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Welp, guess that's an open ending for sure.

A great story overall, and as any great story does, it too must come to an end.

Really?
You should take more, then.

I mighta taken to much Adderall...

Wonder with Jon not having the stone currently on him if Zoe will be tempted to use the stone either on Mikey to keep him and his friends under control or on Jon so things don’t get out of hand.

I edited it.

Would the next person in the cycle receive the stone immediately(after the first person in the cycle) or is it around six hours since it isn’t really made clear

I love your contributions to the site. I generated some art of what I thought Esme would currently look like based on your descriptions: with shirt, without, without and full body. If you don't want this please let me know and I'll gladly delete it, I just love being able to visualize creative authors' works!

(Wow, 2018... imagine if this was taking place in 2025!)

Wait... Is this... An ending?
Don't see a lot of those around here, Bravo!

This is a very fun branch. Excited to see what's next.

some of the best writing on this website.

This is really good.

Best branch!

As if the changes couldn't have gotten any more drastic... 😨

I guess that makes sense. "Being an only child" is a binary state and thus the only way someone could be "worse" at being an only child is by not being an only child at all.

It’s been longer than a week. Day 1, Jon tells Karyn about the stone. Day 2, Karyn becomes Jon’s dick. Days 2-8, Karyn thinks she’s always been a dick. Morning day 9, the wish ends and Karyn remembers she’s a person. Days 9-10, Jon and Karyn try to find a new sense of “normal.” Day 11, Jon reverses Karyn’s transformation, but Karyn realizes how much she enjoyed it. Morning day 12, Karyn makes a wish that makes her a penis again but only she remembers it this time. Jon also makes a misspoken wish and becomes Jen. We are now starting up on day 13, and Jon/Jen will not regain his/her memory of Karyn until day 19. But who knows what else will have changed by the time that day comes around?

Just for reference if you made it this far and are a bit confused:
Jon => Sarah
Sarah => Zoe
Zoe => Michelle

So, does that mean that Jon now has a better sister? Maybe he has two, excellent sisters to beat Sarah's one?

Wow, that was intense.

so confused, how long is a week in this world

Exactly

Why the bold? Just to highlight it?

I don't see how also being an only child can make Jon better than Sarah

Holy Shit, Sarah just fucking murdered someone.

Oh fuck

That might... actually just be a plot hole, now that you point it out. Huh. I guess when I wrote the English class chapter I wasn't thinking about having Sarah be aware of the wish, and then once I'd made the decision to go in that direction I realized I needed to put some kind of limitations so it wouldn't devolve into just Sarah saying random things she wanted to happen to Jon.

I think my canon explanation is that if Sarah unintentionally demonstrates a talent or skill or set of knowledge, then it triggers the wish. But she can't consciously and deliberately try to trigger the wish. Ah, the hurdles of just writing by the seat of your pants.

Interesting, so if Sarah says something about herself the wish doesn't trigger, but directly demonstrating something, like putting her hand up in the English class, does trigger the wish.

Really enjoying this branch, can't wait to see what else you come up with.

I've enjoyed this branch so far but still curious about Sarah reaction or Amber or whatever to the new hair and breasts. Are they driven horny or jealous or both nor neither.

Why doesn't hair ever get it's own hornyposting? It's basically the human equivalent of plumage, after all.

loving this!!!

I'm loving this branch

This is a fun little story. I look forward to seeing where it goes!

Hot. Will he use the device on his mom and Karyn in this branch? Maybe even Sarah?

Karen, of course, couldn't remember that the Remote had only been used on Jon, Sarah and Steve. Biff now also being a ballerina was an unintended consequence which could mean many things. Could it be that the remotes effect was contagious?

I wonder what would happen if Karyn goes over and Zoë is there? How does she react to Karyn's new endowments?

Same really enjoying these posts

Well thought out, well written horny posting is what we're all here for after all. And this definitely fits the bill. Can't wait to see Karyn get the stone with this mindset!

Hornyposting is doing better than I thought it would tbh

You guys really really like boobs, I should've known!

I am wondering where she was yesterday during the big promo.

Lots of questions for this one. Does he get both personality and memory or just personality? Since he essentially becomes a fictional character does other persona 5 characters also become real or will other characters also get persona 5 shirts/costumes for that? Does he gain her powers? Lastly, how aware will Jon be that he is being changed?

I'm enjoying this story. Hope to see more soon.

While gathering muse to continue the Kiyohime path I had a fun idea for another aspect to do this, got a fire of muse for it so I threw it up in case someone finds it fun to write to, course, I might come back around to it to, for now, back to muse chamber!

Thank you! Yeah I doubt I did a perfect job but I wanted to pick something less used, plus Caroline and justine seemed like a pick with fun options, like the use of the other costume on someone else since there twins etc... depending on how things go, what others write etc... fun things! I'm glad it caught interest

Interesting idea especially since I don’t think I’ve seen caraoline or Justine used for something like this before

Decided to place it here since with this it felt like it fit more! Also meant to remove it from the other chapter but that might take a bit since it takes approval, ether way, hoeply enjoyable! Going to see about getting antiehr start, then I'll be rounding back round!

I appriscte it; yeah I suppose I'm sort of a mix of quick/being seen, depend on how the writing mood takes me along with gradual mental stuff as it goes along. It all just depends how I'm feeling with it. I'm working on two other 'intros' with he cosplay stuff, then I'll be rounding back around to this one, so it's decently appreciated!

Glad you like it! I just posted the images so it's possible they were still loading, but I'll add the raw URLs here. https://civitai.com/images/104313810 https://civitai.com/images/104313792

And yeah, I know each creator does things differently. First image was more male crossdressing because I know some stories start out that way with changes over time, but I know other people intend the story to be so that other people always see them as that character or the changes are very quick anyways. But yeah if you do any costume changes I'll be happy to help with those too!

I actually do appreciate image help, as while there is quite a bit of images of Kiyohime, it can still be a bit hard to find exactly what I'm looking for for things, so this is nice and useful actually!

That said, the second image is great and I think I likely will make use of it, it does fit with what I'm going for. However I don't know if it's simply an issue on my end of things but the first image only returns a 404 error when I click the link to it.

But yes! I do appriscte the aid and I'm glad your liking the story!

Hey! I like the branch so far. I was wondering if you wanted any images for support. This is one for John/Jon wearing the costume.. I tried to make it as close to what you described. This one is just a random Kiyohime I generated. This was inspired by the yandere theme. If you like them, feel free to add them in the story. Or let me know if you want any changes to the images or if you prefer not using any and I'll leave you alone. Great story!

Glad to see someone adding to one of my favorite branches, and so far it looks really good.