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You need to apply better proofreading to this, it's sometimes hard to understand what you are trying to say.

wonder if after the sex session jon is more like tiffany personality wise

Another storyline from Cyoc I did slightly rewritten.

It's the story "Abandoned" (https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/41065).

added by LeonTheTiger to CYOC 14 years ago

I made this on CYOC

If I had a musical budget, I'd probably ask for this to be the theme to my cool-ass Bond-esque intro-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d1_7kpjHwdE

What do you mean what's my budget? What's your budget? How about I budget you?

Does anyone remember what the original story the author was referencing?

Interesting choice, it doesn't fit in with the parameters I set out, but I'm interested to see where this goes, maybe Mikey and Jon will get older and switch genders? Maybe this is a mutation of the original disease, it's a bit odd as they are not Sexy Sisters, still, you do you. :D

Comodo, I mentioned in the parent episode that the changes are mostly Physical, nurture based personality does not transfer over, now, it is possible that Jon might pick up on Sarah's confidence, poise and ambition, assuming these are part of her nature, interesting questions though.

This episode feels like the conclusion of one of those sci-fi/fantasy/horror anthology shows where the main character's deeds come back to bite them. All that's missing is a Rod Serling-esque narrator to summarize things.

Looking back on this now, I regret adding something about a sinister injection disguised as a vaccine shortly before a global pandemic.

Nice. Interesting to see which direction this goes

This needs to be continued! Such a good branch.

Hope you continue this branch

Will Athena be turned into Jon’s girlfriend/princess? I hope so at least

This is fucking awesome. Queen Consort Karyn.

I keep on thinking a lot about lifesmainantagonist comment on conflict since it was so viciously wrong to me that it compelled me to really think why I think it’s wrong. Especially since on the surface it is not entirely unfounded.

I don’t have much more to say about this that I am willing to type on my phone, I just needed to yell at the void for this

Originally written by user Lupusater on CYOC.

Originally written by user Dung on Cyoc. Gonna try to archive the few things I wrote on Cyoc that seemed to get any attention.

Originally written by Anonymous user on Cyoc. There was a branch here where Jeff became Riley's shower unfortunately it is lost as far as I know.

Originally written by user "No One" on Cyoc

Another lost branch here where Jeff became Eve's cock.

The start of the stuff I wrote there were some branches from here that others wrote but I think they're mostly lost.

So they're basically dumping problems on people they don't even know, who have no idea what's happening to them. Poor Sarah Smith and I Smith, whoever they are.

Jon might promise many things, but wonder if the others treat her as Sarah, and Sarah, while away from Karyn, also acts the bitchy way, Jon will imprint on that personality. Karyn might even confuse Jon with Sarah

Zoe really looks like a chip off the old block. Just imagine her in 15-20 years.

OK, I would love to give those a squeeze - from the outside or the inside.

I like seeing Sandra in makeup. Frosting on the cake.

Wow, they look about as different as two sisters could be.
But both beautiful in their own ways.

he ends up wishing herself what karyn wants, or to have what karyn did

Who is Jon?

Fun read and great bit of world building! Those Fatale sure seem like a carton of bad eggs and I feel like you're really going to end up giving a different meaning to flatfoot by the end. Let's hope our detectives can get to the bottom of this without having to cut out little ear holes in their fedoras or tail holes in their trench coats. And if they do... oh well. Forget it Jake, it's Chimeratown.

Inspired in part by a fun Discord conversation the other day. Thanks guys!

Trying to not let stories get stuck in editing hell anymore. Apologize for the mistakes. I'll probably revise it some here, but at least this way, I have to move forward. Hope y'all enjoy! I'll post some more ai slop on my da of this thought-line.

I can already see a rushed wish from Jon to be able to be closer to Karyn, ends up taking Sarah's place (bodywap possibly)

OMG, Zoe's mom is drop-dead gorgeous. The GOAT MILF!

My current plans just have her bouncing between Jon and Sarah, but that's certainly a possible take.

Does this mean she'd turn into a moody goth when hanging out with Jon's sister and her friends, or would she have to dye her hair blue or something for that?

This was absolutely hilarious

True words were spoken, now we see just how decadent -in both senses of the word - the modern conspicuous consumption usage, and the classical usage where an inner illusion or delusion becomes more valuable than external truth or reality. Life's hard and the Western Roman Empire's major problems? Drink lots of wine and have lots of sex, Roman hasn't been invaded in centuries! The French presently can't afford bread? Who cares about those inferiors. I'm spending all my time at the Bourbon Court in Paris, where the real people are. What do you mean the peasants are angry and are storming the Bastille?

If Susan McMillan was any more toxicly feminine, she's poison herself.

Special thanks to The Guest, whose version of the Susan McMillan vs. Denise Brewster feud in other branches provided much inspiration for this.

I declare this new direction to be sexy as hell

I'm glad to be getting back to Jon, Karyn, Sarah, and the Lake Point High School cast. I've got some ideas for Lake Point High School's cast coming up, though we'll still check in on the MTI cast from time to time.

Yay, welcome back!

Surprised to see a episode in “The future of gaming“ not by 1Ryguy1

Really loving the story as well. Glad you decided to pick it back up.

Hey dear, nice having you back. Hope things are better and calmer now. I really enjoy this series and I love the fact that Zoe and Linda are starting to lose all their taboos and are now eager to experiment with the new clothes. I noticed that almost all the time Zoe steps up as the dominant and Linda as the sub, maybe opening the way for a permanent change in their status quo for good. Still thrilled to see if you will develop more stuff about the place, the other changed persons and maybe Zoe and Linda family and friends in this storyline. Thanks for writing and have a nice weekend.

Welcome back to you, Mr. J! Hope things can stay more settled for you & great to see you back once more :-).

-Sje-

Sorry for the long break between the last chapter, life has been a little hectic lately.