears back (pretty hard to believe he supposedly looked at them and said “those are kangaroo ears” but ok) and Karyn gets her hoofs back, and they decide to take action.

Yet another one from the first week of June 2008. It’s probably all one guy with a lot of different aliases.

Anyone here on this page, I recommend you go with the second branch, “Animal Stone: The next day, and onwards”, it’s written by the same guy and much better than the first one.

Look at that, over two years later and the same guy comes back to write the next chapter. I guess that’s kind of dedication, but he didn’t really resolve it, though he left it in a position that would be good for someone else to come along and write it. It’s a nice set up.

Mystichobo sure does have a one track mind doesn’t he. As a standalone piece his stuff is intriguing, but only one of them, because they’re all pretty much identical, at least all the ones I’ve run into haven’t had a lot of variety.

The problem is you just completely erased the character one bit at a time, it makes the beginning of the story weak when taken as a whole. It’s almost like you had this thing written and you just modified it as little as possible to fit it in here with the story with Jon and the wishing rock. It’s rather hard to believe that he would do this to be honest, to casually permanently and completely overwrite himself with a female jewel thief with fox ears and a tail and a crippling accent without at any point having a shred of doubt in the process.

Well this was a weird adventure. And I found it just by randomly searching “licorice”.

Anyway anyone here, you might be interested in this:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shorts_(2009_film)

It’s basically this, but made into a movie. By that I don’t mean it is directly this; it doesn’t have these characters but the premise is the same, a wishing stone with godlike power that is used in the same way (except I think it doesn't even have any limitations at all, wishes can be undone), and the same sort of things happen from wishes gone wrong, like at one point two people get conjoined to each other, at another, they summon tiny aliens. It’s all set in a gated community run by a company run by a totalitarian tyrannical madman, that makes all-in-one devices (so basically next generation iphone) but of course with the wishing stone that literally is an everything in one device, there is a mad scramble and battle over control of the stone. I don’t remember it that well because I saw it in 2010 but it was definitely the best movie I saw that year. Not that it had a lot of competition.

Hi The Guest , Can you continue to write about what happened to Tomi? I love what you write

Bruh moment

I like how this is truly an ending and a shitpost and the creator of this page only made this one thing and nothing else and probably spent a total of 10 minutes on this website ever and yet it got 63 replies so far (though starting from one of the names I’m really trying to avoid). So here you go BonoboMonkey, your first and only upvote, from me to you.

Once again, excellent job on the writing. Reading about Jon's new, girly (and occasionally pleasant) experiences... it actually made me feel a little warm inside! I even tried putting my legs together like s/he was told to.

Uh, I swear I'm not trans! 😳 Just curious!

A-anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, whenever that will be!

Added a few chapters

I wonder how much of "being in collage" Jon copied. Did it just take "Jon is now a college student" and go from there, based on how Jon would act? Or did it also take other aspects from the girl he copied it from, like where he studied and who his roommate is? Obviously, as time went on, his life became more and more different from "now" due to all of the changes stacking on top of eachother, but at the time of this chapter, how much of Jon's new life is his own?

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A real class act guy, his first inclination on first contact with another sentient species being kidnapping and slavery. I wonder what his plan is here, does he just think that he can just sell her or does he have his own circus or what?

I think since then, Gibson seems to be the preferred last name for Jon. Madison is still used only in continuations of branches/stories where it was previously established to be his surname. In most branches these days, it's Gibson.

I think maybe this should be broken up into 2 parts. Where it says:

I picked up the stone. “I wish that the revised version of what is on this paper would become real, without modifying history, it just would be true from this point on with her new abilities and the gullibility condition.”

That could have very well created another android right then and there for Jon, because he isn't saying that it would apply to Stephanie. I don't know though. It would need a new title, and then the next chapter would be everything after that and that would get the title of "Being Fair to Karyn", and then there would be the opportunity to have 2 versions, one where it generates a new android girl right then and there, and one where it proceeds with the story as originally written, and it really wouldn't be fair to the 3 who upvoted (wow 3 upvotes that's rare for my stories) it as it is.

If someone else eventually wants to just copy the story of this chapter up to that point to then have it separate into the possibility where the stone creates another android girl for Jon and have it as a chapter parallel to this one, you have my permission.

I too am curious. At first I thought this would be a normal-ish world but I’m kinda glad there is the implication of some exotic biology out there, at least I certainly hope so. I wonder about Sarah too …

Girl Jon is cute. Knight in shining armor indeed. Hope to see more.

Would be neat to see Fiona grew a duplicate of her waist up in place of a would-be cock. Having the limbs and dexterity to move around and all but instead of being normal, the entire torso is just sensitive and is practically a giant penis.

Would be neat to see Fiona grew a duplicate of her waist up in place of a would-be cock. Having the limbs and dexterity to move around and all but instead of being normal, the entire torso is just sensitive and is practically a giant penis.

Jon Madison. That’s terrible. Might as well name him George Washington or Ronald Reagan if you’re going to name him Jon Madison. I don’t think I like any of them tbh.

It is better to take the time to make wishes to fix things then rush into them.

@Bunnie I assume they meant "fetal position".

What's a feral position?

I have a feeling I might know what's going on here...
But on the other hand, the physical evidence I'd expect seems absent so far, so maybe not...
Dang it, looks like I have no choice but to keep reading!

Gooose, any chance that we might see any more from this story? Was thoroughly enjoying it as you were writing it a few months ago

Well, the jury's still out... ;)

Hey, that was pretty nicely written for a simple MTF. 👍

(though I will admit it took me an embarrassingly long time to realise what "that time of the month" meant :/)

I hope this isn't an Alive situation...

So I guess cause of Jane new age of 29, she is actually Linda's stepmom, I wonder who is Linda's mom in this new reality and what happened to her.

Now I am curious on where the Kylo will take this, also where future authors will go from here and how that will differentiate from Kylo take.

"As someone with an amateur interest in Polish, I'm driven bonkers by a Polish-like name that's slightly off!"

As an actual Pole, female surnames not being "gendered" (like Skłodowska👩, as opposed to Skłodowski👨) is a big pet peeve of mine. Then again, my main teacher's (or whatever you'd call it in English) surname is "Cichy👨", not "Cicha👩", so I guess it's not a hard rule.

...uhh, sorry for necroposting. 😅

That was a very well-writter pair of transformations.

I had to reread to remember what was going on but it was totally worth it! This is a great branch with a cozy vibe.

That element might be part of why Linda and Jon are more on board with being Susan and Sarah/why Jon is insistent about continuing the McMillan's lifestyle. That is to say, they're being influenced not to be borish versions of Sarah and Susan.

I wonder if Sarah wish will only affect them physically or if will also affect them mentally, since there where two parts to her wish ("Ugh, I wish they knew what it was like to be us; maybe then they wouldn't be so boorish."), she wants them to know what it is to be like a McMillan and also to no be borish, so how did the stone interpret the borish part I wonder.

I've been wondering just what they were going to do about Zoe. Like Taylor, I was wondering whether or not them letting Zoe in on the whole thing the way they did with Program J would be a good idea, given Zoe's rebellious personality. With Program J, they were able to win her over with "We're giving you a better life than what you had before, and if everything goes well, then it could become even better than that, as long as you're a good supporting character in Sarah and/or Karyn's lives". With that in mind, I wondered what they could offer Zoe/Cici/Program Z that would get her to cooperate for the good of the show and everyone involved with it (both the in-show cast mostly unaware of their status as characters in a show, and the behind the scenes team like Elias Ellis, Taylor, Josephine and the rest).

As it turns out, they've got an idea, though it looks like it's going to be a bit hard on Taylor. Wondering whether or not it's going to work out, and if Mackenzie will have to be let in on what's going on as well, or if they can avoid it for now. In any case, the clear lesson we take from this is that regardless of how a show is made, problems that happen behind the scenes will almost certainly affect what goes on in the universe of the show itself.

Added Robot as a tag and applied it.

Have you thought about brining Mackenzie/Jon into this? The Jon part of the character matrix still cares about his sister and Zoe, knowing he's still around, will be less chaotic.

It's an interesting question. I think if you asked her, she'd say her name is Mackenzie, full stop, while the production staff is continuing to call her Program J and Zoe/Cici would probably call her Jon if she knew all the facts. They might give her a new designation down the line eventually, and Jam is a funny nickname if nothing else.

I wonder if they will rename Program J to something else now that Jon is named Mackenzie, I don't think Program M, maybe Program JM or Jam, since they needed to restart because of the jam Jon caused to the whole show by becoming Karyn friend?

This my favorite thread. Keep it up!

Interested to see where this goes!

Sure seems like Jon got the best of the trade. I hope he makes the best of this new opportunity.

I love your writing, especially your attention to detail.