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I really like these sort of 'soft mental alterations' where they are both very mentally aware who they are, and how strange this all is. And yet Karyn doesn't see it as odd peeing with the door open so she can keep an eye on Jon (just like a mother would do!) The de-sexualising of their relationship makes it all the more sexy!

Interesting bit open ended. Interested to see which direction you will take it

Interesting to see how this will differ from the rewrite

No, though it plays with similar themes. This one is a bit more grounded, I guess

Is this a remake/reboot of your “the rewrite” branch?

am really enjoying this and am excited to see where it will go!

An interesting idea!

Very very fun!

Very excited to see you back Belchest! Your stories on here are what brought me to this site and appreciate with it's different authors!

This is a really interesting idea!

"Whoa," Jon said. As he looked at himself in the bedroom mirror, but instead of seeing himself, However. -> I think he meant this parte here

When he looked down at himself, he saw himself dressed in Karyn’s clothes. He turned towards Karyn still confused and was about to ask her what was going on when she explained things.

Should read better now

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> "Whoa," Jon said. He looked at himself in the bedroom mirror, but instead of seeing himself, However. When he looked down at himself, he saw himself dressed in Karyn’s clothes.

DAMN YOU JOONNNN! You and your horny fantasies!

This is really good!

Fun and sexy!

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Another great addition! Can’t wait to see where this leads

Loving these additions, thanks for going with my suggestion, will be watching this branch with interest!

A small child hearing the party down stairs, dressed up as a 'fairy princess'. Tiffany dressed as a Football Player and Moose as a cheerleader or due to a bet dressed as sexy teacher.

Biff and Sarah as a role reversed Bride and Groom?

Love Paula’s suggestion too!

Great work, can’t wait to see where you take it, and if you have any other transformations in store

Here’s a suggestion. Jay went to the party in his mothers clothes, but didnt know she was there to chaperone. She went as a cheerleader as she promised the parents she would chaperone. She saw Jay drinking in one of her suits. An expensive suit. She dragged him home and grounded him for wearing her suit. Come next morning, they wake up and Jay is acting like his mom, becoming her in mind and personality while his mom(dont know her name. Use mine) is acting like a teenage cheerleader who was busted the night before for drinking at the party.

Running out of steam a bit here. Could explore some other party goers and their costumes.
Any suggestions would be welcome.

I was thinking something else, but I want to see where you take this.

Love the addition

If Zoe isn’t attending the party would she also be oblivious to the changes?

The return! Love it already, great foundation, can't wait to see how this plays out!

Hope you revisit this branch in the future

Found this old branch and thought it'd be fun to add to it, feel free to suggest gifts and changes.

I almost don't want to give my thoughts, because what I love about this branch is that I can never predict what's going to happen next and I don't want to influence you. But I have a feeling that these most recent age changes have generated some knock-on effects that neither Donaldson girl is anticipating.

I love the dynamics between Joanna, Zoe, and Karyn in these last chapters and the little twist with the aging there. Really appreciate the quick updates too and excited to see what's next!

I do have some stuff squirreled away, was working on this line for so long I just wanted to get some other branches done, but I do plan on revisiting this

Love the rollback idea, it's a shame there isn't any Yuki stuff, was curious what was happening there.

Love this route, would be great if it was continued at some point!

No offense to @Gooose. I had an idea and tweaked a few things in this chapter to set up something.

Let me guess, they're turning into Hera, Aphrodite and Athena, right? The three Greek goddesses who claimed the Golden Apple of Discord and caused the Trojan War

I would love for this to continue, it is really interesting and unique, I would also like for the squabbling pair to grow up a bit and make peace, but I guess that is part of the story, so let's see where it goes?

Thanks, I might have something in the works. Writing reverse-gender sex scenes was not a talent I’d expected to have, but glad you like them

I noticed that Zoe already started calling her mom Linda and not mom, even in her "normal" self. That was great. Also, I am sensing that this young Linda can be a closeted lesbian. Wonder how this scenario will develop. :)

That was nice. Wonder if Bro-Alice will hook up with one of the new cougars and have the reversed gender sex experience that you write really well

loving these changes

Very spicy set of chapters today! Linda and Zoe sure made Jay and Brandon had a night to remember with some mature ladies. Was hoping the next morning would be what I thought and wasn’t disappointed to find Brandi and Jayne looking to find some young men to please them lol. Eager to see how this next excursion goes with the changed dynamic of Zoey being the peppy one and Linda the less confident friend and gal pal. Excellent work Mr.J!

It's so hot to see not only Zoe and Linda transformed and ready to play with new boytoys but also how the previous events (Linda and Sierra meeting and the transformation of Rayne) are also part of the plot. I also like the fact that Linda and Zoe, eve if they are immersed in their new roles, are still aware of everything, including seeing Rayne and Alice as the girls they are instead of the frat bros.

That's interesting. They got naked, returned to the apartament and even after choosing new clothes they remained with the same role? Maybe they will only be able to revert to normal after having sex inside the apartment? That would be very clever and would add up to the plot.

Sierra taking on the role as a sort of tritagonist with Zoey and Linda on this day has certain mixed things up once more. With the mother & daughter now friends enjoying their time together with their beach escapades and some specialty drinks to unwind, looks like they found some extra fun have just arrived at nude beach. Great last few chapters, Mr.J! :-)

I’ve really enjoyed this series you have here and hope you will add more to it one day soon

Can’t wait to see where you take this!

Nothing wrong with a little self-indulgence from time to time :)

Loving the Cougar approach and it will be grear to see Zoe seducing "younger studs". Gosh, I really want to see them bring new people to their room and swapping their lives too until someone takes Linda and Zoe's original clothes. So hot