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Interesting. I hope that you continue this story

Poor Allison. 🙁

First, I want you to know I LOVE this story, it's one of my favorites on here. I've lost count of the number of times I've read all the parts. I hope it gets continued.
Second, this episode reminds me of geeky dorky me back in high school. I had a severe crush on a gorgeous cheerleader. It took me two months to work up the nerve to ask her out, and when I finally did she responded by politely and quietly saying, "I can't." She didn't laugh, she didn't slam the phone down, and to the best of my knowledge, she never spread it around school. If you have to be turned down by someone, that seems the nicest way possible. Thank you for your Beautiful Writing!

Ok, that was weird. I normally use a Firefox-based browser here. For a change I tried a Chromium-based browser, and things look better - but it was weird. When I first loaded a page, it looked the same as in the FF browser, but after a very short - but easily noticeable - bit of time the browser re-rendered the page with the correct blank lines. Weird.

Thanks for the suggestions, but no luck. Javascript is enabled and clearing the fictionbranches.net cookies had no effect.

Why $50s?

"One thing is for certain. Shopping looks way more fun when edited down to just a character pulling back a curtain over and over wearing different outfits getting their friends reactions, played along with a song like "Girlfriend" by Avril Lavigne or something like that."
😂

@t_thxthx do you happen to have JavaScript disabled in your browser? If so, you will need to either enable it or clear your cookies.

It does paragraphs for me, in your post the blank line is there... Do you have user css set up or something like that? An extension in your browser maybe?

To wit, my post was composed with and should have had a blank line between the two sentences...

@Ms-Scarlett-Raven 🫶🏻, I’m hoping you didn’t miss addressed to you via comments to your story #5407718 my message 🙏.

Will this be your only branch featuring a polyamorous relationship?

Mostly, with a decent amount of Roger as the new Madeline and a few check-ins with the celebs living as the Gibsons and Karyn. Since those two are the only two being switched into stars with a preexisting relationship, you can imagine they'll be spending more time together than the other three.

@Ms-Scarlett-Raven awesome 🫶🏻, I’m hoping you will also pay your attention after this story final publishing at least to those branches (at least one or better few of them):
● #5061998 and/or #240848 and/or #71237;
● #4339264 and/or #4733656 and/or #43460 and/or #43457 and/or #43449;
● #7823;
● #18782;
● #413060.

Will Jon and Karyn be the main focus of this branch?

I have some posts on other branches have a look at my profile. As for this story I am not finished yet. :)

Love your writing I wonder if you're also going to do another branch thanks!

The circle only works while they're inside, but Athena's going to try and figure out something portable they can take with them. It means they'll remember the original Zelda and how things were before any other changes Esme makes this particular night, but they'll still be vulnerable when they go back to school the next day.

So does the protection only work while they are in the circle? Or does the circle give them some temporary protection even after they leave it?

He shouldn’t know who she is though. When they wished that she was a couch that should’ve changed history and erased everyone’s memories of ever having met her, including Jon.

That's a big theme of this branch, that Stephanie, now Esme, becomes corrupted by the power she has. Going from powerless to all powerful has given her a serious head trip. She doesn't think things through, she projects her own desires on to others, she's petty, and she's getting increasingly addicted to the power in her hand.

@Gooose I’d say Delinquent for Sarah or maybe even an ex student council president who has been pushed out in favor of Sayaka which would make Sayaka her rival. I’d still say Karyn be a gyaru would a good choice

I agree with Christine L's comment in The McMillan Triplets: Acquisitions chapter:

"People in positions of power tend not to even notice the little people who get crushed by their actions, let alone care."

And just like Richard McMillan in that chapter, Esme is a perfect example of this.

Thanks ZamZam, appreciate the feedback. As to Discord, not so much. Just want to play here for the time being. No plans to post anywhere else.

So you have already chosen who Jon becomes?

Karyn could maybe be gyaru type girl. That would be interesting to see atleast

I’m curious who you would pair with Sarah. Or Karyn even

this tidal wave one seems pretty interesting enjoying it so far!

Nice! Thought of joining the Discord by the way?

I have a few ideas but I could never settle on who to have Sarah and Karyn become. Played with the idea of Sarah ending up in a Biff/Steve type but discovering the jock archetype doesn't automatically equate to popularity in Japan, and being more of a delinquent instead and lower down on the social hierarchy. Also considered making her into a hard core otaku. Not really sure at all who to have Karyn be.

Hi ZamZam, see the next episode... :-)

So Jon becomes Wonder Woman? I would wonder(pun intended) how much of DC would be part of the new reality

Interesting to see where this one goes if you are planning on continuing it.

I’m surprised Jon is even aroused by guys at this point. Was expecting more wishes to happen before that occurred.
Hope Biff or Zeus gets subjected to more wishes from Jon

One of my favorite branches on here. I wish this could be continued soon

A comment that you never said what was in those boxes...

"Jon inwardly groaned. This was supposed to be his happy world where he could do whatever he pleased. Why was the world trying to guilt him like this? He didn’t want to have to deal with a pair of depressed girls."
Quote of the branch for sure.

Should've wished for popcorn or a drink at this point lol.

"They should have the same name, just spelled differently"
Gee, thanks for the reader's convenience, Jon. :)

I'm really tempted to add to this line again, but I'll be honest I find it SOOO difficult to write for such extensive memory manipulation (mostly because it's really difficult to imagine myself in that position)

I really like what you're doing here. Great storyline. Fascinating to see the effects of different magics interacting. Like Sarah stealing Linda's traits like a vacuum or black hole. Linda's becoming less "Linda" , isn't she? Well, I can't wait to see what happens next

This isn’t normally my favorite style of storyline, but I so invested now! I want to know where this story goes.

They’ll be settled again within the next few chapters.

I think the names at this point are getting a bit confusing.

This is deliciously evil.

Gives me an idea for something I was pondering for the 122 variation.

Guest: just covered them in the next chapter

Eleanor: Thanks very much. I have also have stuff on Writing.com if you’re on there if you want more of my stories. Link to my page is in my bio, always glad for any GPs on there :)

I'm curious about the two dogs and how they are doing.

Damn, your stories are very good, is there any way to support you and see more?

Lots of great stuff here! Loved the whole discussion between Kyla, Zoe, and Athena, and the added twist and turns.

The whole discussion about 'within earshot' definitely makes sense. It's a good theory on how that particular aspect of the Stone's magic works. The explanation Athena comes up with in this episode, that if someone at least perceives that a wish is being made, it still counts as 'earshot' even if they didn't catch everything and only mostly lip-read, makes perfect sense. Loved that 'Eureka' moment.

Yes, this one is a long one, but it was well worth it. This might be my favorite episode of this particular variation of the McMillan Triplets/Hidden Wisher story so far.

What if Jon and Laura went for another addition to the family?