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I hope this Karyn isnt as mean-spirited as sometimes some branches go, instead, for her to blanch when she finds out who did the wish and how it was worded, and try to instantly find a way to fix her real friend. bonus point if she wishes she remembers the reality pre-wish too.
Also that she keeps the stone out of john's reach in case she wishes something hasty

Loving this branch. Can't wait to see how Karyn gets affected as well.

So I realized as I was thinking about this chapter that I basically ignored the fact that Jon has long hair and that would be a significant part of his preparations for the party. So I sort of crammed it all into this chapter.

The idea would be the jock costume.

Or, whatever you want if you're writing the chapter. I wanted to have it set for remaining a couples costume, but loose enough that people could do whatever the heck they wanted with it.

Oh, the dramatic irony! It's making my heart ache.

Thankfully, Sarah doesn't know about the notebook. Yet. So for now, there's still a way out. For now, at least.

This is genuinely scary.

Poor Jon 😭 Karyn, please find out about what just hapoened, STAT!

So if Jon changes to a cheerleader would Karyn’s costume change to a jock or another cheerleader outfit to compliment?

how disgusting

I'm having so much trouble trying to picture what kind of human at what age and shape would have a voice that was over an octave lower than an adult woman, but also feet smaller than a women's size 5. Absolutely nothing about that makes any sense. Also, how did Brandon become two words?

Thanks to @maryPear/Tangello for helping me with some feedback and edits before I posted

I've said it before but Biff here really is the biggest Cinnamon roll here.

I don't have any plans for that. But I'm also sort of just orchestrating the transition to what is hopefully a fruitful situation. I don't have plans at the actual destination right now.

Hope this continues! You're a great writer who's not only revitalizing this gem of a thread, but also making it fun and unique. We're about to dive into the action and I can't wait to see where it goes! Hope to see more chapters soon!

Will we see him use the copying wish to intentionally gain something? Either to undo something or gain something he personally wants

Nice. Excited to see what Karyn’s plan is

At the moment, not much from his family. Just a cosmetic thing that I don't want to spoil, although I think it'll be obvious as it happens.

And Jon totally could ask for another outfit. I think this might be one of the most powerful magic powers that has been granted, other than straight reality control. Cassie proved that you can do quite a lot with the concept, if someone knows what's happening and they have the time to find the right people.

I'm trying to get a Halloween story spun up as quickly as I can, so I'm not planning on hanging around the school dealing with the cheerleader thing. More than this gag, at least.

Also he can just ask for Karyn’s outfit to override this one

Interesting direction. Do you have any plans of him copying anything from his family?

FYI, if you read these as I posted them, I used Tiffany in the last chapter forgtting that she had already been in the story. So I changed the name to Reagan.

This is really promising. I love altered perception changes where someone is still 'themselves' but everyone sees them as someone different. I will add you "shudder", to "shutter" would be to close a roller-door or something!

I can't wait to find out this penalty tomorrow!

Such a great chapter. I look forward to them all being gently nudged but also resisting on occasion. Hopefully they sometimes don't get nudged and just get corrective measures (which I am still a little unsure what those actually entail).

Let me also add, many family pets sleep in the bed of their owners in a non-sexual way. Hell, some people don't always find time to kick out the dog while making love.

A wonderful treat to see you working your stuff again on a new storyline when time permits it. Hope all has been well with you and here’s to seeing what you cook up next as this WLV storyline progresses.

Take care!

-Sje-

Hope this story is continued

Oh the Stanley cup… like a trophy for sports…

+2

Pregnet

Really fun! I like them reluctantly having to pretend to be a family pet!

Very fun! Well done!

I am looking forward to the slow torture this training program does. Specifically the nudges when it comes to sharing a bed. Firstly a husband and wife may sleep naked next to eachother... they may spoon.... heck eventually one morning they may have a little weekend lie-in morning sex.

Thanks, the length of each chapter mixed with my spare time makes it difficult for me to form any sort of regular schedule, but I’m updating as I can

I mean that in a good way btw, really interesting path

Wow Jon makes a lot of dumb wishes but I feel like that’s up there for dumbest, holy shit

I'm intending his full name to be Anthony Giles. But that's mostly because the other option, Rupert Stewart Head, doesn't roll off the tongue very well.

A school librarian named Mr. Giles? His first name wouldn't happen to be Rupert, would it?

So happy to see this branch brought back and especially because it's you who is writing this. This setup has nice potential. I loved seeing Karyn as a horny nerd teenager and Mickey as hot cheerleader Michelle, while Sarah was a dog. Their interactions with the other families will be very interesting too.

This is really fun! I can't wait to read more!

This is really fun! And I look forward to reading about some penalties!

This is very exciting!

Surely this won't result in a disaster somewhere down the line, right? /s

ok so far this seems ""harmless"" enough, will it be just a month full of different clothes? will penalaties include body TF? or MC?

Been waiting for this series to be brought back for a while. Thanks for doing it! You're a really good writer! I've been loving how you've been approaching this story. Can't wait to see what comes next!

Very ptomising, I really like life-swap stories where they maintain their bodies but everyone 'sees' them as someone else.

Very fun! More please!

So this is a kind of life swap, I am guessing?

There’s not that many paths here that does that, so it be cool to see another one.

This is pretty interesting, happy to see where you go with this.

Or maybe turn Karyn into a pervert

I feel like it will be a recurring theme of them not telling each others swaps.

I am enjoying this. I am slightly disappointed we didn't get to find out what the corrective measures are this chapter, but I'm sure we will soon!

This is a very fun start. I like stories where things like the nano-bots 'nudge' someone's behaviour and physical attributes instead of the class full transformation into a woman instantly etc. I like that people can resist a little bit etc.

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