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This was the continuation of the apparent tradition of writing episodes on an aeroplane.

Felt like posting on old threads for no particular reason

Ah-heh, I thought this sounded vaguely familiar :-p

Yes, this is heavily inspired by Mrs. Cork's brilliant recent Conservation of Blonde Energy branch. Go read it! It's not stealing if I cite my sources, right?

"If he doesn’t see you for what you are walk away. Was her Mom would say about men especially since her dad had left them a few years back."

I'm glad her dad learned that lesson and saved himself from a woman who "didn't see him for what he is".

Hope you can write an alt version where Jon answers an ironic well yeah to karyn last q and it is taken as a yes thus next chapter would be more like a bimbo

Really enjoyed the prose for this one, felt really fun to read!

Thank you to everyone who has been following along. At some point I may come back to this and write some more, but for now this is the end.

With a name like that, her backstory must include being European nobility and a future as a crime fighting Amazon princess :D.

D’aww, thanks a bunch! I’m having a lot fun with these characters

Preach! I know how it goes. But this was definitely worth waiting for! Love Linda's whole attitude and vibe and can't wait to see what goal the king is working towards. Awesome as always!

Royal Mistake offers a pretty good image of how busy my life is. You get these timestamps whenever I have time to breathe

Wonder if Jon would go to the same school run into the other Jon, and Karyn etc.

Another fantastic addition!

Thanks, I spent quite a while trying to find matching images. Glad it paid off!

Did she call Zoe Mrs and Linda Ms? Or is it just fast paced?

Hot! Hot! Hot! I know it's probably not your favorite kind of scene, but would be awesome to see the transformed guys get into action in their new roles with some of the former girls transformed into guys or even other regular guys (maybe the likes of Biff or Seteve Farber?). Lot's of potential in seeing a former frat guy acting like a milf or teenage slut and seducing other straight and even homophobic guys to sexual activities. Bonus points if they got some of those guys to "lick their pussies" ;)

That was a nice twist. They will be trapped in the penthouse and will experiment more with the clothes. Since they are trapped with each other, I guess more sex between them will be on the books, and the fact that Zoe is subtly taking control in most of the dominant actions (getting the phone call, leading the action) can lead to a permanent swap of roles and anddynamics in their relationship from now on. Excited to see what you have in mind for them.

Hmmm.... I guess the plot is also getting deeper. Zoe has already been calling her mother Linda and most like don't see her as her mother in the traditional sense anymore. However, that blank out moment is hinting us that those experiences are somehow twisting her minds in a more permanent way.

Oh yes! I love storylines where actions have consequences and the subplots return to the main story somehow. Seeing the former four guys end up in a mother/daugther dynamic (just like Linda and Zoe) is really nice and I wonder if some of the former girls will also return to the plot and getinto this mix again.

Gosh, that sequence alternating the real Linda and her perceived image of the hot teenage body was one of the hottest things I've seem in this site. It worked amagzingly well with the flow of this chapter :)

Loving this direction

What an interesting and original idea, I do hope this gets continued beyond the point it is at with the next branching off point

This is the leaf on the branch that I don't actually expect to nurture into a full branch of its own, but it's here for Possibility's Sake.

This is where I'm stopping for now. I have a lot more planned, though! I just need more time and more energy.

Everyone knows that legal arbitration and enforcement is one of a mother's most important responsibilities, right? You don't see a lot of it in the horny MILF stories, though; can't imagine why.

Also, I have decided to resolve the age-old "Singular/Plural They" grammatical dilemma by writing a story where "They/Them" is both singular and plural.

Headmates have been kinda an elephant in the room on this site for a while, so here's a branch where they're given direct focus.

A new story root inspired by an interesting new friend of mine.

Can’t wait to see what transformation you have planned for them

Zoey certainly wasted no time in assuring Linda would get her girl’s V card while guiding Lin to return the favor in a mutual fashion. Very sensual way to get their day started; great chapter Mr. J and welcome back! Hope all is well with you, take care :-)

-Sje-

This is such a fun idea. I like the mechanic that even though he has this gorgeous body, he is hung better than most guys and for some reason women throw themselves at him!

Wondering where Jon would live if she can’t live in her old home. Also wondering which skills and knowledge were downloaded into that body

Thank you for the comment. Needed that!

This is fantastic! I hope this nightmare can continue!

Curious to see what that dream body looks like

Clearly this episode is in an alternate universe from the first episode, since in the first episode, Karyn DID make a wish, and it worked. Though I think it could be made clearer so as not to confuse readers who are wondering about how this episode's premise contradicts the last third of the first episode.

i sure miss seeing updates to this one, it was a great story

Disturbingly wholesome.

I really like these sort of 'soft mental alterations' where they are both very mentally aware who they are, and how strange this all is. And yet Karyn doesn't see it as odd peeing with the door open so she can keep an eye on Jon (just like a mother would do!) The de-sexualising of their relationship makes it all the more sexy!

Interesting bit open ended. Interested to see which direction you will take it

Interesting to see how this will differ from the rewrite

No, though it plays with similar themes. This one is a bit more grounded, I guess

Is this a remake/reboot of your “the rewrite” branch?

am really enjoying this and am excited to see where it will go!

An interesting idea!

Very very fun!

Very excited to see you back Belchest! Your stories on here are what brought me to this site and appreciate with it's different authors!

This is a really interesting idea!

"Whoa," Jon said. As he looked at himself in the bedroom mirror, but instead of seeing himself, However. -> I think he meant this parte here

When he looked down at himself, he saw himself dressed in Karyn’s clothes. He turned towards Karyn still confused and was about to ask her what was going on when she explained things.