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This redux of an old story that I couldn't think of where to go next with. So I keep the idea but took it in a different direction. H?opefully I will be able to keep this one going for a while.

You need to learn when to use were instead of was, it's a weird verbal declension thing in English, typically was follows the first-person singular (I), everything else is were, so, you were, we were, they were, he, she and it was, and I was, misusing it makes the character speaking sound dumb, also, you said were instead of where, apologies for this pedantry, I'm on the autism spectrum and this sort of thing bugs me. The story itself is fun, and I am enjoying that part of it.

Sorry for the short update. Had a little inspiration so I'm trying to get this branch going again.

This is good, but I don't understand why they got married at 16, is that even legal?

This was adapted from the continuation PF made but allows males to remain male and take on the role of parent in place of mother.

I have to tell you, this story (and the parallel branch) are low-key fantastic character writing.

I'd like to see more of this, an interesting premise, and I wonder how much they 'become' each other, is it only physical, or will it get to the point where they come full circle and Jon essentially becomes Karyn entirely and the same for Karyn into Jon, will the change reveal anything of Jon's true feelings to Karyn?

Some art I made for Jo's final look.

Some art I made for Jon's final transformation.

Some art I made for Jane's final transformation.

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You need to apply better proofreading to this, it's sometimes hard to understand what you are trying to say.

wonder if after the sex session jon is more like tiffany personality wise

Another storyline from Cyoc I did slightly rewritten.

It's the story "Abandoned" (https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/41065).

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I made this on CYOC

If I had a musical budget, I'd probably ask for this to be the theme to my cool-ass Bond-esque intro-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d1_7kpjHwdE

What do you mean what's my budget? What's your budget? How about I budget you?

Does anyone remember what the original story the author was referencing?

Interesting choice, it doesn't fit in with the parameters I set out, but I'm interested to see where this goes, maybe Mikey and Jon will get older and switch genders? Maybe this is a mutation of the original disease, it's a bit odd as they are not Sexy Sisters, still, you do you. :D

Comodo, I mentioned in the parent episode that the changes are mostly Physical, nurture based personality does not transfer over, now, it is possible that Jon might pick up on Sarah's confidence, poise and ambition, assuming these are part of her nature, interesting questions though.

This episode feels like the conclusion of one of those sci-fi/fantasy/horror anthology shows where the main character's deeds come back to bite them. All that's missing is a Rod Serling-esque narrator to summarize things.

Looking back on this now, I regret adding something about a sinister injection disguised as a vaccine shortly before a global pandemic.

Nice. Interesting to see which direction this goes

This needs to be continued! Such a good branch.

Hope you continue this branch

Will Athena be turned into Jon’s girlfriend/princess? I hope so at least

This is fucking awesome. Queen Consort Karyn.

I keep on thinking a lot about lifesmainantagonist comment on conflict since it was so viciously wrong to me that it compelled me to really think why I think it’s wrong. Especially since on the surface it is not entirely unfounded.

I don’t have much more to say about this that I am willing to type on my phone, I just needed to yell at the void for this

Originally written by user Lupusater on CYOC.

Originally written by user Dung on Cyoc. Gonna try to archive the few things I wrote on Cyoc that seemed to get any attention.

Originally written by Anonymous user on Cyoc. There was a branch here where Jeff became Riley's shower unfortunately it is lost as far as I know.

Originally written by user "No One" on Cyoc

Another lost branch here where Jeff became Eve's cock.

The start of the stuff I wrote there were some branches from here that others wrote but I think they're mostly lost.

So they're basically dumping problems on people they don't even know, who have no idea what's happening to them. Poor Sarah Smith and I Smith, whoever they are.

Jon might promise many things, but wonder if the others treat her as Sarah, and Sarah, while away from Karyn, also acts the bitchy way, Jon will imprint on that personality. Karyn might even confuse Jon with Sarah

Zoe really looks like a chip off the old block. Just imagine her in 15-20 years.

OK, I would love to give those a squeeze - from the outside or the inside.

I like seeing Sandra in makeup. Frosting on the cake.

Wow, they look about as different as two sisters could be.
But both beautiful in their own ways.

he ends up wishing herself what karyn wants, or to have what karyn did

Who is Jon?

Fun read and great bit of world building! Those Fatale sure seem like a carton of bad eggs and I feel like you're really going to end up giving a different meaning to flatfoot by the end. Let's hope our detectives can get to the bottom of this without having to cut out little ear holes in their fedoras or tail holes in their trench coats. And if they do... oh well. Forget it Jake, it's Chimeratown.

Inspired in part by a fun Discord conversation the other day. Thanks guys!

Trying to not let stories get stuck in editing hell anymore. Apologize for the mistakes. I'll probably revise it some here, but at least this way, I have to move forward. Hope y'all enjoy! I'll post some more ai slop on my da of this thought-line.

I can already see a rushed wish from Jon to be able to be closer to Karyn, ends up taking Sarah's place (bodywap possibly)

OMG, Zoe's mom is drop-dead gorgeous. The GOAT MILF!