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Amusing

Interesting, curious what might happen next.

These episides are fantastic! I'd love to see this story continued someday. I'm wondering what happened to the stone and what Karyn and Zoe are like in this life, but to be honest, it's also a bit refreshing that you haven't focused on those points.

That is such a fun twist for a Little House on the prairie

I really enjoyed this. This is the type of Life swap imagery that is so hard to pull off. And you made it so evocative. Well done.

Listen, I don't take money for this. I wrote this branch out of my heart and imagination. Maybe we could start a movement to somehow put me back in the narrator spot for this story. I don't want to see Lydia Warren's take on this story, I wanted to do something revelatory with the onsen and MTI. Now the scale is cosmic! How will the audience care about subterfuge and loyalty in a small town if it's interstellar in scope? She's rebel moon'd us!

I'm NOT bitter, I'm NOT jealous. This is about ethics in gaming. This is about corporate replacement! Other word combinations to get back in! Fie!

I was doing way better, maybe she went to the academy and has a better resume, but... okay, but doesn't narrating the previous installments of this branch count towards anything? What else am I supposed to do with my evening except narrate? And don't think for a moment I'm being class conscious about unemployment here, this is a direct absurdity! Has anyone ever seen this happen to anyone before?

Oh, come on!

Is this how SG/G works?

https://mrdylitcirclestories.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/in-a-grove.pdf

Hm...

To my recollection, Super Grover can fly. Are you telling me that Grover could fly?

This is just... I'm not sure I have energy to comprehend this right now. Is it like Super Mario and that feather cape?

@Ez Super Grover is the alter-ego of Grover. They're the same monster, just one has a costume :)

If you happen to be interested, here's a read-aloud video of the book from this chapter: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_JVK0-4HQTY

Wait is Grover supposed to be sort of like Super Grover or is that a different monster?

I like the way this story is going.

Wondering if it’s current wardrobe or that if Karyn gets a new piece of clothing Jon would get a copy of that in his wardrobe

Honestly, for whatever it's worth, I prefer and have preferred the direction you've gone so far. I think it's quite cleverly executed and making them antagonistic would kinda undercut what you're doing so far.

Then again, you're better at this than I, and I always give experts room to run.

I hadn't even thought of letting Jon and Karyn be actively antagonistic towards Sarah, more just remaining as her puppets. But you're right, there's room for both. I might be re-thinking my next chapter.

I can see them making a wish on Sarah only for Sarah to turn it around on them

@Matisguy im curious. How much have you planned out for this branch?

Excited for the next part

Really enjoy your writing, hope you are doing well in the new year. Can't wait for more of this or any of your other branches!

Hope you continue this one

Maybe... This episode was the end of "part 2" of this story. I have notes written up for part 3, but I only have an episode or two currently written up (those episodes are subject to change). Meg does appear in my notes, but whether or not she makes it back into the story is yet to be seen. It will really depend on how things go when I start writing up part 3.

Hope you keep writing for this branch. Has been interesting so far

Will we see more of Meg?

A bit sad that you quit, you are one of my favorite writers on here

So what are his or rather her powers as a kitsune?

Nice. Excellent chapter!

Believing in change for the better? On Christmas?!

Yeah me too.

Peak mofumofu!

Had some inspiration and free time before I head to Christmas dinner. Happy Holidays everyone!

I made this as an excuse to rewrite the intro to suit my needs (see the subsequent episode for an example), and to potentially branch out if anyone else is interested in contributing. :)

I was feeling hopeful today. Maybe it's the holiday spirit, or maybe it's me listening to Tame Impala on repeat as I wrote this. Anyways, let me know if the strikethrough text is annoying. I'm trying something a bit different by referencing the intro of the entire story and showing changes so people don't have to directly refer back to it, but I'm glad to delete those parts if they clutter the rest of the story. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! :)

Absolutely love the direction the story is taking, can't wait to see what the next choice is!

Clearly Mitch/Michelle has yet to learn any sort of real lesson from all of this.

Interesting choice to have Karyn and Sarah already dating. Also Happy Holidays

@Enjeubleu feels a bit jojo inspired especially with Killer Queen and Maiden Heaven. Could the other options still be Heroes aliases for maybe Karyn, Sarah or Zoe?

I'm taking a break from this for the next week or two for Christmas. Happy HoliDays to those for whom they are Holy Days, and Happy Days to those for whom they're just Days!

"I mean why risk pissing off my whales and hurting income... Guys are easy to get and they're basically disposable..." She thought letting out a sigh.
"He's hot enough that I'll make an exception for a man-let like him... I bet he's barely 5'8"

Some people are sexist pigs no matter whether they're male or female.

This is fun

@enjeubleu in that case I nominate Pretty Woman as her new title, or perhaps Black Magic Woman lol

@matisguy Nah it's gotta be something like Killer Queen or some other music reference—you know I gotta commit to the bit. And thanks for the thoughts everyone! Looks like we're leaning towards kitsune, but I got some ideas for other character tfs

1. I think it would be more annoying to be thought dumb.

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keep going!

low chance, but would love to see this thread continue

I guess option 1

I believe in foxgirl supremacy, so Foxfire for me.

Option 2.

Option 1