Hey The_Guest thanks for rewritting my recent chapters. I actually like yours better. It's more along the lines of how I wanted it go anyway. I guess my version wasn't as well written as it could've been.
As I said, I really liked your entries and I can kinda see where you plan on taking things. I will have a look at adding to both branches. Meanwhile, if you have ideas. Perhaps you can post them here or email me and we can work on this together while avoiding any adjustments to the story.
