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So what are his or rather her powers as a kitsune?

Nice. Excellent chapter!

Believing in change for the better? On Christmas?!

Yeah me too.

Peak mofumofu!

Had some inspiration and free time before I head to Christmas dinner. Happy Holidays everyone!

I made this as an excuse to rewrite the intro to suit my needs (see the subsequent episode for an example), and to potentially branch out if anyone else is interested in contributing. :)

I was feeling hopeful today. Maybe it's the holiday spirit, or maybe it's me listening to Tame Impala on repeat as I wrote this. Anyways, let me know if the strikethrough text is annoying. I'm trying something a bit different by referencing the intro of the entire story and showing changes so people don't have to directly refer back to it, but I'm glad to delete those parts if they clutter the rest of the story. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! :)

Absolutely love the direction the story is taking, can't wait to see what the next choice is!

Clearly Mitch/Michelle has yet to learn any sort of real lesson from all of this.

Interesting choice to have Karyn and Sarah already dating. Also Happy Holidays

@Enjeubleu feels a bit jojo inspired especially with Killer Queen and Maiden Heaven. Could the other options still be Heroes aliases for maybe Karyn, Sarah or Zoe?

I'm taking a break from this for the next week or two for Christmas. Happy HoliDays to those for whom they are Holy Days, and Happy Days to those for whom they're just Days!

"I mean why risk pissing off my whales and hurting income... Guys are easy to get and they're basically disposable..." She thought letting out a sigh.
"He's hot enough that I'll make an exception for a man-let like him... I bet he's barely 5'8"

Some people are sexist pigs no matter whether they're male or female.

This is fun

@enjeubleu in that case I nominate Pretty Woman as her new title, or perhaps Black Magic Woman lol

@matisguy Nah it's gotta be something like Killer Queen or some other music reference—you know I gotta commit to the bit. And thanks for the thoughts everyone! Looks like we're leaning towards kitsune, but I got some ideas for other character tfs

1. I think it would be more annoying to be thought dumb.

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keep going!

low chance, but would love to see this thread continue

I guess option 1

I believe in foxgirl supremacy, so Foxfire for me.

Option 2.

Option 1

Honestly, it changes from branch to branch. Mikey tends to fluctuate between 8 and 12 years old, depending on who's writing. In my mind, he's 11 in this version of the story.

Was Mikey middle school, I always assumed to be elementary?

@Matisguy imagine if Sarah, Karyn or Zoe were also reincarnated to be Mistress Temptress

Also Maiden Heaven, but don’t mind if Tropical Storm gets picked

Do these have their own civilian identities? And is this in Jon’s world but with superheroes or a completely other world?

For some other ideas: A magical girl option, fighting evil with the power of cuteness and love would be fun!

I vote option 1

I would love to see the Kistune...

If you do Maiden Heaven you gotta make her archnemesis a Succubus-themed villain! How bout we call her Mistress Temptress?

I've been wanting to do something superhero-themed for a hot minute now. Drawing inspiration from Matisguy's project, let me know if any of the listed options look especially fun (or if you have your own ideas)

Option 2

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+2 for the phrase "pelvic plumbing permutations". Love me some clever alliteration.

Also I'm voting for indecision, I think that would lead to funny shenanigans if no one took June seriously.

Gotta go with 1

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Option 1

Let’s go with 1

+2 for the title and choice title

I guess 1.

Lol. Mr Matheson the Math teacher

@Matisguy ah ok. Now I’ve learned a new word so thank you

"You're really cute when you're angry" has got to be the most frustrating compliment I know, personally.

@Endless, From the Merriam-Webster Dictionary:

Blanch (intransitive verb form): To become white or pale (as from shock or fear). Often used figuratively to describe a reaction of shock or dismay that makes someone unwilling or reluctant to proceed.

I appreciate the vigilance, but I meant what I typed this time.

Also maybe minor spelling at the end. I think you meant “Jon blinked”

Nice. Would we maybe also see chapters without an option in the “main” path? Just to get to plot progressing a bit without a choice holding the pace up.

I had the idea for the episode here while writing the last one but I wanted to leave it open in case anyone had any different directions they wanted to take it

A nice surprise that you posted another on this part