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loving these changes

Very spicy set of chapters today! Linda and Zoe sure made Jay and Brandon had a night to remember with some mature ladies. Was hoping the next morning would be what I thought and wasn’t disappointed to find Brandi and Jayne looking to find some young men to please them lol. Eager to see how this next excursion goes with the changed dynamic of Zoey being the peppy one and Linda the less confident friend and gal pal. Excellent work Mr.J!

It's so hot to see not only Zoe and Linda transformed and ready to play with new boytoys but also how the previous events (Linda and Sierra meeting and the transformation of Rayne) are also part of the plot. I also like the fact that Linda and Zoe, eve if they are immersed in their new roles, are still aware of everything, including seeing Rayne and Alice as the girls they are instead of the frat bros.

That's interesting. They got naked, returned to the apartament and even after choosing new clothes they remained with the same role? Maybe they will only be able to revert to normal after having sex inside the apartment? That would be very clever and would add up to the plot.

Sierra taking on the role as a sort of tritagonist with Zoey and Linda on this day has certain mixed things up once more. With the mother & daughter now friends enjoying their time together with their beach escapades and some specialty drinks to unwind, looks like they found some extra fun have just arrived at nude beach. Great last few chapters, Mr.J! :-)

I’ve really enjoyed this series you have here and hope you will add more to it one day soon

Can’t wait to see where you take this!

Nothing wrong with a little self-indulgence from time to time :)

Loving the Cougar approach and it will be grear to see Zoe seducing "younger studs". Gosh, I really want to see them bring new people to their room and swapping their lives too until someone takes Linda and Zoe's original clothes. So hot

Its really clever. And I wonder if a bunch of delicious chapters someone they will bring to their room will leave with the original Linda and Zoe clothes, basically forcing Linda and Zoe to choose new clothes for a new life :)

I'm pretty sure this is also the first time I've actually used an image in all the time I've been on this site.

Yes, I know that most people on this site are here for boobies and transgender escapism, but this story's been itching at my brain and driving my inner Engineer crazy since I had the idea. Self-Indulgence ahoy!

So the original clothes are added to the closet? Does that mean another couple who comes in after them could have ick those outfits and become a mother with her daughter? Also i’m getting the hint that if you leave the place with those clothes, you keep that personality in life with you.

Wonderful frat night for Linda and Zoe. They both scored. Wonder how things will be in the morning for both of them and for the new girls. Excited to see what you have in mind fir the new set of clothes.

Perhaps a similar moment if Zoey can have a reflective surface to see how Alice sees her further fueling the lust she’s currently experiencing. If anything, a conversation later in the day with Z and Lin discussing how they ‘scored’ with their respective women will be quite a treat for us and eye opening for them.

Agreed with the sentiments regarding Writing.com. So frustrating how it to work with either as a reader or a writer. It still has some great content being posted by other friendly writers of the genre so I try to navigate it to support others works.

Hot, hot, hot!!! Wonder if Zoe will realize how much Alice looks like the valley girls that she despises in her real life and if it will only fuel her new dominant instincts.

Oh, Writing.com is really a wasted potential. Great stories and interactives, but a pain in the ass to deal with membership and free access.

Oh! I love how you managed to advance the plot in the middle of a hot sexy chapter. Sierra is keeping the boxers and asked Linda to came back tomorrow? Something is in motion here and I like it!

Glad you guys are enjoying this thread.

Vanessa - unfortunately I’m not in writing.com as much now as my membership expired and getting anything done on there without one is such a hassle

Oh my wow, gonna need a fan to cool off from these recent few chapters lol. Linda had quite the encounter with the sensual & assertive Sierra, Bruna hitting the on the head with their commentary. Eager to see how Zoey does with Alice as she hasn’t missed a beat with applying her own charisma to girl laying out in front of her invitingly. Great chapters, Mr.J!

Amazing! I love all your work, both here and in writing.com . Please continue with both! You’re so creative

OMG! You truly nailed it. Sierra is making Linda feel like a boytoy. Wonder how things will go with Zoe. It will be interesting if after all that bragging Linda gets dominated while Zoe exerts dominance.

Nice! A great choice of using F/F sex scenes in this new concept. It's girl on girl action, but both of them thinks it's F/M action. Hot.

Superb writing here. You managed to give them some mother-daughter time, showing glimpses of their real selves in a new context. Fantastic.

Once again, you've delicious use of images. It's funny to see Zoe gawk for girls that she would despise in her normal life:)

great start! looking forward to more of this!!

What started as some moments between ‘bros’ ends up being quite a nice wholesome moment for Zoey and Linda being able to have fun together for the first in quite a while I’d think. Wonder if Linda will find some proper threads to show off for her meetup or if the closet has other shenanigans in mind. Quite a fun few chapters, Mr.J!

I really hate my phones autocorrect sometimes XD

"Her chest hair was tied up in a professional bun."

I'm sure that was an editing glitch, but holy hell did the imagery give me a chuckle.

Also loved the twist and agree with Sje's observations. They appear to be embracing the changes faster this time and I am curious to see how Sierra will fit in this plot. Either way, really nice choice in making Linda and Zoe frat bros. A wonderful scenario, especially for me because I love ftm transformations and role reversals. Thanks for writing

What a twist! So the closet could be a potential prime suspect if it’s not the entire hotel going by Zoey’s sudden interaction. Also makes you wonder if certain outfits have more influence, being how Linda is full on ‘Bro Mode’ right away vs how the two were as the couple previously with some degree of control with awareness. Great chapter, Mr.J!

I actually had this short story already mostly written in my drafts folder as part of another branch I ended up never making, so it just needed a few tweaks for this.

Ah! I know how badly it can go wrong when name tags get it wrong :D, very interesting, I look forward to seeing more of this

Curious eyebrow raise

As soon as someone finds the motivation to write such a thing ig. You volunteering?

When does the stepsister show up to get stuck in the dryer?

But a good freak.
I love your writing.

Maybe this will make things a tad clearer about how the wish actually works, since people seem confused about that.

Theodore? I'm still trying to figure out the method behind the swaps, but I liked this.

Uninteresting yet has some curiosities that may speak opposite; Jenny gaining the effects of the wish that Karyn wished along with now guy Kevin and little brother Zachary has some wary potentials showing of this reality :-)

Awesome branch. This is really hitting a stride and I'm here for all the paces. Great writing!

Apologies to Theodore Guest, but I kinda already had something in mind for Jon's before-school activity in this branch.

Already in love with this idea, even without any other branches the idea is already just so good

Wonder if "Aunt Linda's " new clothes will help John to change into something else not a ballerina, but perhaps more girly (and hopefully, older)

Oh wow, didn’t even spot that one. The joys of writing on a phone with an overeager autocorrect

I'm pretty new with writing those kind of story on public sites so i'm open to any help or suggestions that could help the writing. Ideas come and go with me so i try to keep the scenarios open ended so others may write their own spin for things.

I hope you don’t change ‘A warm feeling shit through her’ because that is very funny lmao

Curious to see what will happen after they undress. Will they return to normal or stay trapped in their new personas? If they return to normal, they will be aware of the experience and afraid but also excited to try on new clothes? So much potential here. Loving it.

Was wondering if someone would ever update this branch