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Confusion about rude Jon, about Howard being there, or about the egg thing?

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Yeah, he'll be able to choose his swap as it happens. I wrote it that way so if another writer wants to change who Jon switches with, it's easier to split off.

Jon wished for his swap not to be random... but didn't say who he'd swap with... Is he going to get to choose at the time of the swap?

Yeah. I like the fact that she's clearly been thinking about the idea of Sarah's body and Jon's personality being her ideal so long and so much that when she had the stone she didn't even think about and discard other possibilities, she just made that one literally happen.

Oh, there were definitely other options to what she did, and she's certainly being selfish with the course she's gone with. Down the line she may indeed have to reckon with her choice here, and subsequent choices she's going to make. The stone is essentially absolute power, and we all know what that does.

Yeah, but it's a much easier moral case to make for altering herself mentally than someone else physically. Altering herself is her making a choice about herself, so I can't really see a moral objection to it, especially something like just altering her sexuality, where her "self" would remain intact. I understand she might not want to be straight, but like given she hasn't even told Jon she isn't straight... she doesn't seem comfortable being lesbian either.

The actual text of the story to me implies she just didn't think of it. Especially the bit about how she's tried to convince herself to go for Jon anyway. It's sort of an interesting blind spot, and if at some point she realizes that wishing herself straight was an option, it might make for some interesting character moments for her, since it's already too late to that. Especially if she tells Jon about the stone again, and he points it out.

Hell she wouldn't even have to be straight, just wish for a Jon-specific exception, so she's not interested in men, except Jon. That would be tricky to phrase in a way that guarantees what she wants though.

So, you're right that some of it is contrived for the transformation story, but her rationalization here is that she's trying, at least at first, to avoid altering people's minds as much as possible. She could also have just wished Sarah to be a nicer person who was interested in her, and wished Jon's unrequited feelings for her away, but she didn't. Morally speaking she's on a bit of a slippery slope regardless, but she's trying to rationalize and justify what she's done.

I wonder if pointing out that she could wish herself straight would make Karyn feel more guilty or if she would rationalize that away. Did she consider that? Obviously she wouldn't for the reasons of making a transformation story... but still.

Jon and Sarah's dynamic is starting to remind me of this ngl

To hell with it. I uploaded the last chapter anyway. Maybe sometime in the future someone will find it and care.

it’s not Biff that’s at fault for this, it’s Karyn. 100%. It’s like she covered him in fish blood and then kicked him into a tank of piranhas and then condemned and swore vengeance against the fish for being so evil for what they did next

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You already got the answer you wanted but I have seen this several times actually. Not the bimbo mean girl thing but taking turns changing each other and being unaware of it. Just a few days ago I found one where Karyn turns Jon into a fox person and then he turns her into a horse person: https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/27046. Of course the root cause is further back with a magic pencil which leads to lots of different things. Earlier I found one where she ends up a thumbelina sized fairy and I don’t remember what he was or where it was located. I’ve seen this premise at least 5 times. Here’s another one, where Jon turns Karyn into a clown in a variation of humanity where humans are sexually dimorphic and women look like clowns https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/16165

I swear you guys are gonna give me the weirdest kinds of kinds if this keeps going. @_@

I kinda like how this turned into some sort of dark comedy at the tail end of the story.

Wow.

Uhh, I didn't expect me to go this far into this branch, as I'm not really into conjoinment too much, but Fiction Branches once again proves that a good story (or at least an emotion-driven story) can "save" and keep you interested in anything.

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@lifesmainamtagonist Yes! Oh yes please! I know it'd probably be tough to determine where a storty lands on the "porn-to-story scale" (not to mention the ratio could change between chapters due to different writers), but it'd certainly be a good piece of information to know before reading.

FTP, nonsensically enough, is short for Frotterotransformationalpartialism, which is a term coined on the old Naga's Den website with kinda started the whole thing a long time ago.

Jon you goof, you can just wish to know where Karyn's original bits are so you can swap them back.

I had a thought, since Sarah is leading a boy in mind into the girls' locker room. What if Sarah stated "Please don't perve on the girls here, they didn't ask for this. Just act like a normal girl... whatever you do with Karen aside.”

This would have Jon 1) no longer attracted to girls... for the most part. She's more 4/5ths boys and a few specific girls that she has strong relationships with, like Karen. I suppose Kayla and Yuki would count in that category too as fellow Nerds, and maybe Athena and Zelda... but then maybe not.

You might need to split the effect with "Don't perve on us..." and later "Honest advice: This will be easier for you if you let yourself like boys."

I can see a couple of reasons for Sarah making these statements. One is privacy, another is to cover her ass when the Matron comes to investigate. Though Sarah has done nothing wrong (save but possessing her absolutely sparkling personality), but if guys are not to know magic, the choice is to either make the man forget or to make him apart of the female cause.

One benefit of changing Jon to ack like a normal girl is that all the small things girls do, put in a bra, reapply makeup, etc. becomes easy and almost 2nd nature to Jon.

I’m pretty sure that ftp acronym is not a thing. I look up with translators and it says the f word is portuguese for brother. And just by ftp it seems like the acronym for female to part and I didn’t think it was what I wanted at first since it would be mtp in this case, but of course if p is the destination then it’s not really important whether the subject started male or female. Perhaps change it to “htp” for “human to part”.

You know, there really should be another series of tags that identify the type of story in the parameter of whether it’s 0% story 100% porn like this thing, or story driven, or some combination thereof, maybe a scale from 0 through 10 for “porn driven”, and a second scale from 0 through 10 for “story driven”. Just to tell perspective readers what it’s going to be. I’m not putting down someone that wants content that’s completely devoid of anything but fap fuel, or if that’s what you’re looking for one day and the next day you want something else you’ll know what you’re getting as you look for it, I come across something like… this and I’d like to know that’s what it is so I can save my time without starting to read any of it.

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That is everything that was there until I got stuck back in 2011. Feel free to add away from here.
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Still updating this only two or three more posts and everything after that will be brand new for 2024 and not from 2011

Jessycat was fast. 23 minutes and 51 seconds for this, well thought out with formatting and I don’t see any errors, maybe she put it into a word processor first.

good stuff 👌

If she can wish for anything why is she making him work hard so she can steal the wages she has no use for and torturing him like he’s her biggest enemy and did something unforgivable? He’s just her boyfriend. I guess this is just another psycho revenge fantasy against nobody in particular.

Sarah’s in high-school and her mom is 30 years old? Hmmmm....

I didn’t notice before this was the science wizard’s first one. He was off to a good start!

Pretty fun stuff so far. It's nice to see that there are some new ideas around, and people doing things that haven't already been done before. While I was there for the Discord chat mentioning the idea, I didn't know if it'd ever happen.

Some pretty good work there. I'm sure it took a while to come up with the lyrics for the song, and imagine how the basic YAWYW translates as a musical. This was a pretty clever handling of the usual 'Jon and Karyn realize they've made an accidental wish and are freaking out' scenario, done in musical form. Looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.

I'll see where this goes, and maybe do my own take on this. There's at least one character I introduced as an addition to Lake Point's 'theatre' crowd who might fit in with this scenario.

Absolutely did hear the music! What a great use of the concept, really love the song you wrote here and the dynamics between Jon and Karyn. Their back and forth was great. Plus I'm always a sucker for the 'shaming someone for cursing before they say the line', that got a good chuckle out of me. Really, really enjoyed this. Excited for the reprise and the big villain introduction number.

If you heard some kind of music in your head while reading this, I'll consider it a win.

MaryMary (aka. tango) threw out the basic idea for this on the Discord about a week ago, and it was rattling around in my head enough that I had to make at least a one-off out of it.

My thanks to the clearly one single person who has upvoted every chapter of this series, usually by the time the view count of each chapter gets to 20. If you reply with some contact info I’ll e-mail you the last chapter if you want.

Could anybody continue these episodes I would but I suck at writing

That sounds interesting!

So basically a hentai version of Midori no Hibi.

Haven't seen anything on this thread in a bit. Hoping it continues, great episode.

As much as I want to say Zzyzx has morgan freeman’s voice so that it’s the most comfortable for Jon, I can’t help but think the voice of Fart from Rick and Morty would be much more fitting.

Here’s an obscure fact for you: a male fox is called a reynard. Which is one letter off from renard, the french word for fox.

Why put C cups on someone that tiny?

I want to say I like this thread. Though to be fair to Jon, there was no malice with this wish.

I like the wish to be a proper queen without loosing her sense of self. I would be nice if other's in Jon's life were found and 'adapted' by similar wishes.

Key ideas: Mikey is now a girl, otherwise Jon would not inherit the throne. Mikey/Princess Michelle is still physically active, It's just now fencing, skeet and horseback riding/steeple chase instead of soccer and basketball and magic:the Gathering. Michelle is mastering the art of turning fighing spirit and willpower, qi, into attacks and practical effects.

Zoe is a Princess, but studying to be a high magi. I imagine there are two schools of Magic High Magic - Lex Arcana where one declares laws and works on a conceptual basis, and Low Magic, where though the power of language, including body language, you can prompt the Universe to do a trick. This is not conceptual, and the tricks are rather narrow. But the Universe is an old dog and knows a lot of tricks.

Karen: A guy now. Actually a girl using a magical trinket to pass as a guy so that she can complete in the upcoming tournament. Day job is a hunter for the royal family. Perhaps she can catch milady's favor?

Yuki: Jon's friend, one of the Nerds, co-GM of the local D&D group at school. Has a crush on Jon, but is friends with Karen and doesn't want to poach. Is now Princess Jeaun's ninja maid.

Sarah: Daughter of a buisness magnet, Still ritch. Not nobility. An advocate for the Socalist Party, advocates the dissolution of the Royal Family, unbacked fiat currency and direct democracy.

Biff: Now a girl. A dutchess, to be exact. In the Royal Sucession after Zoe and Michelle. A rival to Prencess Jeanne.

Queen Linda: Newly ascended to the throne, with the death of her father. Her mother serves as Queen Dowager/Queen Mother. A big celebration of her comming into her rule is upcoming.

My thoughts were people would report people acting out of place, they have partial and mixed memories because this is such a big wish. Enough memories to be the people they were prior the wish. Queen Linda 'adjusts/adapts' them, with their feedback. A theme is being Blursed - that is a mix of blessed and cursed. Each changes in a way that is beneficial, but change is hard. Biff doesn't have to assert his masculinity any more. Sarah is starting her career in politics, Karen actually gets to compete in a tournament, Zoe gets to study Magic with Athena. Even Mikey gets to do fun and interisting things.

As for Jon/Jeanne I see her meeting people both before anD after 'adaptation'. Leading to a late afternoon/evening meeting with the Queen, who reasons that there is no good single wish.Rather, it just might be that Jon's Grandfather set Jon up for failure. (My thoughts are that Granpa wanted to break the Veil/Masquerade that has hidden Magic. Lake Point is not the only place that has changed. As for the stone's range.. 100 miles or so. The border is unbroken fantasy kingdom during the day, and connects to the United States overnight.

That's all that I have. I'm making some ai art for Princess Jon/Jeanne.

Check out the book, The Lord of the Flies by William Golding. There is a character that has visions, though it's associated with epilepsy.

Posted with apologies to anyone who actually has this condition (I hope I got it right!) but this is a headcanon about Athena I've been contemplating for quite a while. Was really excited to write this episode tbh.

Welcome back!

Interesting idea focusing on Jennifer Taylor. I included her and her twin sister in Transformation Guns and the Wishing Coins branches, though they might play a slightly larger role in Wishing Coins due to an early wish in that branch involving them. But I think this is the first time we've seen Jennifer Taylor as a viewpoint character in a branch, since (as noted in the episode), she's usually just a bit player and part of the Lake Point ensemble.

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