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+2 for the phrase "pelvic plumbing permutations". Love me some clever alliteration.

Also I'm voting for indecision, I think that would lead to funny shenanigans if no one took June seriously.

Gotta go with 1

2

Option 1

Let’s go with 1

+2 for the title and choice title

I guess 1.

Lol. Mr Matheson the Math teacher

@Matisguy ah ok. Now I’ve learned a new word so thank you

"You're really cute when you're angry" has got to be the most frustrating compliment I know, personally.

@Endless, From the Merriam-Webster Dictionary:

Blanch (intransitive verb form): To become white or pale (as from shock or fear). Often used figuratively to describe a reaction of shock or dismay that makes someone unwilling or reluctant to proceed.

I appreciate the vigilance, but I meant what I typed this time.

Also maybe minor spelling at the end. I think you meant “Jon blinked”

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Matisguy well what do you think I should say to that? Kiss her boots? I could have replied with nothing but the Mr. Garrison "retard alert" meme or something. I'm not the one who fired the first shots. Now, in my opinion, any day I trigger a feminazitard is a day I did something right. But I didn't even do anything here to earn it. There isn't even anything here that deserves the criticism I got. She just has such a huge persecution complex, that she sees something neutral as misogynistic. I feel like maybe I should write some stuff that actually is misogynistic, if I'm going to be called out on it anyway. But I settled for writing a "be careful what you wish for" chapter interrupting what was doubtless a hate fantasy against males written by a victim complex female just like her. There's no shortage of them to be found. It's not really something I like to read or write, but you have to send a message to these 'people', that no you will NOT kiss their boots. Never apologize, never back down, only double down and call them on their BS.

Nice. Would we maybe also see chapters without an option in the “main” path? Just to get to plot progressing a bit without a choice holding the pace up.

I had the idea for the episode here while writing the last one but I wanted to leave it open in case anyone had any different directions they wanted to take it

A nice surprise that you posted another on this part

Option 2. Hopefully Jon still stays generic when changed into a girl so it leaves room for more options in the future. Btw What do you think of this as a future choice? Option 1 Have big natural tits 2 cup sizes bigger then Sarah that women can’t help but stare at. Option 2 Have a bubble butt bigger then Zoe that women love to slap. Indecision: you gain neither but you gain intense breast and butt envy

Option 2!

@Endless Ah, so just what I expected. ;)

@LadyViolence Don't let that discourage you! Some of my personal favorite TSF was written by non-native English Speakers, and not necessarily fluent ones. In my opinion it actually adds an esoteric sort of charm, seeing someone writing something they're excited about despite the difficulties in translation; and at any rate, you seem to be doing fine from what I can see!

Option 1

Thank you, Matisguy. It was very kind of you to indulge me. You write really well, and thanks again for satisfying my curiosity! Unfortunately, since I'm not a native speaker, I use a translator, and writing with an English translator isn't ideal for someone who speaks English well and reads what I write, otherwise I would have tried to write something myself. Anyway, thanks again.

2

@Perri Since everyone is unaware of the changes I wonder if they will treat Jon still as a regular guy just one wearing girly outfits

Option 1 because I think it has great potential for Jon's mom and sister to be helping him out so to speak.

At the same time I would love the contrast of Jon being the tomboy of the family, but still. Option 1.

@Zelo well not per se missed. But Karyn can just swap anything and not tell Jon/“Zoe” about it and he would just remain unaware of it. Which leaves Karyn the choice of a lot of mischief

Hmm, I want Option 2, but don't feel that John would pick it at this point in the story.

So Option 2, but only if it's a miss click. As I feel him willingly choosing Option 2 feels a bit premature.

Option 2

Option 2

Option 1

Wrote this at @Ladyviolence's suggestion. To be clear I don't wanna make this a regular thing, but it should be kept in mind there's nothing stopping you from writing a branch of your own if you don't like the winner of the vote! This and the next episode are stubs for the what if where things went differently.

I wonder if "Zoe" missed anything when giving his powers to Karyn... 🤔 But right now I can't notice anything. We shall see. Looking forward to more chapters!

Also wow "Zoe"/Jon, how selfish of you to "steal" that girl's bike. :P

Option 1

Probably not a good solution but a solution for the last two games would be to just make himself aro/ace

@Matisguy That’s fair. Three questions before I cast my vote. First is he straight or lesbian if option 2 is picked? Two is he still called Jon after option 2? Three with option 1 does everyone still know that he is male while presenting as female(or femboy)?

Option 2

@Endless At first I figured making him a girly girl who has to dress like one would be the appropriate worst or both worlds option, but then I realized nobody would vote for anything but that lol. Making something that's punishing for both Jon and the readers isn't as easy as it seems! Besides, why delay the inevitable?

Option 1

Option 2

Ngl this and the previous indecision option have been pretty meh/lackluster up until this point. Probably would have made it more of a difficult choice if you made it so he had to go in his underpants to school for the rest of his life or something like that. Cause this indecision seems more so to be a one time thing then a permanent choice that he is stuck with for the rest of his life

Well, damn. The formatting on the Flash! parts were working in the preview, anyway. Not sure why they stopped working when I submitted.

Okay, that was kinda funny. I see the rock has a sense of humor. :)

Be careful what you wish for. If you swap everything, you might end up in roughly the same situation, if not worse.

Option 1. (@Matisguy Since the second option will probably win, can I ask you a favor and do option 1 as well? I’m too curious, and I’d be sorry to end up with the other options, even though I respect other people’s opinions. Please...)

I'm gonna go with Option 2 here, Steve.

Option 1

Option 2.

Why in the goddamn would Jon ever pick 1. That's guaranteed to ruin his current relationship with Karyn and make Sarah into a bigger problem.

Option 1

This chapter is dedicated to the memory of StellaBones, RIP StellaBones, destroyed in the comments by me.

Option 2.
Other seems exhausting.

Option 1

I choose option 2. I agree with Perri. And having considered every possible reason it would be the choice Jon would make I believe. Well aside from the indecision