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Sensible regulation. Just a guide saying don't do that.

This was really good. Wasn’t expecting the two to turn into each other.

@AnonyMouse what is it the kids say nowadays? "Game recognizes game"? Thank you for your kind words :)

He really only needed to walk half a mile before returning home because he would have picked up the other half mile in the way back. 😉

This, right here, is why I so appreciate your compliments. This is a great twist on some familiar themes and written engagingly and concisely. So glad to have this thread resume.

@nothingsp Yay!

@Great Sage: Well, she won't be making any wishes just yet...her calendar's full tomorrow ;)

Welcome back, please stay :D

Splendid and beautiful, I'm now terrified Joni will make a stupid wish that ruins all this adorable wholesomeness

Wonderful as always. Your writing makes me want to improve. One of the highlights of my week.

Very cute. I do love fairies being fairies…

Thank you both for the kind words. I sort of went too far and turned this whole thing into a novella, and now I'm basically pruning it down so that it won't be 200 branches deep. The good news is that, subject to minor revisions and major reactions, it's done; the bad news is that I have to revise and redact to get there.

Glad to see you back, AnonyMouse. This story is a whirl, but a beautiful whirl. <3

Did not even need to read the chapter before I knew it deserved an upvote. So glad to see this thread getting a new addition after such a long break. Life can get in the way, and that takes priority. But it's good to see you back :)

The clothes of an average teenager were made for a sexy little girl?

Heh, thanks. I figured this was a setup that could go in quite a few different directions and build on what Thisisnoone already established with old Jon's life. Hopefully folk will enjoy it.

Great set up Gooose! Super excited to see where you go with this

"Operation Rock Hard" as chapter 69.

Nice. :)

Intriguing set-up. Lots of fun possibilities here, I wonder what direction you'll go?

I'm a bit confused: I understand why Linda essentially has two personalities -- she is a queen but keeps her sense of self. I don't understand why Jon does, too: Yes, he heard the wish, but that simply means he would know why he's suddenly acting (which apparently and quite reasonably includes thinking) as befits his/her station.

Not so much left as time has overwhelmed me. The story outline is done, the lore and timelines are long done, the next four episodes are basically done, I just need (a lot of) time to finish them. The kind words, however, are appreciated.

Looking forward to see more! Curious if it's now a kingdom of elves, or if that's only the elite/royal family. Also looking forward to see Jeanne have to bluff/deal with any new social connections.

This is a wonderful chapter as always, but I'm starting to become especially infatuated with the characterization of the Princess in Jon's thoughts, here. She's super cute, from what I'm gathering; well done!

Loved the development and how you tied up this story. Congratulations, I enjoyed every chapter a lot.

I don't know what you still have in mind for this story, but I would be happy to see more of all those characters settling down inti their new lives for good and how Ruby will be conceived in that night ;)

@Great Sage - it was more of a lampshade for the pysanky mentioned in the next chapter, to dress up as mere flavor text what was actually a bit of foreshadowing ;) But that works, too...

Seems like the voice in Linda's head should be trying to get her to use the wishing stone, making more widespread changes for the "good" of the kingdom. But I'll understand if you'd rather keep things "small" and focus on Jon, I mean Jeanne, trying to deal with their new reality of being forced to act like a princess.

Don’t worry, I picked up on that. Feeling like I’m in the final stretch for this now too.

Great chapter, can't wait to meet the new Jeanne. Also quite curious to see how Zoe and Karyn have changed in this new world.

Please don't see it as a criticism, it was more of a hot take. I enjoyed the branch overall, although I still to intend to try and bring my version to a conclusion (along with years of other unfinished storylines) at some point.

Lol, thanks a bunch Matis!

All rise for another post from the Great and Mighty Enjeubleu! bows

Seriously, though, ditto to what Mary said. This chapter is fantastic.

I see what you mean! Just wanted to leave it open for anyone else to add should they want lol

Thanks so much, Mary!!! I spent way too much time trying to get the feel of this chapter right, so I’m delighted to know someone enjoyed it

Absolutely delightful build up to that end of chapter wish! Your characterization of Linda and her internal 'queen-ness' is so enjoyable to read and I can't wait to see how it manifests in future chapters as I'm loving her authoritative and stern posturing. And that's not even the best part! I really hope Jon enjoyed that because I'm pretty those are the last empty carbs he'll be eating for a while! Great great great update, can't wait for more!

Feels like a choose your own adventure.

😂

"solitude quickly erodes the frail stilts that had been propping up Jon's hope."
That's pure poetry. Love it.

I'm surprised Zoey didn't make a wish after Ryder left that he couldn't enter the house uninvited, and that he couldn't touch the stone or make wishes on it, just in case he did witness Zoey making wishes. But, I guess that wouldn't make for as exciting a story.

I must've been hit with the Bubblegum Stone, because I accidentally published this out of order (kind of). I'm going to get rid of the other one and do a bit of rewriting on this storyline. Who knew thinking "what would a bimbo do?" eventually makes you think like one in real life.

PSA never make wishes on a glowing pink stone unless you're ok with having massive boobs and sometimes forgetting what chapter you've written or not.

All should be explained soon

So, how are unchanged people picking up on the changes?

That’s certainly an unique way to do a swap

Creepy... and very bizarre...

I do have it planned out, and I will get round to doing their little roll-back, just want to get the mainline branch finished first now, before I hit another burnout with it.

Curious if we'll visit the Meshidas story.

Don't worry about pace, dear. I also enjoy the things that you are doing with the names. May be a little confusing, but it fits within the story and thw own characters confusion about their new beings and roles. Thanks for writing this.

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Yay for twinning!

Ah brilliant, thanks very much, looks like I’d just copied the wrong link.

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