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Work I can't help you with but this is the definition of informal so I wouldn't worry too much about grammar as long as you're understood. If you're really concerned, take what you're going to submit, have a free AI check it over. "Hey Grok, English isn't my first language and I want to make sure this is understandable. Would you please check this for grammar and spelling?" You're just using a tool to double check yourself like a spell check.

Maybe I’ll give it a try in a few weeks. Am busy with work related stuff and I have to brush up on my English grammar first. Cause it’s neither my first or second language

We'll have to do one from Sarah's POV. We're probably overdue for an outsider perspective. Maybe you'd want to write it up. =-)

It’s bit funny to see it from Sarah’s POV. Since from her perspective she turned a normal guy named Cassandra who is her bff/friend with Benefits into a Goth slut

I hadn't intended Cassandra, Zoe, or their mom to become futanari but it might happen due to future wishes.
And if you want to add to any of these Episodes I'd love to see what you come up with.
And you're right, the wish logic is there if you wanted to build on or alter the Episode with a 'whoops Zoe has a dick now and is freaking out' sort of thing.

Since Cassandra got bigger breasts thanks to Zoe’s wish, I thought that the wish may affect more of her anatomy since they have a futanari mom and Mikey also became a futa

Zoe and Cassandra don't have penises. Unless you can show where they might have gotten them, it is entirely possible I overlooked some bit of wishing logic.

Perhaps Sarah's wish gave her some of the original John's energy and she was able to share it.

Would that mean Cassandra also got a dick or is she now the only one who hasn’t got one?

Finally someone who knows futanari means that they a pussy too.

All I'll say for now is that the story isn't over yet...

I like that Jon changed back and isn't jock Jon anymore. But I don't really understand how Sarah had the power to change Jon back.

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Please! Ask away

Glad to see you writing again. I always like your takes on where a story should go.

I really like your story and I want to talk with you and our discussion is related to story mind can we talk?

Great story I have a question about your story Can I ask?

time will tell

Also hope Jon develops his relationships with his harem more. And im wondering when he does if he will use the editor to make them more accepting of Jon being in more relationships.

You read my mind

Hope we can see Jon make more use of the editor feature

Okay the end bit/joke got me really good, +2

You're afraid and you keep going, hoping that maybe beyond the door you can find something to break the spell, but you realize with terror that despite your efforts, you aren't changing back. You're still like this. You're still in that space. It occurs to you, in a wave of excited terror, that you might actually be stuck like this.

not dead! just a lazy and banged up author. hopefully will be back to updating soon!

I'll try to do that when there is a save point in the "game" Glad you are enjoying

Why not keep it going!

Wonderful! I like the addition of marching clothes, quote a funny visual, heh. And if you have the power to grant your own wishes, why not have some fun with it, hmm? ;)

I was brainstorming with chatGPT, and had it generate Jon's look at the end and it was so amazing I had to share.

The discussion after removing the pants was written by MrsCork in the original Jon's Wardrobe story

This is very fun! Well done! I look forward to more updates. I always like the story mechanism of 'reluctant master'

Oh man. Just decided to give this branch a thorough read through. I'm kinda upset that I did, because now, I NEED MORE!.

Starts and ends I do well, I stink at middles.

I really hope this story isn't dead, would love to see it continue

This is starting well!

Loving this storyline so far!

I can't wait to see more of this... Very well written so far!

Really enjoying this continuation.

Great to see a favourite branch revived in a new way. Look forward to seeing where you go with it.

I love MsCork's Jon's Wardrobe story, and I had an idea for a spinoff that really plays up grabbing things from other people and sort of mixing and matching aspects of them.

The story of cleaning Biff's room is actually a thing my Mom did with my Dad in High School! She describes it as sweet, my dad describes it as frustrating, and my Grandma was just happy his room was clean.

Maybe a little bit too meta, but when Jon saves the name of that save file should be te same as the chapter title (without the Gamer: part). But I really enjoy this branch and can't wait until Jon does something stupid (again) and makes a bigger change with his powers).

This will be interesting. Will each see just a physical/mental change in Karyn or will Jon see Karyn as a friend and Sarah see her as a girlfriend? And how will that affect the Sarah effect when she's close to Karyn?

I'm really excited that you added. You are welcome to add as much as you want, borrowing whatever you want from what I've written

Hey! I liked this addition. I hope you don't mind that I borrowed some of your version of Dumpster to make a Dumpster 2.0. If you do, I will delete my addition.

I know, just trying to figure out how I might add to this branch.

Well, this is Fiction Branches. Just make a different branch that does that.

They just didn't get a chance to experience being these versions of themselves before they hopped again. I would have giving them a little more time.

This is too sweet. You're going to give the audience cavities. Diabetes too if you keep this up!

Well, if you know me, you know that I like stories where the transformations spread around.

A second swap... interesting...

Since they are closer and Karyn seems to be switching between the two personalities. Is it going to result in it making her the best friend of both Jon and sarah with Jon even ending up as friends with sarah. With Karyn finally dating Jon. With Karyn having memories of both life's but also making the cheerleading side of her know about the stone and what's going on.