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Great bit of writing! Love shorty Jon and can't wait to see how he fumbles his revenge. Really excited to have another talented storyteller around!

:) my first post on this site! I hope you enjoy :D

Awesome!
Let's hope for Johns sake his duties aren't too girly and that at least some of the suitors are girls...
Excited to see where this goes

Been a little bit since I've touched this one

If Karyn gets the stone, can she keep herself from wishing Sarah into her girlfriend?

Jon gets the one wish willow lol

oh my goodness ekempo, i just came to check if there was a new chapter yet. Thank you for the response!

These past 2 days have been going on for a really long time. I'm amazed you're keeping track of what's happened. It's so confusing for me, but really fucking hot!

I had been hoping there would have been some residuals left where Sarah was at least attracted to Karyn, if not in full girlfriend mode and Biff would get over his anger at Jon, and start treating him as a friend with possibilities.

Hope for good news and good luck in the future thank you for stories

And in no way is Biff being a cinnamon roll a bad thing here. I kinda love the direction this is heading!

I've said it before, but this paths Biff is really a cinnamon roll.

As someone who's faced that existential dread and tried to do ANYTHING during it you have my highest respect for trying to keep up with writing while doing so.
I was unable to, and found that the only solace I could find was getting out of the house and being with other people.
Whatever you need to do to find a little peace of mind, do so. You're an amazing author, I love when a story you write updates, I find your ideas and paths engaging and intriguing, but none of that is more important than your mental and physical health.
Wishing you the best of luck through what sounds like a harrowing time.

Hope everything come out fine. Here's wishing you all kind of good luck.

Are we ever going to cut to our missing character?

The subtle and shifting juxtaposition -- and the layers left behind each time -- is great. Solid work -- it's hard to stop reading once one starts, and the urge to go back and re-read to make sure nothing was missed is as strong.

Seriously, this is wonderful and intensely clever.

Oh boy! What an unambiguous and well-worded wish we have here that surely won't lead to any serious or unexpected consequences later in this branch! I love chapters that display as much cleverness as this one!

Lol, I wonder if we'll ever hear the original wish and see how Jon f*ed up.

Super fun. Always love wardrobe shenanigans

Thanks!! I need to set aside some time to keep diving through this. I really liked the Wish Editor concept, and figured a lot of delightful mayhem could fall on Jon & Karyn with this.

Really fucking good. Can't wait to read more.

@Nora Lua
Me: what are you talking about?
...!!!
Oh, hoh, very clever.

+2 lol

I can’t believe Karyn met famed fictionbranch’s moderator The Guest!!!

Wow! One of the hottest chapters in the history of this site! I love how you are nailing it with Karyn FtM transformation, with her tomboyish nature enjoying Biffs jock nature and her old feelings toward Sarah being channeled into sexual desire and submission. That works really well because you are also writing a very nice and sexual version of Sarah here. Thanks for writing.

I want to write a good mix of both physical and non physical swaps. That said, most of the swaps I have in mind right now are non physical

That's a fun premise. I'll have to see if I have something fun to contribute

I'll get back to the regularly scheduled programming, just wanted to put this down while I had it kicking around.

Protect the cinnamon roll! Back off Jon! Let Karyn-Biff enjoy their new hair care obsession, without your heavy wish-handed interference! 😤

Lol. Biff has somehow turned into an incredibly sweet cinnamon roll.

This is actually a gently neat story.

Sget will you lean more towards physical swaps or non physical swaps?

High praise. For what it's worth, an old story of yours indirectly but traceably influenced my Kamiéra story.

I am really excited to see this continue

It occurs to me only after posting this that I was probably indirectly inspired by AnonyMouse's recent branch. I'm not sure where this particular story is going yet, though. I just had this scene in my head and I wanted to write it. We'll see where it goes.

I truly love this storyline. The very fine balance between things being crazy and also 'normal' to these people at the same time!

Thanks that clarifies it a bit. Hoping to see the next one soon

Ah, sorry if I didn't make it clear enough. I was meaning to add a list of swaps since there's a lot of moving parts, so here it is. If it's still confusing, let me know.

Swaps so far:
--Path 3: The Chop Shop--
Ashley/Athletic Stranger: Lower Halves (No one aware)
--Path 4: The Party Girl Penis--
Ashley/Jim: Lower Halves + Clothes (Jim aware)
Ashley/Julie: Lower Halves + Clothes (No one aware)
--Path 5: Career Fair--
Julie/Jim: Underwear (No one aware)
Julie/Jim: Occupations (No one aware)
Julie/Jim: Underwear (Julie aware)
Julie/Jim: Underwear (Julie aware)

So currently, our cast looks something like this:

Jim has a stranger's male lower half with Ashley's legwear/shoes, but his own boxers. He believes everything from the waist down is Ashley's. He has Julie's occupation and bra, which he thinks is normal.
Julie has Jim's lower half, legwear, shoes, and occupation. She has Ashley's panties, but no bra. She thinks she's 100% normal.
Ashley has Julie's lower half, legwear, and shoes, and thinks she's normal. Since Jim was not privy to this swap, he thinks this lower half was his originally.

When they swapped lower halves did they swap their wardrobe associated with the lower halves or just the clothes they were wearing at that moment?

Hmm vote 5 colorful hair

colorful rebel

I quite literally cannot match that, and not for want of trying.

Number 3, black.

Black

Very creative changes for this branches usual one track mind... 👀

Good call. Felt like the last was a bit much on each category.
My vote is brown hair, since it seems to match best with the previous choices. Gotta stick to the theme.

I rewrote this because I felt like there was to much baggage with each option on the first branch of this. This is hopefully more balanced.

I might rewrite this to be much simpler. It's overblown; too much is happening in one branch. We'll see.

Take me out, to Karyn Black
Tell 'em I ain't coming back

This is a really fun chapter! Well done!

What an incredible dream. Gives a new meaning to a wet-dream!