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I want to write a good mix of both physical and non physical swaps. That said, most of the swaps I have in mind right now are non physical

That's a fun premise. I'll have to see if I have something fun to contribute

I'll get back to the regularly scheduled programming, just wanted to put this down while I had it kicking around.

Protect the cinnamon roll! Back off Jon! Let Karyn-Biff enjoy their new hair care obsession, without your heavy wish-handed interference! 😤

Lol. Biff has somehow turned into an incredibly sweet cinnamon roll.

This is actually a gently neat story.

Sget will you lean more towards physical swaps or non physical swaps?

High praise. For what it's worth, an old story of yours indirectly but traceably influenced my Kamiéra story.

I am really excited to see this continue

It occurs to me only after posting this that I was probably indirectly inspired by AnonyMouse's recent branch. I'm not sure where this particular story is going yet, though. I just had this scene in my head and I wanted to write it. We'll see where it goes.

I truly love this storyline. The very fine balance between things being crazy and also 'normal' to these people at the same time!

Thanks that clarifies it a bit. Hoping to see the next one soon

Ah, sorry if I didn't make it clear enough. I was meaning to add a list of swaps since there's a lot of moving parts, so here it is. If it's still confusing, let me know.

Swaps so far:
--Path 3: The Chop Shop--
Ashley/Athletic Stranger: Lower Halves (No one aware)
--Path 4: The Party Girl Penis--
Ashley/Jim: Lower Halves + Clothes (Jim aware)
Ashley/Julie: Lower Halves + Clothes (No one aware)
--Path 5: Career Fair--
Julie/Jim: Underwear (No one aware)
Julie/Jim: Occupations (No one aware)
Julie/Jim: Underwear (Julie aware)
Julie/Jim: Underwear (Julie aware)

So currently, our cast looks something like this:

Jim has a stranger's male lower half with Ashley's legwear/shoes, but his own boxers. He believes everything from the waist down is Ashley's. He has Julie's occupation and bra, which he thinks is normal.
Julie has Jim's lower half, legwear, shoes, and occupation. She has Ashley's panties, but no bra. She thinks she's 100% normal.
Ashley has Julie's lower half, legwear, and shoes, and thinks she's normal. Since Jim was not privy to this swap, he thinks this lower half was his originally.

When they swapped lower halves did they swap their wardrobe associated with the lower halves or just the clothes they were wearing at that moment?

Hmm vote 5 colorful hair

colorful rebel

I quite literally cannot match that, and not for want of trying.

Number 3, black.

Black

Very creative changes for this branches usual one track mind... 👀

Good call. Felt like the last was a bit much on each category.
My vote is brown hair, since it seems to match best with the previous choices. Gotta stick to the theme.

I rewrote this because I felt like there was to much baggage with each option on the first branch of this. This is hopefully more balanced.

I might rewrite this to be much simpler. It's overblown; too much is happening in one branch. We'll see.

Take me out, to Karyn Black
Tell 'em I ain't coming back

This is a really fun chapter! Well done!

What an incredible dream. Gives a new meaning to a wet-dream!

Very excited to see you back Belchest! I would say as it's been such a long break it may help to have a sort of 'recap' of the changes especially for the side characters like Biff and Sarah as it's hard to remember what's actually happened to them (short of re-reading the whole thing which I ended up doing)

Definitely not for all future swaps. I want to have a good variety in awareness for this branch - some only Jim is aware of, some only Julie is aware of. I'd like to see it get more complicated as I introduce more characters, and hopefully reach a place where everyone's memory of the original, default reality is different. I don't have anything set in stone yet though, so depends on where the story takes me.

Interesting so far, are you keeping both unaware for the rest of the swaps ?

This has been an incredible ride and I'm embarrassed to not have seen your writing as much before! Really love the themeing, pacing and the way it's being laid out and how it seems to be more expansive then the initial TF. Do you write elsewhere? I'm digging through your library here, but I'd love to read more or even chat about your process.

For right now, let's just say I enjoy writing the more contained Kamiéra story, but I also like exploring more expansive themes and getting a better handle on them.

I can't wait to learn more about what's going on, and how these mechanics work. There's no need to rush, though. This slow reveal is really good.

Does anyone have an update on Dogmann and his writing.com archives? I know he had "Roommate Trait Swapping," "A Life Changed Forever," and "The Swap for Life" uploaded to bearchive and he has "Sex Game" and "Switch Stone" uploaded here, but I was under the impression he had a lot more than those five interactives archived. Does anyone know whether he stopped due to burn out or if he continued on another site?

Love that your redoing this story. Can't wait to read more.

Loving this direction. Look forward to seeing what happens next.

:eyes:

Hmmmm

Option 3 for me.

4 Redhead, i think he/she would do that in hopes of being able to stop people intentionally making him... well her angry

Took me forever to get here, though.

Next part is gonna be at least as long unless I get to cutting.

5

This chapter is very special.

What's the wish?

Nice

Peak

Interesting. I probably would go 1. However if it were to be consistent June would either pick 2,4 or 5 imo

Matisguy hasn't updated this in a while but I really liked what they did here. I dunno if I will continue this or they or someone else will but feel free to vote. I will probably write the immediate aftermath. I hope this is a worthy continuation.

i think john/julia/jules will eventually make a hasty wish to deal better with the emotions or whatever, further pulling her in her role

seems like intelligence dropped a bit from before, the wish making sure she is only good at what she wished for