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I really like what you're doing here. Great storyline. Fascinating to see the effects of different magics interacting. Like Sarah stealing Linda's traits like a vacuum or black hole. Linda's becoming less "Linda" , isn't she? Well, I can't wait to see what happens next

This isn’t normally my favorite style of storyline, but I so invested now! I want to know where this story goes.

They’ll be settled again within the next few chapters.

I think the names at this point are getting a bit confusing.

This is deliciously evil.

Gives me an idea for something I was pondering for the 122 variation.

Guest: just covered them in the next chapter

Eleanor: Thanks very much. I have also have stuff on Writing.com if you’re on there if you want more of my stories. Link to my page is in my bio, always glad for any GPs on there :)

I'm curious about the two dogs and how they are doing.

Damn, your stories are very good, is there any way to support you and see more?

Lots of great stuff here! Loved the whole discussion between Kyla, Zoe, and Athena, and the added twist and turns.

The whole discussion about 'within earshot' definitely makes sense. It's a good theory on how that particular aspect of the Stone's magic works. The explanation Athena comes up with in this episode, that if someone at least perceives that a wish is being made, it still counts as 'earshot' even if they didn't catch everything and only mostly lip-read, makes perfect sense. Loved that 'Eureka' moment.

Yes, this one is a long one, but it was well worth it. This might be my favorite episode of this particular variation of the McMillan Triplets/Hidden Wisher story so far.

What if Jon and Laura went for another addition to the family?

Suddenly this story gets really interesting. It felt like a "standard" everyone becomes a bimbo but prostitute investigator Karyn is something new and I can't wait to read where it will go.

Really enjoying this branch, and curious if the wisher will turn out to be an established character or someone new to the proceedings. I noticed Stephanie isn't actually among the transformed goth's in the hall, so I'm curious if we'll see her be a part of things, even if she's not the wisher herself. As an aside, I was a little surprised Kyla was onboard to help Athena and Zoe, considering she seems to like her Swim life better than her Geek one. Looking forward to more.

I had no idea this episode was going to be this long, but honestly I wanted all these ideas out there and published before moving onto whatever else. Now, I sleep.

Not to mention she’s torturing all men for something that Jon did, that she liked no less. But really it was stupid of Jon to make that wish in front of her so that she was aware of it and really it was stupid for him to tell her about the stone or even be “friends” in the first place, she was oozing with red flags in the first chapter.

This is an absolute blast and a really enjoyable ride so far! Can't wait to see where this goes and I love your personification of the stone. Seems like you have a really fun character to play with!

Is this your first post on the site? It's a promising start!

We'll watch your career with great interest!

my iphone and windows computer both at the same time started on February 29, so it can’t be some browser issue (could my wireless router have a virus so everything using my wifi sees it screwed up?) but when I go to web.archive.org and look at old pages it looks right so that supports hypothesis it’s the site not me. But here I’m seeing a lot of asterisks and such. How did you make it bold anyway. The guide says an underscore makes it italics and asterisks make it bold but when I did it, asterisks made it italics and nothing made it bold. Well nothing shows as bold now. Just asterisks at start and end. All hard returns are gone so it’s all one unending paragraph which is especially hard when it’s a series of quotes and I can’t tell who’s saying what.

I see it as normal. Same as the rest of the site, actually: everything that should be bold is bold, everything that should be italicized is, etc. Maybe it's an issue with your own browser or smth?

But is everyone else just going to pretend that they don’t see it all as one long paragraph with none of the formatting characters being anything but appearing as part of the text? In the last 2 days something changed on the website and that’s how it all is. Do you see it as normal matisguy?

Sarah and Karyn need a Thelma and Louise ending in this one imo, tbh it might be too good for them

Wrote this one thanks to a bet on the Discord. Gave me a lot more trouble than I thought to write. Was in a very weird state of mind for most of it, honestly.

What a great addition! Love the way you wrote Jon 'perking' up before our eyes and doing a bit of social media training is a devilishly little fun idea that has me kicking myself for not thinking of something sooner! Amazing piece of writing, can't wait for more!

What happened to all the hard returns. It looks like every paragraph break on every page of the website is gone now. It’s still there in the edit page but it’s all one long paragraph when seeing it here, not just this one but all of them.

if it’s so intriguing why doesn’t Gary want to try changing himself?

I wonder how long Karyn calling Jon, Jon, in private will last? How will Jon feel about being called Sarah even by Karyn?

That's certainly a possibility. She still thinks she wants to tell her eventually, and share the stone again, but she's getting deeper and deeper and has no firm plan of when to ever do that.

I wonder if she'll reach a point that she feels like she can never tell Jon about the stone again, or if she's already reached it.

So, Jon is definitely being influenced on some level just by the sensations and feeling of her new body, and the wish to be able to access muscle memory is influencing that, it's not going to change her orientation. She's still attracted to girls, though there might be a few bumps along the road as she syncs up more with her new body. For that matter, Sarah still likes boys, and he's going to go through a similar process, the main difference is their willingness to embrace their new forms.

The other thing influencing them is Karyn's wish that they'd follow her advice on things relating to the swap; they're going to be unconciously compelled to follow her commands like we saw here with the instruction to lean into Sarah's mannerisms.

Karyn is definitely tumbling down a slippery slope in pursuit of her fantasy in this branch, and she's going to continue to do so. Things are going to snowball on her.

If Sarah's body is influencing Jon's behaviour... is he still into girls? Or is that just the "muscle memory" wish Karyn made?

It does make me wonder if there will be a clash between that muscle memory and Jon's mind if Karyn does get him into bed with her. Will he still feel male urges/reactions from his male mind and also feel female urges/reactions from the female muscle memory?

That first paragraph! Yeah... she didn't even for a minute consider that there might be another way to get what she wants, she just worked out how to do the fantasy she already had.

Wow! Just... wow!!! Might have been the hottest chapter of this website story. Amazing work with the pics and loved "slutty Biff" seducing the new Molly who is still adjusting to her new reality as a jock and testing her dominance. Thanks so much for writing this :)

Lucy and Sarah sex scene was great. I wonder if Lucy will try her luck with Robert in his new outfits too. It would be interesting.

Loved Mickey's new appearance! Wonder how Simon in Karyn will mix with Zoe in Jon. For now, Zoey is happy with his girlfriend Athena, but I guess Simon will soon get some desires of the old Karyn. Maybe not toward Zoey, but a lesbian crush ?

Hey. I missed you and this storyline. Hope everything is well with you, dear. And once again nice chapter with the great pics to go with the plot. So, I guess that the only thing lacking in the transformation now is the voice and a little bit of mental/relationship changes, right? That's cool. Waiting for see what you have in mind.

If he didn't want to be male, then why did he fight so hard to stay male?

Confusion about rude Jon, about Howard being there, or about the egg thing?

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Yeah, he'll be able to choose his swap as it happens. I wrote it that way so if another writer wants to change who Jon switches with, it's easier to split off.

Jon wished for his swap not to be random... but didn't say who he'd swap with... Is he going to get to choose at the time of the swap?

Yeah. I like the fact that she's clearly been thinking about the idea of Sarah's body and Jon's personality being her ideal so long and so much that when she had the stone she didn't even think about and discard other possibilities, she just made that one literally happen.

Oh, there were definitely other options to what she did, and she's certainly being selfish with the course she's gone with. Down the line she may indeed have to reckon with her choice here, and subsequent choices she's going to make. The stone is essentially absolute power, and we all know what that does.

Yeah, but it's a much easier moral case to make for altering herself mentally than someone else physically. Altering herself is her making a choice about herself, so I can't really see a moral objection to it, especially something like just altering her sexuality, where her "self" would remain intact. I understand she might not want to be straight, but like given she hasn't even told Jon she isn't straight... she doesn't seem comfortable being lesbian either.

The actual text of the story to me implies she just didn't think of it. Especially the bit about how she's tried to convince herself to go for Jon anyway. It's sort of an interesting blind spot, and if at some point she realizes that wishing herself straight was an option, it might make for some interesting character moments for her, since it's already too late to that. Especially if she tells Jon about the stone again, and he points it out.

Hell she wouldn't even have to be straight, just wish for a Jon-specific exception, so she's not interested in men, except Jon. That would be tricky to phrase in a way that guarantees what she wants though.

So, you're right that some of it is contrived for the transformation story, but her rationalization here is that she's trying, at least at first, to avoid altering people's minds as much as possible. She could also have just wished Sarah to be a nicer person who was interested in her, and wished Jon's unrequited feelings for her away, but she didn't. Morally speaking she's on a bit of a slippery slope regardless, but she's trying to rationalize and justify what she's done.

I wonder if pointing out that she could wish herself straight would make Karyn feel more guilty or if she would rationalize that away. Did she consider that? Obviously she wouldn't for the reasons of making a transformation story... but still.

Jon and Sarah's dynamic is starting to remind me of this ngl

To hell with it. I uploaded the last chapter anyway. Maybe sometime in the future someone will find it and care.

it’s not Biff that’s at fault for this, it’s Karyn. 100%. It’s like she covered him in fish blood and then kicked him into a tank of piranhas and then condemned and swore vengeance against the fish for being so evil for what they did next

Welcome back, missed this

You already got the answer you wanted but I have seen this several times actually. Not the bimbo mean girl thing but taking turns changing each other and being unaware of it. Just a few days ago I found one where Karyn turns Jon into a fox person and then he turns her into a horse person: https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/27046. Of course the root cause is further back with a magic pencil which leads to lots of different things. Earlier I found one where she ends up a thumbelina sized fairy and I don’t remember what he was or where it was located. I’ve seen this premise at least 5 times. Here’s another one, where Jon turns Karyn into a clown in a variation of humanity where humans are sexually dimorphic and women look like clowns https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/16165

I swear you guys are gonna give me the weirdest kinds of kinds if this keeps going. @_@

I kinda like how this turned into some sort of dark comedy at the tail end of the story.