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Very fun! Well done!

I am looking forward to the slow torture this training program does. Specifically the nudges when it comes to sharing a bed. Firstly a husband and wife may sleep naked next to eachother... they may spoon.... heck eventually one morning they may have a little weekend lie-in morning sex.

Thanks, the length of each chapter mixed with my spare time makes it difficult for me to form any sort of regular schedule, but I’m updating as I can

I mean that in a good way btw, really interesting path

Wow Jon makes a lot of dumb wishes but I feel like that’s up there for dumbest, holy shit

I'm intending his full name to be Anthony Giles. But that's mostly because the other option, Rupert Stewart Head, doesn't roll off the tongue very well.

A school librarian named Mr. Giles? His first name wouldn't happen to be Rupert, would it?

So happy to see this branch brought back and especially because it's you who is writing this. This setup has nice potential. I loved seeing Karyn as a horny nerd teenager and Mickey as hot cheerleader Michelle, while Sarah was a dog. Their interactions with the other families will be very interesting too.

This is really fun! I can't wait to read more!

This is really fun! And I look forward to reading about some penalties!

This is very exciting!

Surely this won't result in a disaster somewhere down the line, right? /s

ok so far this seems ""harmless"" enough, will it be just a month full of different clothes? will penalaties include body TF? or MC?

Been waiting for this series to be brought back for a while. Thanks for doing it! You're a really good writer! I've been loving how you've been approaching this story. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Very ptomising, I really like life-swap stories where they maintain their bodies but everyone 'sees' them as someone else.

Very fun! More please!

So this is a kind of life swap, I am guessing?

There’s not that many paths here that does that, so it be cool to see another one.

This is pretty interesting, happy to see where you go with this.

Or maybe turn Karyn into a pervert

I feel like it will be a recurring theme of them not telling each others swaps.

I am enjoying this. I am slightly disappointed we didn't get to find out what the corrective measures are this chapter, but I'm sure we will soon!

This is a very fun start. I like stories where things like the nano-bots 'nudge' someone's behaviour and physical attributes instead of the class full transformation into a woman instantly etc. I like that people can resist a little bit etc.

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Probaly a change Karyn would hate like Karyn being very into shoes or that she likes goes to the salon with Sarah

That part is written, I just need to figure out another change that Sarah will do to Karyn and then I'll have another chapter for ya

A happy ending!? Where Jon stays Jon?

Guess it was about time someone wrote it. :)

Great series, been loving it, with a great ending?

When will you continue the story?

@GQCassie Okay, I get what you mean now. Thanks, that explanation made all the difference

@sget What I would argue is that from Karyn's perspective, because she is one of two people outside the awareness clause in Jon's wish, she doesn't view her relationship with Jon as having been disrupted, right? That's why she was waiting for him to show up for their date in the first place. And the copying has had some flexibility at times when the wording has enabled a grey area - sometimes extending beyond a limited scope - so what copied was the newness of their relationship with each other, and more the overwriting of the relationship that he had been in with Matt. But it's also like in the prop closet, where the copying gave Jon some space in being able to define what decisions he wants to make. It's not perfect but the outcome of Karyn making that statement wasn't going to be exactly clean, either. I just think the result there maybe isn't worth a deep dive into perfecting an outcome versus overwriting a previous copy.

@endless I don't think that would work, given the way the stone has been established in other storylines. But honestly, I've only got about another three chapters in total left here, so if you have ideas, it IS FictionBranches, feel free to branch off at any point and tell your own version!

@GQCassie well they could use the stone to to fix the page when they get a new baseline for Jon. Also are you on discord I wanted to DM you some other questions and ideas?

@GQCassie - I get the intent behind the phrasing, I guess I just don't understand how he can copy a relationship with Karyn off of Karyn. When he copied the relationship off of Kaitlyn, she was dating Matt at the time, and it made sense to me because Matt then treated Jon (presumably) how he would ordinarily treat Kaitlyn. In other words, he got a copy of Kaitlyn's half of an existing relationship. Is Karyn currently considered to be in a relationship right now? I imagined he'd be copying her single status off of her if anything.

In any case, I don't mean to nit-pick. I'm just trying to understand the mechanics.

@endless - she needs to be in the right mind to erase the items. But with the paper ripped, there's no way for them to clear off the past items anymore, thus creating a new baseline that Jon exists in.

@sget - that's Karyn trying to word it to overcome Jon suddenly having a dating history with someone else by overwriting that relationship he had, and trying to not to accidentally create a long dating history between her and Jon at the same time. And thank you!

@Sget I think it’s sort of in the same vein as the copy in “Skipping English Class”. The I need you to be able choose who you are one

"Jon, you need to have just started dating me today, and not be dating anyone else." Wait, how does that work? Karyn didn't start dating herself, how can she copy that to Jon? Love the story so far, by the way

Interesting changes to how the characters are approaching this

I know Karyn thought previously that she can’t be in the right mind until Jon is safe. But cant they just wait until Karyn calms down?

Hope its the same one i think of. While their posts are immune doesnt mean that they themselves are unable to be altered and if one of them causes a significant mental change or changes their name they would be in trouble

As of right now this is all I have written, but there is one flaw that I plan on utilizing in the next bit of the story when I have a chance to write it up. Now I just need to find time to write again.

I can already see some flaws with these rules and I wonder if they will be explored

Welcome back

Nice. Very eager to see this storyline play out

Nice seeing you back. The zoe linda retreat story ended being one of my favs

Will Sarah change Jon during her date with karyn or does she focus on her for the weekend?

A whole day or afternoon of Sarah having Karyn all to herself? Surely nothing could go wrong for Karyn :)
Ultimate revenge for Sarah would be to make Karyn atrracted to her and make it a date then after a few days make Jon aware

I'm glad you approved. It's one of the choices I'm making here that I'm a little worried about what people will think.

Oh interesting. I had taken the right mind part of the wish to mean that Karyn would snap out of any mental hijinks when she was looking at the list. Her not being able to modify things during a panic is fascinating.

You heard it here, folks: Violence is, in fact, sometimes the answer.

Cool choice that you made it so that from Jons perspective it was because of the wishing stone that these changes were made

There's something very appropriately absurd to me about all these stories being magic-driven, and the real answer all along was to just punch someone in the teeth.

When you think about it, we'd all have a lot fewer problems if people would just punch Sarah in the mouth a bit more.